WeebYGO Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 I made a custom card set, focused on ninja's and Samurai's I tried to balance it, but if there are any errors or something, please tell me, since im gonna use this for my roleplays. [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Kha'Dra, Dragon of the Death] [img]http://i.imgur.com/VeUQw.jpg[/img] Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set.This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Down to the Grave". [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Bladesmaster] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MyFBq.jpg[/img] Effect:When this card destroys a monster by battle, return 1 Equip Spell Card from your Graveyard or Remove From Play Zone to your Hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant] [img]http://i.imgur.com/kRr3x.jpg[/img] Effect:You can discard 1 card to select 1 Spell Card from your deck, Graveyard or Remove from Play Zone, and equip it to a face-up "Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Master". Send the spell to your Graveyard during the End Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Master] [img]http://i.imgur.com/sJOQ0.jpg[/img] Effect:When this card destroys a monster in battle, this card gains 100 ATK and 100 DEF [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - The Assassin] [img]http://i.imgur.com/61ChQ.jpg[/img] Effect:When this card destroys a Monster Card by Battle, Banish it instead. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - The Infiltrator] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GD0QY.jpg[/img] Effect:This card can attack your Opponent Directly. During your End Phase, if this card is in Attack Position, Flip this card into Face-Down Defense Position. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - The Silent One] [img]http://i.imgur.com/cUHZp.jpg[/img] Effect:Increase the ATK and DEF of all Face-Up Warriors monsters by 500. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Shibuya Samura - Spirit of the Samurai] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ZSnLN.jpg[/img] Lore:Stories tell the village this samurai lived in got burned in his sleep. Now he is back for revenge. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Shibuya Samurai's Apprentice] [img]http://i.imgur.com/I7wHm.jpg[/img] Lore:This warrior is fueled by his own ego and rage. His master is Shibuya Samurai - Spirit of the Samurai. His only goal in his life is to let his master reach his true form. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [spoiler=Blades of the Archfiend] [img]http://i.imgur.com/zETng.jpg[/img] Effect:This card can only be equipped to an "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja". The difference between the equipped monster's ATK and the defending monsters DEF is inflicted to your opponents lifepoints. If this card is in your graveyard during your end phase, equip it to a face-up "Master Ninja" or remove it from play. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Down to the Grave] [img]http://i.imgur.com/gQe0r.jpg[/img] Effect:Every time a monster is destroyed by Battle, place 1 "Necro Counter" on this card. You can pay 10 counters to Special Summon "Kha'Dra, Dragon of the Death" From your Deck, Graveyard, Hand, or Banishment Zone. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Eclipse Scythe] [img]http://i.imgur.com/p6IzK.jpg[/img] Effect:This card can only be equipped to a "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja". Increase the ATK of the monster by 300. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, destroy this card instead.During your end phase, if this card is in the graveyard, you must equip this card to a face-up "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja", or else you must remove this card from play. [/spoiler] [spoiler= Hidden Power] [img]http://i.imgur.com/1BaIR.jpg[/img] Effect:Special summon "Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Master" from your hand or deck, and equip one card from your grave or hand to it. Discard one card at your next standby phase or destroy the summoned monster. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Ninja Castle] [img]http://i.imgur.com/nkq1p.jpg[/img] Effect:"Okinawa Ninja" and "Shibuya Samurai" monsters cannot be destroyed in battle. During your End Phase, you can pay 100 life points to send a card from removed to play to the graveyard. You can Fusion Summon"Okinawa Ninja" and "Shibuya Samurai" monsters using this card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Steel Chain] [img]http://i.imgur.com/y881L.jpg[/img] Effect:This card can only be equipped to a "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja." The equipped monster gains 300 ATK. If the equipped monster destroys another monster in battle, it is send to your graveyard instead.If this card is in your graveyard at your end phase, equip it to an "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja" or remove this card from play. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Traps] [spoiler=Second Heartbeat] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Zdo3y.jpg[/img] Effect:Select 1 monster in your graveyard and Special Summon it in attack position and equip this card to it. When the equipped monster is destroyed, remove it from play instead. During each of your Standby Phases, the equipped card loses 300 ATK and 300 DEF. [/spoiler] [spoiler=The Pit] [img]http://i.imgur.com/uxIyE.jpg[/img] Effect:When an monster gets normal summoned or special summoned, it is forced to defense position and loses half of its original DEF. