LambOfTheGods Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/aH4Wm.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/qJq6X.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/VKGxe.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Pinqh.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/co4eQ.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/sLSX7.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/vgMTz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MP6X2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/wP56c.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/bwgVU.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zocbL.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/4SLlP.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vonclank Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Awesome work love it:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twilight Knight Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Al the synchros are greatly misspelled. The Dark Knight #2 is overly powered four a level 4 monster also it is a effect card yet it doesn't say so. Same thing with The Dark Knight #1. The wording in Reaper Reinforcements is very bad. There is no such thing as a "Undead" type. Also your synchros are over powered with DEF too, there also say stuff like "He is a very grumpy salamander" That stuff belongs in a normal card not a synchro. Also ypur synchros don't mention anything about tuners or other monsters. Nekoni The Samurai God is phrased like a normal card, if it was a synchro it would have an actual effect and mention something about tuners. There is also nothing like a "God Reaper" it also has the wording of a normal card like all of your cards. And Death Demon is a totally horrible card. First off, it is a effect card but it looks like a normal card. And Death is not a real type. In conclusion, all your cards are horribly misspelled and just overall stupid. There also overpowered with ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote name='Red-Eyes Golden Dragon' timestamp='1342252719' post='5977579'] Al the synchros are greatly misspelled. The Dark Knight #2 is overly powered four a level 4 monster also it is a effect card yet it doesn't say so. Same thing with The Dark Knight #1. The wording in Reaper Reinforcements is very bad. There is no such thing as a "Undead" type. Also your synchros are over powered with DEF too, there also say stuff like "He is a very grumpy salamander" That stuff belongs in a normal card not a synchro. Also ypur synchros don't mention anything about tuners or other monsters. Nekoni The Samurai God is phrased like a normal card, if it was a synchro it would have an actual effect and mention something about tuners. There is also nothing like a "God Reaper" it also has the wording of a normal card like all of your cards. And Death Demon is a totally horrible card. First off, it is a effect card but it looks like a normal card. And Death is not a real type. In conclusion, all your cards are horribly misspelled and just overall stupid. There also overpowered with ATK and DEF. [/quote] *spits cereal* Since when did you learn to make rants?! OT: What Red-Eyes said. Your cards are wrong on so many level that I won't even try to make a proper review. To sum it up: f**ked up OCG, horrifyingly OP'd ATK and DEF, wrong types and it gave me cancer. -90000000001/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twilight Knight Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote name='Dread☆プロイセン' timestamp='1342253383' post='5977584'] *spits cereal* Since when did you learn to make rants?! OT: What Red-Eyes said. Your cards are wrong on so many level that I won't even try to make a proper review. To sum it up: f**ked up OCG, horrifyingly OP'd ATK and DEF, wrong types and it gave me cancer. -90000000001/10 [/quote] I have always known how. Also what you said is true as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote]Rate my Deck 1-10[/quote] [quote][size=5]Rate my Deck 1-10[/size][/quote] [quote][size=6]Rate my Deck 1-10[/size][/quote] [color=#000066][b]No negative numbers? D: Oh, genius slightly shortened quote from Armz: [quote][img]http://gametechmods.com/uploads/images/87992WhatisthisIdonteven.jpg[/img] [/quote] OT: You need to check an actual Yugioh card, then come back, before you make another 'realistic' card. :/ The only realistic thing is the attribute. Seriously? At first, I thought this was a joke, then I remembered this is CC. ( ._.)[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelfore Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 These cards make OCG blind, grammar-less, 'Any Other Card' makers seem legit...painfully so... 