My First Card :) (hope its balanced enough)

[xxthe]

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Crysta, Chaos Master of Abyss
[Fiend/Synchro/Effect]
Level 10 [3100/2400]
1 DARK Tuner + 2 or more LIGHT non-tuner monsters
This card cannot be destroyed in battle (damage calculation applied normally), once per turn during your main phase, discard 2 card from your hand and 2 card from your deck, banish 1 monster on the field and 1 spell/trap card on the field.

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[Sckorpio]

it seems ba
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Crysta, Chaos Master of Abyss
[Fiend/Synchro/Effect]
Level 10 [3100/2400]
1 DARK Tuner + 2 or more LIGHT non-tuner monsters
This card cannot be destroyed in battle (damage calculation applied normally), once per turn during your main phase, discard 2 card from your hand and 2 card from your deck, banish 1 monster on the field and 1 spell/trap card on the field.

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P.S. : I'm rarely online
[/quote] it looks balanced to me.

[Astolfo]

[color=#000066][b]First of all, don't listen to above poster. He doesn't know what he's talking about.[/b][/color]

[color=#000066][b]First of all, the Dark and Light attributes required make it a bit difficult to summon, but okay, considering effect.[/b][/color]
[color=#000066][b]ATK is fine I guess... Lower DEF to 2000ish? Dunno.[/b][/color]
[color=#000066][b]Also, what if you can't discard 2 or etc? Then what? Or make it an optional effect (during your main phase, [i]you can [/i]discard 2...)[/b][/color]
[color=#000066][b]Otherwise, change the 2012 to 1996, XXTHE to KAZUKI TAKAHASHI, remove ADMXX, and change the LIGHT-002 to something like: (random 4 capital letters)-EN(random 3 numbers 0-9), SD(random 2 numbers 0-9)-EN(random 3 numbers 0-9), or (random 3 cap letters)-(random 3 numbers 0-9). But decent enough 1st card. 8/10

To mods: Apologies if this counts as a necro.[/b][/color]

[Strider Tigerwolf]

Okay. Just gonna get this out of my system but: NO ATTACHMENTS!

Now that that's settled, onto the card.

This card is of moderate summoning speed. Its tough to get out because you need a DARK Tuner, and 2 LIGHT monsters, but that can be accomplished in several ways (Plaguespreader + Lightsworns/Fabled/Random LIGHT monsters/Chaos Dragons (lol wtf?)/etc) especially since its a Level 10 monster.

Next is the effect.

[i][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]This card cannot be destroyed [b]by[/b] battle[b]. (Damage calculation applied normally).[/b] Once per turn during your [b]Main Phase:[/b] [b](You can) D[/b]iscard 2 card from your hand and [b](send/banish/mill the top)[/b] 2 card from your deck [b](to the Graveyard), (and/then/[/b] banish 1 monster on the field and 1 [b]Spell/Trap Card[/b] on the field.[/background][/size][/font][/color][/i]

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Those are some effect fixes, mainly for the OCG. It does take some time to get used to it (I know I had time to get used to it), but you'll learn [/background][/size][/font][/color]

[font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]ATK/DEF wise due to the effect makes it just nasty to deal with >_< It would be better to leave at 2400-2600 ATK and 1800-2200 DEF so as its not running over everything (even though it can with its effect).[/size][/color][/font]

[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Card structure in general: This card would be potent in Dark Worlds if you put "and" as the option in the effect part in "()" as the discard would be part of the effect. However, it would be tough making the deck run on them since they aren't LIGHT. Fableds may be LIGHT, and with plaguespreader they could pull some potent combos with this card. Its tough to bring out, but to some extent it can be worth it. Its actually a nice card, but if you tweak it just a bit more.[/size][/font][/color]