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fusion] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Corrupted Master Ninja] [img]http://i.imgur.com/v8tOP.jpg[/img] Effect:Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja+ Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant This card's ATK and DEF is equal to the amount of "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja" and "Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant" in your graveyard X750.At your end phase, send the top 3 cards from your deck to the graveyard. In order to attack, you must send the top card from your deck to the graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Beast] [img]http://i.imgur.com/QrwaR.jpg[/img] Effect:Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant+ Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja This card cannot attack your opponent directly. This card can attack once again by sending one card from your deck to the graveyard. Inflict half of the difference between your ATK and the opponents DEF to his life points. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Ultimate Ninja] [img]http://i.imgur.com/PvG2d.jpg[/img] Effect:Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Beast+ Okinawa Ninja - Corrupted Master Ninja This card cannot be destroyed by battle. At your end phase, remove from play 5 cards from your graveyard. If you can't pay this tribute, remove from play this card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Shibuya Samurai - Demon Form] [img]http://i.imgur.com/a43dO.jpg[/img] Effect:Shibuya Samurai - Spirit of the Samurai + Shibuya Samurai's Apprentice This card can only attack by discarding 1 card from your hand.If this card destroys a monster in battle, it is send to your graveyard instead.This card cannot attack directly. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Shibuya Samurai - Human Form] [img]http://i.imgur.com/xEe2I.jpg[/img] Effect:Shibuya Samurai - Spirit of the Samurai+Shibuya Samurai's Apprentice This card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is attacked, it is changed to face-up defense position before damage calculation. During your Standby Phase, if this card is in Face-Up defense position, it is changed to attack position. during your End Phase, both players get 1000 life points. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - The Incinerator] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Tztcg.jpg[/img] Effect:Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters. When this card destroys a Monster by Battle, your Opponent must mill cards equal to the destroyed monster's Level. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - The Nightlord] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Y0Cu8.jpg[/img] Effect:Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant + 1 or more Non-Tuner monsters. Once per turn, you can Special Summon one "Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Master" From your Hand, Deck, Graveyard or Remove From Play Zone. Once per turn, you can Select 1 Equip Card from your Graveyard, Remove From Play Zone, or Deck and equip it to one face up "Okinawa Ninja - Ninja Master" [/spoiler] [spoiler=Okinawa Ninja - Tiger Form] [img]http://i.imgur.com/RodQd.jpg[/img] Effect:Okinawa Ninja - Master Ninja's Assistant + 1 or more Non-Tuner Warrior Monsters. This Card's ATK and DEF are the amount of "Okinawa Ninja" Cards in your Graveyard x500 [/spoiler] [spoiler=Shibuya Samurai - Beast Form] [img]http://i.imgur.com/WUnXB.jpg[/img] Effect:Shibuya Samurai's Apprentice + 1 or more Non-Tuner Warrior Monsters. This Card's ATK and DEF are that of the Synchro Materials. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted September 23, 2012 Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 Kha'Dra seems a little overpowered, if your intention is to make down to the grave summon it, you should probably say that it must first be special summoned by down to the grave. if you want the card to be dramatic, just make everyone amazed at the card when it appears in your roleplay, or have your character say its description. Ninja Castle should only be able to fusion summon ninja monsters. In today's world, it wouldn't be overpowered to have cards being able to summon other cards with relative ease. since your cards [font=Arial][size=4][background=transparent]revolve around the ninja master, there should be more ways to bring the ninja out[/background][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeebYGO Posted September 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2012 [quote name='AixDivadis' timestamp='1348363944' post='6030075'] Kha'Dra seems a little overpowered, if your intention is to make down to the grave summon it, you should probably say that it must first be special summoned by down to the grave. if you want the card to be dramatic, just make everyone amazed at the card when it appears in your roleplay, or have your character say its description. Ninja Castle should only be able to fusion summon ninja monsters. In