'Sides, you actually try to justify your card making [s]skills[/s] trash with a second account. That's so pitiful, I can't even bring the good side of my conscience to feel anything for you. Leave for a month, learn the rules of Yugioh, play on DN for atleast a week, then comeback. Either that, or stop acting dumb. It's embarrassing. Good day sir! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanPark24 Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 These cards make my insides cry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SidewinderX7 Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [i][b]A Life For A Life[/b][/i]... Well, to begin with, your first card has horrible spelling and it's effect is just a terrible version of 'Pot of Greed'. However, that's okay, I enjoy that. Then, you don't even have a serial number... Final score for your first card: Effect - 1.5 Art - 1.5 Total: 3.0/10 [b][i]Bladesma The Gods Bladesman[/i][/b]... This is just downright awful. No effect, he's a Synchro for no reason. Doesn't even display his Synchro summoning costs and the [b]only [/b]redeeming factors of this absolute horrific card is it's [i]ATK [/i]and [i]DEF[/i]. Even then, this card has no deck synergy whatsoever and no value other than the [i]ATK [/i]and [i]DEF[/i]. The art isn't even good either. It's a picture of a what appears to be a Warrior, but the card says it's a Spirit, and to top it all off, it has no background and the artist signed the picture and you didn't remove it. I can understand why you wouldn't, but for the sake of a Yu-Gi-Oh card, get rid of it. Final score for your second card: Art - 0.5 Total: 0.5/10 [b][i]Death Demon[/i][/b]... Well, this is an 8 star "Death" type monster with an incredibly arbitrary value of 8000 [i]DEF [/i]and 100 [i]ATK[/i]. First off, there is no such thing as a "Demon" type monster. Secondly, 8000 defense is absolutely... Well, retarded. And the name is highly uncreative. The only factors in this "[i]realistic[/i]" card that actually share any qualities of being realistic are it's level and it's art. You're lucky I don't deduct points for just outright stupid card qualities... Final score for your third card: Art - 1.5 Total: 1.5/10 [i][b]Death The Reaper[/b].[/i].. Where to begin... Well, the art is decent. The effect is clumsy, poorly written, and contains [i]some [/i]resemblance to it trying to be fair. However, it has no serial number, the fact it's Synchro, but doesn't label the Synchro summoning conditions, has incredibly unjustified [i]ATK [/i]and [i]DEF [/i]and a star level that doesn't even make sense in any way, shape, or form is what really makes this card absolutely pants-on-head-retarded. Final score for your fourth card: Art - 2.0 Effect - 0.5 Total - 2.5/10 [i][b]Dekonsith The Reaper[/b][/i]... Ignoring the fact that there are two "The Reapers", he's a Synchro (again) with no reasoning for him actually being a Synchro. Has no Synchro summoning requirements even listed, his name is incredibly hard to read because you decided to use the 'Secret Rare' rarity type on a Synchro card is just frusterating. He then has 10 stars, but has an incredible '9999' defense and an effect that only applies if you have more of these things you try to play off as 'realistic' cards. Oh, and he has no serial number, but at this point, that doesn't even begin to matter. Almost forgot aswell, you didn't specify the type of summoning for 'Death The Reaper' nor did you explain from where can he be summoned. Final score for your fifth card: Art - 1.0 Total - 1.0/10 [i][b]Misherconmim The Reaper God Assassin[/b][/i]... Oh boy, I think this is my favorite. It's a 1 star monster with a defense of '9999', it has flavor text AND an effect (it's not even [i]good [/i]flavor text either), which [b]never [/b]happens in Yu-Gi-Oh. It can 'kill' two 'enemies' in play and then it itself dies... Wow. Oh, and it's a 'Reaper God Assassin' who is consequently a LIGHT type. Bloody hell, you didn't even label yourself as the card creator... The [b]only [/b]and I seriously mean [b]ONLY [/b]thing that I even remotely appreciated was the art, and if anyone has seen my reviews it's clear that I have a soft spot for art... Needless to say, this is by far, the worst card I have ever seen in this sub-forum. Final score for your sixth card: Art - 2.5 Total - 2.5/10 [i][b]Montonas The Summong Reaper[/b][/i]... Sigh... I'm just going to skip this one... I've already said what I need to say to your other cards that me regurgitating it would just be redundant. [b][i]Nekona The Samurai God[/i][/b]... I have a Warrior deck based solely around the 'Six Samurai' cards and so I was somewhat interested (at first) when I read it's title. However, roughly 0.2 seconds after seeing it's stars and the rest of it my hopes of a solid and fair card suprising me didn't happen. Again, not even going to bother critiquing this one, as I'm running out of