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My first try at creating some cards, and since I'm a big fan of minecraft; I decided to go with this. Any suggestions welcome. I'll probably edit them on the way. Plz let me know what you think! I'll probably replace the ingame pics at some point.

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This cannot attack the player directly. When this card attacks a monster, flip a coin. If heads, destroy both monsters before damage calculation and inflict 1000 damage to the opponent, and take 500 damage. If tails, destroy this card before damage calculation and take 1000 damage. When this card is attacked, flip a coin. When heads, continue the attack. When tails, destroy both monsters before damage calculation and inflict 1000 damage to both players.
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Couldn't find a nice bit blocky picture yet so if you find some plz put link in your reply!
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Not sure if it should be an effect card or not, plz leave effect examples!
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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 3 "Mob" monsters on your side of the field to the graveyard. While there are no face-up Spell or Trap cards on your side of the field, this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card has successfully attacked your opponent directly, change it to Defence position. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 2 "Slime Mob" from your hand or deck.
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If you can find a more blocky blaze (not an ingame one) plz leave a link in your reply.
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This cannot be targeted by the effect of Spell, Trap or Monster cards. When this card is attacked, flip a coin. If heads, the attack continues. If tails, the battle phase ends and this card is removed from play until the end of the turn. When this card battles a WATER monster, its Attack and Defence are halved.
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This card can only be Normal Summoned if "The Nether" is on face-up, on your side of the field. When this card attacks, roll a dice. When it lands between 1 and 3, continue the attack. When it lands on 4 or 5, cancel the attack. When it lands on 6, destroy this card and take 1500 damage.

This is my favorite together with the enderman and the creeper :D

Well.... let me know what you think.

It's late at night, or maybe call it reaaally early in the morning, and I made a few changes, probably gonna add all the other mobs this week, not including the Witherskull, cause I wanna know how it spawns ingame first (probably gonna be a ritual monster). And with school starting soon, i'll try to update atleast once a month (srry for no update before, I was on vacation). Gl and Hf!

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how do u get the cards on the page not attached?

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how do u get the cards on the page not attached?

What do you mean exactly?

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Sheesh, it's like there's no end to you Minecraft fans. :P Let's take a look at your skills.

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This effect's text is too small to read. Please post the text of very long effects with the card.

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Usually, it should be "Spell or Trap Card effect". When you move cards around, you need to specify the number, even if it's just 1. Words like Deck, Graveyard, Special Summon, Set, and Banish need to be capitalized. Hand is an exception. Effects that make one go through their Deck are implied to cause shuffling of the Deck. You needn't add it into the effect.

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...They're zombies. I'm pretty sure you can think of an effect for the walking undead yourself. However, I will say that the effects of Zombie-Types usually have something to do with giving you more Zombies, or have something to do with the Graveyard.

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Usually, when the controller of a card "destroys" a card, it's called "Tributing". Life Points are another thing you need to capitalize. I think you can justify raising the DEF and giving it some ATK since it's a Level 5.

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As you had in Mooshroom, you don't need to have "you" before "gain."

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Wouldn't it make some sense to relate this card to the other Slime Mobs? As an example, "You can discard this card to add 1 "Slime Mob" from your Deck to your hand" would be an example.

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I think you have a few line breaks in the effect text, because that looks really squished. Is the first effect applied to every monster? I'd think it's just this card, but you never know. You also have a few odd or misused words in this one. If you just want it to just affect this card, it should be more like: "While you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card can attack your opponent directly." The second effect is smart, especially since you could switch to Attack Position to attack, then switch back with the effect. However, it, too, is worded rather oddly. It should be "When this card attacks your opponent directly, switch it to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step." he last effect looks good, just remember to capitalized Summon and Deck.

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This is another effect that should be posted under it. I find it near-impossible to read.

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Doesn't really tell us anything if you don't have "The Nether" in here. :P You have a few too many commas in that first effect, and "when" should be "while". Also, try using "control" in place of "side of the field." Try "This card can only be Normal Summoned while you control "The Nether"." Remember, Phases also need to be capitalized. Use numerals (1, 2, 3, and so on) instead of spelling out one, two, three, etc. If you mean for that effect to only affect THIS card, you need to write "this card can attack once." "Each" is also a better word than "every" here.

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Again, please post the effect.

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See above.


how do u get the cards on the page not attached?


You should be able to click on the card image in the card maker, then copy the code that appears under it. Paste it into the post, and there you go.

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Not sure if it should be an effect card or not, plz leave effect examples!
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Well.... let me know what you think.

I'd say that the Mooshroom effect if fine, but gaining 2000 Life Points for activating it's a little much. I'd say just stick to the Special Summon; you're going from a great block to a good block that heals you. Just that enough makes Mooshroom a good card w/o being OP. I hope this helps!

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I'd say that the Mooshroom effect if fine, but gaining 2000 Life Points for activating it's a little much. I'd say just stick to the Special Summon; you're going from a great block to a good block that heals you. Just that enough makes Mooshroom a good card w/o being OP. I hope this helps!


Why the heck did I think Mooshroom was a L5? Agreed with this guy, 2000 is too much for a L4 to give you. I could see giving you 500 for it, but 2000 is far too much to gain from just spending a Normal Summon, especially when you're also getting an "intimidator".

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Thnx for the replies, I'm looking into all of them, I'll change probably the most of them. (also, i need a catchphrase, if you help me with that it would be much appreciated) :D

I'll look into the comments, and I'll correct alot of typing, it's been awhile since I played yugioh so I forgot how those basic things where written, and I couldn'f find my cards :D that explains that problem. Also, I am working on Ideas for cards like, "The Nether" whether it's going to be a field, or continuous spell. thnx for the [email protected]!

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IMO, I like these. (A plus for me being an MC fan myself too.) Most of my concerns are minor so I'll leave them out. But anyways, I'm looking at the cards and I thought, "Where is Herobrine?!" Come on man, add Herobrine. It's effect could be some kind of effect that revolves around "griefing" your opponent's field, something like that. Good cards, PM me when there is more!

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_________________________________________       ________________________________________________                    I have taken your imprisned body or Time.

_____________________              ___________________________________________________                Consumed be your impure soul.

There was no other option, you were a threat to our ascension.

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          May a deathly plague come unto you, old friend.

          No worries, I hear now it's quite the trend.

             And when you die, tell my dear to send to me.

             All this was meant to be, you see.

             None shall be left after my dark onslaught

             Not even a shall trot.

             May MY deathly plague come unto you, ...old friend.


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These are good but at the same time CREEPY!!!!!!!!!!!!! They're creepy because the art of some of them like the ghast and the creeper look disturbing. but still you have good cards
.infinite. is right. you should add wither, herobrine and the ender dragon.

These 2 cards are disturbing not to be mean but just telling you in case you want to make some changes
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Post the lore please, it's too hard to read on the cards.




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