epicmemesbro Posted March 23, 2013 Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 Comment, and please give suggestions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-1 Posted March 24, 2013 Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 If possible, you may want to do something about the plain white or black backgrounds on your pictures. The one for Deadpool also looks pixilated. He doesn't appreciate that, and demands a better picture for himself. You may want to correctly spell "Optimus Prime" so "Autobot Icon" affects the correct monster. You could also open it up to Special Summon a lesser Autobot with fewer cards tributed. For "Deadpool," 3000 ATK and 3000 DEF is overpowered, especially since you have him only as a Level 8 monster and you have a recycling effect for him (which, considering "Monster Reborn" and other Spells and Traps, may not be to your advantage). You can either lower his stats or raise his Level, because even Deadpool isn't matching well against "Blue Eyes White Dragon." Also, while you don't need to put the reason for an effect on a card (and since when has reason done anything for Deadpool?), you should be able to tell from where an effect comes. So far as I know, Deadpool simply cannot die, and is insane. Oh, and he breaks the fourth wall, so maybe an effect where he looks at covered cards would be better for him. A good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
epicmemesbro Posted March 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 If possible, you may want to do something about the plain white or black backgrounds on your pictures. The one for Deadpool also looks pixilated. He doesn't appreciate that, and demands a better picture for himself. You may want to correctly spell "Optimus Prime" so "Autobot Icon" affects the correct monster. You could also open it up to Special Summon a lesser Autobot with fewer cards tributed. For "Deadpool," 3000 ATK and 3000 DEF is overpowered, especially since you have him only as a Level 8 monster and you have a recycling effect for him (which, considering "Monster Reborn" and other Spells and Traps, may not be to your advantage). You can either lower his stats or raise his Level, because even Deadpool isn't matching well against "Blue Eyes White Dragon." Also, while you don't need to put the reason for an effect on a card (and since when has reason done anything for Deadpool?), you should be able to tell from where an effect comes. So far as I know, Deadpool simply cannot die, and is insane. Oh, and he breaks the fourth wall, so maybe an effect where he looks at covered cards would be better for him. A good start. How about I make "Deadpool" a synchro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xi-1 Posted March 24, 2013 Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 Up to you, since it's your set and you probably have a better sense for him than I do. Just make sure that the Tuner and Material Monster you can use for him... makes sense. I kind of hesitate to use such a phrase with that guy, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathdwarf Posted March 25, 2013 Report Share Posted March 25, 2013 This mixture of shooters, Star Wars and Transformers looks a bit odd to me, but overall I like the cards even though you made yourself OP xD Btw: For Marathon the card should say: Level 4 and below. Under has more a localized meaning I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.