room in my post, sorry. Final score for your seventh card: Art - 2.5 Total 2.5/10 All in all, this was just awful. This whole topic made me quiver with sadness. However, I try to review everything and do my best to offer insight so the creator doesn't keep doing the same mistakes over again. My advice, look at how Synchros actually work, why they are worth the trouble to summon at all, and how most cards aren't 12 star, over-the-edge with stats, and contain specific instructions on what the card does, how it functions, and how it is summoned at all. Lastly, refine your cards so that you don't end up with a card missing its serial number, the creator, and some uncreative crap-tastic effect that's so bland and overused it's sickening. (*[i]cough[/i]* [size=1]ATK boosts[/size] [i]*[/i][i]cough[/i]*) Be creative man, be fair, and be specific. That's some of the key elements of realistic cards. Finally, good luck with your new and hopefully improved cards and learned at least a thing or two from my review. I always try to be honest and never just solely throw insults as that helps no one. To anyone reading my review, sorry if I missed spelling mistakes or missed errors with the cards themselves, my bad. Anyways, this is Sidewinder, signing off. EDIT: Apparently I missed the bottom four... Oh well, I need a break now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LambOfTheGods Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Vonclank is not may 2nd account please I just started yesterday 6 hours straight I have about 8 more cards i couldnt upload since there was a limit.By the way thank you everybody for your input. I will try to make my cards more realistic hopefully. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minecraft R Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 all up i give it um a uh well a 3.5 because of all this [quote]Al the synchros are greatly misspelled. The Dark Knight #2 is overly powered four a level 4 monster also it is a effect card yet it doesn't say so. Same thing with The Dark Knight #1. The wording in Reaper Reinforcements is very bad. There is no such thing as a "Undead" type. Also your synchros are over powered with DEF too, there also say stuff like "He is a very grumpy salamander" That stuff belongs in a normal card not a synchro. Also ypur synchros don't mention anything about tuners or other monsters. Nekoni The Samurai God is phrased like a normal card, if it was a synchro it would have an actual effect and mention something about tuners. There is also nothing like a "God Reaper" it also has the wording of a normal card like all of your cards. And Death Demon is a totally horrible card. First off, it is a effect card but it looks like a normal card. And Death is not a real type. In conclusion, all your cards are horribly misspelled and just overall stupid. There also overpowered with ATK and DEF. [/quote] and also [quote][i][b]A Life For A Life[/b][/i]... Well, to begin with, your first card has horrible spelling and it's effect is just a terrible version of 'Pot of Greed'. However, that's okay, I enjoy that. Then, you don't even have a serial number... Final score for your first card: Effect - 1.5 Art - 1.5 Total: 3.0/10 [b][i]Bladesma The Gods Bladesman[/i][/b]... This is just downright awful. No effect, he's a Synchro for no reason. Doesn't even display his Synchro summoning costs and the [b]only [/b]redeeming factors of this absolute horrific card is it's [i]ATK [/i]and [i]DEF[/i]. Even then, this card has no deck synergy whatsoever and no value other than the [i]ATK [/i]and [i]DEF[/i]. The art isn't even good either. It's a picture of a what appears to be a Warrior, but the card says it's a Spirit, and to top it all off, it has no background and the artist signed the picture and you didn't remove it. I can understand why you wouldn't, but for the sake of a Yu-Gi-Oh card, get rid of it. Final score for your second card: Art - 0.5 Total: 0.5/10 [b][i]Death Demon[/i][/b]... Well, this is an 8 star "Death" type monster with an incredibly arbitrary value of 8000 [i]DEF [/i]and 100 [i]ATK[/i]. First off, there is no such thing as a "Demon" type monster. Secondly, 8000 defense is absolutely... Well, retarded. And the name is highly uncreative. The only factors in this "[i]realistic[/i]" card that actually share any qualities of being realistic are it's level and it's art. You're lucky I don't deduct points for just outright stupid card qualities... Final score for your third card: Art - 1.5 Total: 1.5/10 [i][b]Death The Reaper[/b].