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I just made an Xyz card on yugico.com and I wanted to share it with you guys. Constructive criticism requested, and please remember to check out my mech beasts set next Tuesday. But in the meantime, enjoy!


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would love to review it dunno if its a dodgy link mate but i cant see your card for some reason

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Can you please post the card image so it is visible?

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Sure, gimme a sec

That should do the trick!

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still not coming up man :/ just post the eff,attributes etc and try the image again

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http://forum.yugiohc...ing-your-cards/

Use this simple guide to help you post your cards (although you have to use this site's Card Maker, I would suggest using Photobucket or Tinypic for Yugico cards).

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Ugh, why won't it come up? Lemme tinker with it a bit.

I can see the card on my end. Can you guys see it?

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Nope. If it doesn't work try creating an image with the icon in the post options and pasting the link into there, that always works for me.

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Ok. Sorry about this, guys.

Edit 1: I've posted a link that will take you directly to its card page. In the meantime I'll make a photobucket account and post the card from there.

Edit 2: I can't see the card on my end, can you guys see it?

Edit 3: Ok, I've posted the version of the image here and I can see it clearly. Can everyone else see it?

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Yes, everyone can see the image now. Thank you.

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You are very welcome. :)

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No reviews on the card? :(

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need to post lore it would help

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just 2 or 3 xyz material never seen a xyz monster with "x or more"
just say banish instead of destroy then banish it the same thing unless you have a reason for that but i can not see as any banish faries deck do not focus on destruction

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The reason for my "destroy and banish" is because many cards are activated when a card is destroyed. Banish is not the same as destroy. I don't want Shiva to be insusceptible to those cards whose effects trigger when a card is destroyed, but I still want the destroyed card to be banished, henceforth "Destroy then banish". As for my "2 or more", I want the card to be flexible in its abilities. It can be easy to summon for a quick n' easy clear card, or you can invest multiple monsters into it for a more prolonged reign. It's a new take on Xyz, I suppose. However, if "2 or more" is strict taboo then I suppose I could make it just 2.

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you are destroying your opponent's card right ? there would be no need to allow them collect the "destruction bonus" before it gets banish but if its use on your cards which would be unlikely just so you use the destuction effect

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If I were to put "detach 1 Xyz material from this card to banish 1 card on the field" then, technically, no, I would not be destroying a card. I would be banishing a card, and there aren't that many cards that can chain on this. Shiva would turn into a wrecking ball that carves the way for massive direct attack damage, and I don't want that for the card. Therefore,"destroy then banish" balances it a bit more.

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If I were to put "detach 1 Xyz material from this card to banish 1 card on the field" then, technically, no, I would not be destroying a card. I would be banishing a card, and there aren't that many cards that can chain on this. Shiva would turn into a wrecking ball that carves the way for massive direct attack damage, and I don't want that for the card. Therefore,"destroy then banish" balances it a bit more.

totally misread but okay

rating 7/10 maybe 8/10 but it's fine as is

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Do you have a constructive review to give the card? i.e., a numerical score for it out of 10, suggestions to alter its effect to make it more balanced, etc.

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