Sora1499 Posted October 31, 2012 Report Share Posted October 31, 2012 Just a couple cards Chaos Dragons might want to play with... Teehee. They're definitely not my best work (they're fricken BROKEN!!!!), but f*** it, I'll see what you guys think. [img]http://i.imgur.com/dnaD8.jpg[/img] Lore: Cannot be normal summoned or set. Must first be special summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 LIGTH and 1 DARK monster from your graveyard. Whenever a card(s) are banished: gain 500 LP for each, then you can add 1 of your banished monsters to your hand. [img]http://i.imgur.com/esmoZ.jpg[/img] Lore: Cannot be normal summoned or set. Can only be special summoned (from the hand) by banishing 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your graveyard. Once per turn: You can banish 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your graveyard; target 1 card on the field, and banish it. This card cannot declare an attack during a turn in which you used this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SynchroTuner Posted November 12, 2012 Report Share Posted November 12, 2012 Well.... I completely agree to you on the point of the cards being broken because they are. I loved the names since i think(not sure) that you referred to Ra and Apophis (Egyptian mythology) which were Order and Chaos respectively... Master of Order is like a monster version of Soul Absorption with an extra recycling effect. Necroface would give 5000 LP to you when banished. With Soul Absorption in play as well, its 10000 gain. Macro Cosmos would also help the LP gaining effect lots. OCG error- "Whenever a card(s) [b]are[/b] banished: gain 500 LP..." should be- "Whenever a card(s) [b]is[/b] banished: gain 500 LP..." Not sure if you meant it to be like that, but the way it's worded, you would add a banished monster to your hand even if only your opponent's card was banished. Chaos's effect seems great when used with Order and they work together quite well, gaining 1500 each time Chaos's effect activates and also getting to add 1 banished monster to hand. Highly broken(Order can be Special Summoned if Summoned properly first?!?!?!?!) but nice. Order's effect would have matched if its type was Spellcaster rather than Warrior. Cool cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HellIsForOtherPeople Posted November 13, 2012 Report Share Posted November 13, 2012 Firstly, may I just say congratulations for making some splendidly cool cards, but also for breaking them beyond the constraints of human comprehension. I won't penalise you for this, as you were good enough to be honest about your intentions, so let's move swiftly on. I have no criticisms for the images used- both are appropriate and fit the Yu-Gi-Oh lore quite well. However, I do have some concerns about your OCG. I understand I'm being rather pedantic about this, but it is a necessary feature of a good card. Lines such as '[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Cannot be normal summoned or set'[/background][/size][/font][/color] require amendment to 'This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set' (minor, I know, but it is still correct OCG)- this is also true for '[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]You can banish 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your graveyard; target 1 card on the field, and banish it[/background][/size][/font][/color][font="times new roman, times, serif"], [font=tahoma,geneva,sans-serif]which should read 'You may banish 1 LIGHT and 1 DARK monster from your Graveyard to banish 1 card on the Field'. I fully appreciate I am being a bit of an arse, but the truth is OCG remains an important element to consider when creating a card. I apologise for my tighter criticisms here.[/font][/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]Otherwise, both cards are well-conceived, original ideas that do exactly what they say on the tin. Other than the points I've touched on above, well done.[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]Yours,[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]HellIsForOtherPeople[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]Originality: 8/10[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]Images: 9/10[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]OCG: 7/10[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]Card Balancing: N/A (Didn't think I should mark this, considering how you confess they are overpowered.[/font] [font=tahoma, geneva, sans-serif]Total Score: 24/30[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted November 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2012 @Hells Actually, you're referring to the previous-gen OCG. The new OCG is a good deal different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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