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STRUCTURE DECK: Revenge of the Planet (#1)


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[b][size=4]NOTE: I did not include spoilers because everytime I insert them they do not appear no matter how I attempt to input the code [/size][/b]

[b][size=4][color=#ff0000]Deck Lore:[/color][/size][/b]
[b][size=4][color=#ff0000] [u]With the Advent of recent wars and uprisings of ancient rulers the very Planet became endangered. In response from the very depths of its molten core arose its ancient Guardians, the Magmazers, Fiery Golems composed of molten Rock. They have one mission and one mission only... Purge the surface world of all possible threats. Under your command these creatures-though powerless alone,united under a common command are very powerful. Set the world ablaze and your foes with it[/u][/color]![endlore][/size][/b]
[size=2][color=#0000FF][u][i][b]* The rest of the archetype boosts Special Summoning Power, to stick to the Structure Deck Feel several monsters were not included[/b][/i][/u][/color][/size]

[size=3]The Magmazers are a Rock-Type FIRE Attribute Archetype with High DEF and 0 ATK. The thing is their most powerful effects require them to be in Attack Position. They rely on Special summoning themselves or one another to group together to dominate the opponent. The user however must tailor their decks to support these cards or they border on disaster.[/size]

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[size=3]Deck List Monsters in red are a part of another archetype of mine who's structure deck will be later released.[/size]
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[size=2]Custom Cards[b](17)[color=#FF0000](2)[/color][/b]:
[u]1x Geoblos
1x Geobeihr[/u]
[u]1x Gihnto[/u]
[u]2x Gargantos[/u]
[b]2x Gidahnn[/b]
[b]1x Gilnodd[/b]
[b]2x Ghyi[/b]
[b]2x Gahno[/b]
[b]2x Gurrodd[/b]
[b]1x Gamm[/b]
[b][i]2x Galel the Hound[/i][/b]
[b][i][color=#FF0000]1x Incendie's Familiar - Ozojo the Mechanic[/color]
[color=#FF0000]1x Ignis Familiar - Shaka the Valiant[/color][/i][/b]
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[color=#00FF00]1x Sangan[/color]
[color=#00FF00]1x UFO Turtle[/color]

[color=#008000]Spells(10)
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1x Gifts of the Life Stream
1x Super-Magmazer Gate
2x Techtonic Motion Device
1x Pandora's Box

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[color=#00FF00]2x United We Stand
2x Toll[/color]
[color=#00FF00]1x One Day of Peace[/color]

[color=#800080]Trap[/color][color=#800080]s(9)[/color]
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1x Armor of Flames
2x Volcanic Intervention
1x Magma Curtain
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[color=#00FF00]2xThunder of Ruler
1x Wall of Revealing Light
1x Spirit Barrier
1x Mirror Force[/color][/size]

the [size=5][u][s][b][color=#00ff00]C[/color][color=#ffd700]U[/color][color=#0000ff]S[/color][color=#ee82ee]T[/color][color=#ff0000]O[/color][color=#ff8c00]M[/color][/b][/s][/u][/size] CARD GALLERY

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Monsters

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[size=2][u]GeoblosLore[/u]: This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Banishing 2 monsters you control who's original ATK is 0. During the End Phase of your turn, deal damage to your opponent equal to the combined level of all FIRE monsters you control x100. While this card is in face-up Attack Position your Attack Position monsters cannot be destroyed by battle.[/size]

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[size=2][u]GinhtoLore[/u]:If your opponent Sets a card, you can Banish 2 FIRE monsters in your graveyard to Special Summon this card from your hand. While this card is in face-up Attack position once per turn, when a monster is Summoned from the Extra deck, you can destroy it. The controller of that card can pay 1000 Life Points to negate this effect.[/size]

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[size=2][u]GhyiLore[/u]:While this card is face-up on the field, once per turn during your Main Phase, you can Normal Summon a Level 3 or lower Rock-Type monster in addition to your Normal Summon or Set. While this card is in the graveyard you can banish this card to Increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters by 1000 until the End Phase of that turn.[/size]

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[color=#FF0000][size=1]*Artwork Credits go to: The creators and esteemed artists of the Duel Masters TCG(still active in Japan), Animators or One Piece and Eichiiro Oda,[/size][/color]

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Mmm.

Well, if you are trying to make a structure deck, the cards should be 1st Edition or Unlimited (no text), not Limited. Also, you should probably pick 1 card to make your Ultra Rare, unless you want to be like dragon's collide and pick 2. Otherwise, just pick 1. There are no normal rare, super rare, or secret rare cards in Structure Decks. Card Set IDs should have 4 characters, not 5, like your ERTCR cards.

For the structure deck itself, run AS a structure deck, it would be pretty weak, but then again, all structure decks are.

As for the cards themselves, Gifts of the Life Stream would see some serious play, especially in rock/stun decks. Its somewhere between Shard of Greed and Gold Sarcophagus. Good job there.

Pandora's Box is very OP'd. The card makes for FTK decks. Make it a trap, ASAP. Also, preferably make it cost 1 more card from your hand.

Magmezers is very balanced and good design. We need an effect veiler for Xyz Summons, and that is it. GJ there.

Overall, very unique idea with the deck and good work. You have some technicalities to work out, and some of your OCG is off (be careful to make sure you say "select 1 Banished monster" instead of "select 1 monster in your Banished Zone" for example, "Banished Zone" does not exist on official cards.) but the idea is what counts, and yours is great! Can't wait to see more.

Also, your card set ID would probably be SDRP-EN0XX. Just wanting to clear that up. :)

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At the time of creation I didnt have an actual name so I kept the initial Set IDs. Some of these cards are from different Sets. I forgot to Ultra the Top 2. Pandora is based off of Morray of Greed(Unlimited). So when it comes to that I can't completely agree.

Thank you for your ever-USEFUL critiques. I swear there are only 2 good critics left on YCM and that includes yourself :)

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will we be seeing a Synchro for this deck? ^_^ i see tuners here
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As for Synchros, I haven't an idea for any. My assumption is that (in real life situations) you would have to get your own Synchros.

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[quote] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=2][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] Pandora is based off of Morray of Greed(Unlimited). So when it comes to that I can't completely agree. [/quote][/background][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=2][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Wat. Morray of Greed uses up 3 cards in your hand (itself and 2 others) and gives you 3. This card uses up 2 cards in your hand (one is Banished, not in your hand), and gives you 3. Also, Moray of Greed isn't generic, this is. A 2->3 change is what is known as a +1. Guess what else is a Spell Card +1, and also is generic? Pot of Greed. And it is banned. So would Pandora's Box.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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