today's world, it wouldn't be overpowered to have cards being able to summon other cards with relative ease. since your cards [font=Arial][size=4][background=transparent]revolve around the ninja master, there should be more ways to bring the ninja out[/background][/size][/font] [/quote] i dont see how kha'dra is overpowered, looking at obelisk, only 1000 atk and def less, but it cant be effected by effects. But i will change the card then. I will make ninja castle able to fusion Ninja and Samurai Monsters i think. I think that part is good, because ninja master combined with the equip cards and one of the synchros is close to immortal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted September 24, 2012 Report Share Posted September 24, 2012 kha'dra quite easy to summon, its like an easy to summon version of five-headed dragon, ways to summon it: sending it to the grave and using monster reborn/call of the haunted. ancient rules (special summon normal monster from hand). both requiring minimal cards. all you need is stuff to clear the back row (spell/traps) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 24, 2012 Report Share Posted September 24, 2012 Kha'Dra: Its not broken in fact it is the exact opposite its not useful at all. It does nothing but sit on the field or in your hand and isn't immune to anything. If given the option no skilled player would ever choose to use it. Ninja Master: So with 1000 attack and defense what exactly is it going to kill? Apprentice: Well behind blade master that is the best monster by far which is funny because he is great only because of the uses outside of this deck/archetype Blades: see Ninja Master Scythe: See Blades Hidden Power: Okay this is getting repetitive...Ninja master is bad all this support still makes him bad Castle: Maybe its because I had to sit through that ninja master support stuff but this is actually good I like it. Should be worded differently but yeah. Chain: *sigh* See scythe though I like that whole bring to your graveyard thing its cute. Heartbeat: No such thing as an equip trap card (see Kunai with Chain for reference) Pit: That's just not useful Beast: Wait it can attack directly twice and the cost is a controlled mill? Nope that's too powerful the second attack part has to go. Demon Form: Overpowered an easily summonable beaststick that can cause massive calamity with skill drain. Nightlord: See all other Ninja Master support and Ninja Master. Okay so the set is blah...its not overpowered because most of your monsters are simply rewritten versions of other existing cards. Ninja Master sucks, like bad, he can't kill anything and his only saving grace would be that you have to commit so many resources to him which isn't worth it when you look at the beautiful blademaster. Third there is a litany of OCG errors I advise you go read a tutorial on the matter and we can revisit this issue later. For now a lot of your card are just grammatically incorrect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted September 25, 2012 Report Share Posted September 25, 2012 kha'dra doesn't really do much in this deck, but in a dragon deck it is really good. when your opponent has no traps available, kha'dra can easily make an otk look at five-headed dragon, its hard to get out and has no real immunity except with battle. kha'dra is a much easier summon version of him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KindredTether Posted September 26, 2012 Report Share Posted September 26, 2012 [quote name='CharlesScene' timestamp='1348342917' post='6029805'] [spoiler=Shibuya Samura - Spirit of the Samurai] [img]http://i.imgur.com/ZSnLN.jpg[/img] Lore: Stories tell the village this samurai lived in got burned in his sleep. Now he is back for revenge. [/spoiler] [/quote] Really? >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted September 26, 2012 Report Share Posted September 26, 2012 [quote name='AixDivadis' timestamp='1348600176' post='6031914'] kha'dra doesn't really do much in this deck, but in a dragon deck it is really good. when your opponent has no traps available, kha'dra can easily make an otk look at five-headed dragon, its hard to get out and has no real immunity except with battle. kha'dra is a much easier summon version of him [/quote] Okay Five is always better than that thing for a litany of reasons.[list=1] [*]Five Head can be brought back by REDMD [*]Five Head can be special summoned with Dragon's Mirror and dragon's mirror doesn't have this horribly long wait time on it. [*]Dragon's Mirror is a normal spell meaning it doesn't auto loose to MST [*]Five Head has an effect. [*]Five Head doesn't take up a slot in the main deck which is great when making consistent dragon decks. [*]Dragon's Mirror has more than one target [*]Five Head can kill this thing (well that's really an extension of point number 4 but still) [*]Five Head looks better. [/list] And there you have it. Yes with no traps a lot of dragons could OTK its what they do. Now the question you should ask yourself is count the number of times dragons actually kill things by battle. Unless its some token spamming stall by dead monster number #6 one of the fighting parties should be dead. Its so impractical its disturbing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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