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"Devarakhty The Existence Remover" - Divine


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I want to show you guys my most favorite card (my creation)
You can see the complete set of my Deck (i made it) in [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/277865-dark-renewal-finished-set-45-cards/"]here[/url]

Let's get to the point

[SPOILER=required 'Ritual Spell Card']
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[color=#0000ff][b]"Forsaken World"[/b][/color]
[i][color=#0000ff]This card can only be activated when there is no DARK monster on your opponent's side of the field and there is no monster with other than DARK attribute on your side of the field. Remove from play 3 DARK monsters from your side of the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 12 or more to Ritual Summon "Devarakhty the Existence Remover".[/color][/i]
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[b][color=#0000ff]"Devarakhty The Existence Remover"[/color][/b]
[color=#0000ff][i]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Forsaken World". As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot summon monster with DARK attribute. If a monster's attribute is changed into DARK attribute by card's effect, negate the effect and remove from play that monster instead. All cards whom destroyed in battle by this card will be removed from play instead of sent to the Graveyard. This card will gain 100 ATK points for each removed from play card. This card cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps, Spell/Trap effects, or Effect Monster effects.[/i][/color]


Okay that's it
I hope some honest opinion from you guys about this card, and you can comment anything which is still related to this topic as well, and don't forget to rate my cards okay :)

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You need to specify where you Summon Devarakhty from in the Spell. Nice, anti-dark effect but I think DIVINE can't be used, so I think you should go with LIGHT. But I think it can go OP'd since DARK monsters tend to banish, and this in a Chaos/Twilight Dragon Deck would go up to 5500 or 6000 ATK...Maybe 3000 ATK instead? or maybe only your opponent's removed form play cards.

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[quote name='{HQ}' timestamp='1330644530' post='5850611']
You need to specify where you Summon Devarakhty from in the Spell. Nice, anti-dark effect but I think DIVINE can't be used, so I think you should go with LIGHT. But I think it can go OP'd since DARK monsters tend to banish, and this in a Chaos/Twilight Dragon Deck would go up to 5500 or 6000 ATK...Maybe 3000 ATK instead? or maybe only your opponent's removed form play cards.
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hmm...why should i?
Ritual Summon must be summoned [u]from[/u] hand, except if there're some effects

see, this is the Ritual Spell Card of "Demise" (End of the World)
[i][color=#000000]This card can be used to [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ritual_Summon"][color=#000000]Ritual Summon[/color][/url][color=#000000] "[/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ruin,_Queen_of_Oblivion"][color=#000000]Ruin, Queen of Oblivion[/color][/url][color=#000000]", or "[/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Demise,_King_of_Armageddon"][color=#000000]Demise, King of Armageddon[/color][/url][color=#000000]". You must also [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tribute"][color=#000000]Tribute[/color][/url][color=#000000] [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Monster_Cards"][color=#000000]monsters[/color][/url][color=#000000] from the [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Playing_Field"][color=#000000]field[/color][/url][color=#000000] or your [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Hand"][color=#000000]hand[/color][/url][color=#000000] whose total [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Level"][color=#000000]Levels[/color][/url][color=#000000] equal the Level of the [/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ritual_Monster"][color=#000000]Ritual Monster[/color][/url][color=#000000] you are attempting to Ritual Summon.[/color][/i]

There's no need to specify the location of "the Ritual Monster" from, we all know that Ritual Summon requirement is that the needed cards must be in the player's hand (except for tribute) :)

It's still normal if DIVINE card's ATK points can go up to 6000 ATK points, don't forget the Lvl 10 egyptian god, Slifer. Its ATK points can go up to 10000 or more by the effect of some spells (which makes the number of cards in hand are unlimited) and the effect of its own card (1000 times the number of cards in the controller's hand). You should watch the duel between Yugi and Marick's underling (the holder of the Slifer before Yugi)


Anyway, thks for the comment, but please rate my cards, too. :)

[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330662579' post='5851283']
personally this card's atk is enough as it is

if you want to keep the atk boosting effect then lower the base atk to 4000ish or something

along with all target immuity, I guess it's ok, but seems excessive

you should have said spells/traps only
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Yeah it's enough, just like B.E.U.D.
The differences are just that BEUD is NOT DIVINE, yet this card is DIVINE, so that's why i think the effects of this card are enough as it is...maybe :)

Its all targets immunity resembles the immunity of all egyptian gods, take a look at Slifer/Ra/Obelisk. I copied its immunity from 'em :)

If it's just Spell or Trap, then the control of this card can be changed by the effect of opponent's Effect Monster, and egyptians LVL 10 gods are still better than that.

Anyway my friend, can you please rate my cards, and please visit my full Deck [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/277865-dark-renewal-finished-set-45-cards/"]HERE[/url] and don't forget to leave comments and rate. :)

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330678903' post='5851645']
sorry Confederacy, I don't go to finished sets much. I may change my mind in the future for this set, but for now, you'll have to wait
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Hmm...it's alright, but really, i knew that your knowledge about YGO is so much better than anyone else in this forum, so i hope that you can change your mind in the future. :)
And i can assure you that my Deck won't be so dissappointing :)

Anyway, how about my card in this topic? won't you reply to my previous post (my reply toward your previous post)?
And rate my cards, too if you don't mind :D

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[quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330679415' post='5851653']
well personally why I didn't want it to be immune to all card effects that target it is because it's just too much

I mean you have to remember that while it must be special summoned via ritual, it's still not that hard to get this onto the field..
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haha please take a look at the Ritual Spell Card of this DIVINE monster Summon.
The controller needs to clean their own field from all non-DARK monsters, and the controller needs to clean the OPPONENT's field too, from any DARK monster.
And last but not least, this card needs 3 tributes (which are removed from play instead of sent to the Graveyard) for the Ritual.

I guess it's quite a pain to Summon this card, so that's why i already prepared 1 Continuous Spell Card (which might be Forbidden Card) with the effect of changing opponent's monsters attribute, the price is half of Life Points for each activation (activation requirement), sounds worth it.

The easiest way to clean the field is maybe a limited Spell Card, yeah, "Dark Hole", cleaner of the monster's field :D

Another alternative for it might be another Ritual Monster's effect, "Demise", by paying 2000 LP, destroy all opponent's monsters, because the real pain in Ritual Summoning "Devarakhty" to the field is the opponent's DARK monsters in their field. Ritual Summoning this card might be a real pain in the butt when facing opponents such as YUGI (mostly DARK monsters). But kinda easy when facing KAIBA (less combination of the attribute of monster cards). Maybe what you have in mind is Ritual Summoning this DIVINE beast when facing an opponent such as Kaiba haha :D

But still, Normal Summons of Slifer/Ra/Obelisk/Dreadroot/Eraser/Avatar is so much easier than this card summons, i think :o
And somehow, i think you've got some points too

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