LeguBrit Posted November 28, 2012 Report Share Posted November 28, 2012 [url="http://yugico.com/user/35254-S-Jam/card/35941-Random_Cards_I_felt_like_making/144914-Fabled_Shaokko"][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/144914.jpg[/img][/url] Lore: 1 "Fabled" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can discard up to 2 cards from your hand; Return 1 card opponent controls to their hand for each card you discarded. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can Draw 1 card, then discard 1 card. Rate/Hate/COMMENT. All that matters to me is the opinions of others . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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SynchroTuner Posted November 30, 2012 Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 The card itslef is pretty good, atk is fine thoough you might want to make the def 2000. IMO The effect is like a one time x3 Brionac, and it was banned for a reason. Can return strong cards like Stardust, Zenmaines, Five Headed Dragon and also lockdown traps like decree. Might want to change that effect to just 2 cards. Plus, you get a ton of effects from discarding the monsters. Also, usually fabled synchros have a way to increase the hand advantage, not decrease it but, the problem is that this card gives you a big disadvantage for hand. But, it sets up your graveyard from where you will be working anyways in a fabled deck. The last part is fine, though i think that is used pretty much and it gives you the effect only once. You can change it to something like "When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: Draw 1 card." or "Once per turn: discard 1 card; Draw 1 card" which will also give you a chance to set up your grave, discard a card and draw. Love the picture which is great, showing light and fiend both very well. OCG fixes- I haven't included my suggestions but your card only.- 1 "Fabled" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can discard up to 3 cards from your hand; Return 1 card opponent controls to their hand for each card you discarded. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Draw 1 card. My suggestion- 1 "Fabled" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: You can discard up to 3 cards from your hand; Return 1 card opponent controls to their hand for each card you discarded. If this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can activate this card's effect; Draw 1 card, then discard 1 card. I would give the card an 8.6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeguBrit Posted November 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 Hmm... K then, I'll make the changes. Thanks for the review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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