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[size=5][b]Kriegswaffen Cyber Führer[/b][/size]
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[size=5][size=3][b]Lore:[/b] [/size][/size]"Jinzo" + "Kriegswaffen Commander"
Whenever you lose Life Points, this card gains 100 ATK and DEF. Trap Cards cannot be activated. The effects of all face-up Trap Cards are negated. While this card is face-up on the field, its name is treated as "Jinzo". Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can send 1 Trap Card from your hand or deck to the graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level-4 or lower Machine-Type Monster.

Finally, a new Kriegswaffen monster, and this time, I decided to promote Jinzo to command of the entire nazi robot army. For a while I've been thinking about making support cards to link the Kriegswaffen monsters with other DARK Machines, like the Jinzos, the Reactors, the Barrel Dragons, or the Machine Kings. Here's the first one, and I like how the drawing came out, especially with the army of stormtroopers in the background.

As always, if the grammar has any errors, please point them out. Please voice any suggestions if you think this card could be improved in any way. At some point in the future I might develop more cards like this, like a fusion of a Kriegswaffen tank and one of the Barrel Dragons, or a Kriegswaffen model of Jinzo's Amplifier.

Also, since I realize the original post was quite some time ago, the Kriegswaffen cards I originally made are [b][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/263121-my-first-post-also-nazi-robots/"]here[/url][/b].

Also if you aren't listening to [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w4OsS9VF-KE&feature=related"][b]This[/b][/url] or [url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DmJdh2n_a44&feature=related"][b]This[/b][/url] when you play this card, you're doing it wrong.

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Yeah, I draw all these with colored pencils. I thought "Nazi Jinzo" was a funny idea. The "gains 100 ATK and DEF every time you take damage" effect is inherent in all of the Kriegswaffen monsters. I could add another gain effect in addition to it, or a larger gain if you think it's a good idea.

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Well, it could be something simple like "This card gains 200 ATK and DEF whenever you lose Life Points" (instead of the normal 100 point gain), or something more like Shadow Ghoul where it would gain 100 ATK for every Machine or DARK Machine in your graveyard, etc. There are a lot of angles I could go with this.

Initially I intended his effect to be summoning more cronies to fight alongside him, while negating traps (added bonus is that he can be equipped with Amplifier). I just want to know if any of you think he should have more stat-boosting effects or not.

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[quote]Do you mean something like, "When you lose at least 500 Life Points, this card gains 100 ATK and DEF"? I suppose I could do that, if you think it'll balance it out. [/quote]

I think you can keep it as everytime you lose life points, this card gains attack. If you want to make it different, I think you should make it when ANY player loses Life points, it gains 100 ATK/DEF. Afterall, it's a trap killer so chances are you won't be losing much life points until it is removed from the field.

P.S: Very Nice drawing by the way :) You just earned yourself a +Rep

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Thank you very much.

The theme with the Kriegswaffen monsters is that as the player loses life points, they grow more powerful and tenacious. So with that in mind it doesn't make sense for any of them to benefit from the enemy weakening, though that does give me a good idea.

Since he's the leader of the entire Kriegswaffen army, I suppose this might be a nice effect to add: [While this card is face up on the field] All Kriegswaffen Monsters on your field gain the following effect: "When a player loses Life Points, this card gains 100 ATK and DEF". If the Cyber Fuhrer has this effect, it would mean that as long as it's on the field, all other Kriegswaffen monsters get a morale boost, etc. That could be something to work with if you think it'll improve the card.

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yo capt plaid check out your other topic i just posted there and i think this fusion is fine as he is

your "kriegswaffen" is good but because its not really a swarmer type set sort of help it make it balanced

and you should copy this fusion monster and addd to the other "kriegswafffen" in your other topic

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[quote name='captain plaid' timestamp='1328153457' post='5794775']
Do you mean something like, "When you lose at least 500 Life Points, this card gains 100 ATK and DEF"? I suppose I could do that, if you think it'll balance it out.
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something along those lines, but just 100 atk/def still seems small of a gain

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