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My Armored Core (2nd Try)


White Glint 09

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Lets try this tell me what you think


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This card inflicts piercing damage.

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This card cannnot be normal summon, This card can only be special summon by Tributing 1 "Rank 9 White Glint" from your side of the field. This card is not effected by spells/traps regardless of targeting.

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This card cannot be normal summoned, This card can only be special summoned by sacrificing 1 DARK Machine, 1 LIGHT Machine and 1 "Rank 9 White Glint" This card cannot be destroyed by battle

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This card cannot be normal summoned, This card can only be special summoned by sacrificing 1 "Rank Negative 9 Chaos Glint" Once per turn you can pay 500 life points to destroy all other cards on the field and inflict 500 points of damage to the owners.

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Destroy all monsters on the field and inflict 200 points of Damage to the owners.

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Destroy all spells and Traps on the field and inflict 500 points of Damage to the owners.

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Destroy all cards on the field and inflict 1000 points of Damage to the owners. This card cannot be Negated.

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Search Your deck for a "Rayleonard" card

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Equip this card to any monster with Chaos Glint or White Glint in there names that monster cannot leave the field for 3 try's

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They Equipped monsters cannot be destroyed by battle. When the equipped monster attack negate all of your opponents Traps and Monster effects for the restof the Battle Phase

[img]http://i.imgur.com/KO4BQ.jpg[/img]

Fighting style is Similar to his teacher Anjou
receiving her prized weapon the MOONLIGHT Blade

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Technically, it should be Piercing Battle Damage. Also, why do these monsters have "Line Ark" as a Type? I haven't seen anything that even references that Type. I can understand fake types that have a gameplay-oriented point, but if it doesn't have that point, don't add it.

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I think you mean "Normal Summon[b]ed[/b]". "From your side of the field" can be shortened to "that you control". If you say the card isn't affected by Spell or Trap cards, it isn't affected. Period. No need to add that last bit on. Not being affected at ALL is a bit much. Maybe it only protects from effects that destroy or Banish?

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The word is Tribute, not Sacrifice. DARK and LIGHT are completely capitalized, and Types are written as Machine-Type.

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Again, the word is Tribute. Normal and Special Summon are Capitalized. That effect is WAY too much. 500 LP to destroy every card on the field is too much. You could at least make him unable to attack after using the effect. What do you mean by the last line? I think you're trying for something like "and each player loses 500 Life Points for each card they own that was destroyed by this effect."

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You need to learn to crop your pictures. You can use MSPaint if you want, just move the image around and shrink the borders until you get a better picture. It's generally frowned upon to have words in your pictures. Again, I have the same OCG complaint as on the last card. Same fix, too.

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Same thing as Chaos Glint.

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Again, Chaos Glint problem. The last effect should be "This card's effect cannot be negated."

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You capitalized the wrong word. :P Deck needs to be capitalized.

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The effect you're looking for is "Equip only to a monster with "Chaos Glint" or "White Glint" in its card name." You really need to work on your grammar. Try going to yugioh.wikia.com and searching for keywords in the effects you're trying to make up. You do realize you misspelled "turn", right?

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You can only equip 1 monster with an Equip Spell. :P That's just way too exploitable of an effect, honestly. Can't be destroyed by battle, and no Traps or Monster Effects? No, just no.

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Since this is the only Rayleonard card you have, you could just put Rayleonard in the name and keep ANOTHER fake type out.[/quote]

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[quote name='White Glint 09' timestamp='1342389351' post='5979266']
Alright thank you for the tips and your thoughts I'll start to work on theses soon. I'll be goon on vacation soon so I cant do them right away but i'll try. Also "Line Ark" is the fake type they have I just haven't got around to making the support cards for it.
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Okay, good to hear. Oh, btw, you do know you can just edit your post with new cards, right? Just don't want you to go making a "3rd try" thread.

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[quote name='White Glint 09' timestamp='1342428116' post='5979688']
I can? well i'll try that but just to make sure in the box were my cards are I just press "edit" right?
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Click "Edit" on your first post, and replace any cards you've changed with the current ones, then add any new cards in as well. Works like a charm. Make sure to replace the text of the fixed cards, too.

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