[/i].. Where to begin... Well, the art is decent. The effect is clumsy, poorly written, and contains [i]some [/i]resemblance to it trying to be fair. However, it has no serial number, the fact it's Synchro, but doesn't label the Synchro summoning conditions, has incredibly unjustified [i]ATK [/i]and [i]DEF [/i]and a star level that doesn't even make sense in any way, shape, or form is what really makes this card absolutely pants-on-head-retarded. Final score for your fourth card: Art - 2.0 Effect - 0.5 Total - 2.5/10 [i][b]Dekonsith The Reaper[/b][/i]... Ignoring the fact that there are two "The Reapers", he's a Synchro (again) with no reasoning for him actually being a Synchro. Has no Synchro summoning requirements even listed, his name is incredibly hard to read because you decided to use the 'Secret Rare' rarity type on a Synchro card is just frusterating. He then has 10 stars, but has an incredible '9999' defense and an effect that only applies if you have more of these things you try to play off as 'realistic' cards. Oh, and he has no serial number, but at this point, that doesn't even begin to matter. Almost forgot aswell, you didn't specify the type of summoning for 'Death The Reaper' nor did you explain from where can he be summoned. Final score for your fifth card: Art - 1.0 Total - 1.0/10 [i][b]Misherconmim The Reaper God Assassin[/b][/i]... Oh boy, I think this is my favorite. It's a 1 star monster with a defense of '9999', it has flavor text AND an effect (it's not even [i]good [/i]flavor text either), which [b]never [/b]happens in Yu-Gi-Oh. It can 'kill' two 'enemies' in play and then it itself dies... Wow. Oh, and it's a 'Reaper God Assassin' who is consequently a LIGHT type. Bloody hell, you didn't even label yourself as the card creator... The [b]only [/b]and I seriously mean [b]ONLY [/b]thing that I even remotely appreciated was the art, and if anyone has seen my reviews it's clear that I have a soft spot for art... Needless to say, this is by far, the worst card I have ever seen in this sub-forum. Final score for your sixth card: Art - 2.5 Total - 2.5/10 [i][b]Montonas The Summong Reaper[/b][/i]... Sigh... I'm just going to skip this one... I've already said what I need to say to your other cards that me regurgitating it would just be redundant. [b][i]Nekona The Samurai God[/i][/b]... I have a Warrior deck based solely around the 'Six Samurai' cards and so I was somewhat interested (at first) when I read it's title. However, roughly 0.2 seconds after seeing it's stars and the rest of it my hopes of a solid and fair card suprising me didn't happen. Again, not even going to bother critiquing this one, as I'm running out of room in my post, sorry. Final score for your seventh card: Art - 2.5 Total 2.5/10 All in all, this was just awful. This whole topic made me quiver with sadness. However, I try to review everything and do my best to offer insight so the creator doesn't keep doing the same mistakes over again. My advice, look at how Synchros actually work, why they are worth the trouble to summon at all, and how most cards aren't 12 star, over-the-edge with stats, and contain specific instructions on what the card does, how it functions, and how it is summoned at all. Lastly, refine your cards so that you don't end up with a card missing its serial number, the creator, and some uncreative crap-tastic effect that's so bland and overused it's sickening. (*[i]cough[/i]* [size=1]ATK boosts[/size] [i]*[/i][i]cough[/i]*) Be creative man, be fair, and be specific. That's some of the key elements of realistic cards.[/quote] not tring to have a go at you man but yeah those my reasons so yeah sorry man but i try and find mine in the forums here somewhere and look at my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Speedy the First Posted August 21, 2013 Report Share Posted August 21, 2013 What is this, a joke? The cards have no unity, most of the cards are synchro for no reason, and the cards that are not synchro are normal monsters that say they have effects. Most of the cards are types that are not real, and to top it of the art is burning my eyes! Read a rule book Before posting cards here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zaxwe Posted August 22, 2013 Report Share Posted August 22, 2013 Hmmm..... Lots of them are broken. Bladesma The Gods Bladesman) - Wheres The Type ???! + The ATK are overpowered Death the Reaper) - It is an effect Monster + The ATK are overpowered Dekonsith The Reaper) - It is an effect Monster + The DEF are too overpowered Misherconmim the Reaper God assasian) - The DEF are too overpowered Montanas The Summoning Reaper) - It is an effect Monster + ATK/DEF Are for a level 1-2 Monsters Nekona the Samurai God) - Its not an effect monster Okashi the salemander God) - Not an effect Monster +Reaper is not a relastic type you can change it to (Zombie) + the Materials are not showen in the synchro cards + Pics Needs a Background + Most of the cards are Synchro for no reason. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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