Ren✧ Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 Just saw that Renegade was accepted! Congrats dude!! ^^ Thanks bro! I'm sure you will be joining me soon enough :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 Well I was accepted in the last one...hopefully it'll happen in this one too ^^; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 15, 2013 Report Share Posted April 15, 2013 Well I was accepted in the last one...hopefully it'll happen in this one too ^^; My thoughts exactly! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2013 2nd App review: Chaos Sonic.Bog standard application was my skim read reaction. Not a bad thing, you did your job in creating the app. It obviously is finished and that means you've done this to a tee.His name, age, and sex qualify.His personality is, indeed, a staple. He's your level-headed guy. Naturally a trope, but never a bad thing. In a War orientated Role-play, you will find that the reasonable one is a very vital role. Will be nice to bounce off against the reckless muchacho that is Renegade's character.His appearance is approved.There are issues apparent in his Combat Information: you state he has a Dragon Fang, taken from a Dragon fight in the past: how far back in the past was this? Also, was this during his time training? Also, regarding the Sword Dance, your character is the 1st generation of Vanguard that has actually been called upon. Not sure if this is relevant. Otherwise, he's fine. I love his units!His other information is very interesting. Overall, he's a good character, and I'm content with him.Please answer the given questions, as this will allow me to determine whether I can accept your app or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 16, 2013 Report Share Posted April 16, 2013 1st Answer: The Dragon Fang was brought upon when Ryujin fought an enemy dragon a long time ago. More specifically, this is a very distant past event. 2nd Answer: No it wasn't during the training. 3rd Answer: I did not know this, and am willing to fix the Sword Dance description if need be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2013 Your character is accepted. All you need to do is pay the participation fee and, when IC-ed, you'll be ready to role-play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 17, 2013 Report Share Posted April 17, 2013 CONGRATS! Sonic, although I never had any doubts ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2013 In this moment, Leon Artaxes is finished and completed. Tomorrow, App reviews will continue, hopefully with Thar and Aisu's apps to do. The next day we will have IC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 18, 2013 Report Share Posted April 18, 2013 Thanks Renegade ^^ And lets hope so, that way we can get this going =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2013 Special Days make things difficult to do.Anyway, Loki is in. Aisu is still a WIP, but I will start working on the IC post in trust that she'll have it done in 48-ish hours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 19, 2013 Report Share Posted April 19, 2013 Sweetness. I'll be sure to not skip over any important text like last time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2013 Loki, there's no real need for me to over-eval your application. I like it, she's a chick and thus gives a good gender mix, so I-ma gonna say yes indefinitely.IC is up, Aisu will have to catch up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 Is Genzai really that boring Renegade? ;~; XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 Is Genzai really that boring Renegade? ;~; XD Hahaha, of course not. Just trying to create some dramatic tension, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 xD Figures It was lulzy though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 So... do our characters know each other or are we meeting up for the first time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 I haven't got the points, but it says that you'll consider those who dont. But here's my app: Name: Karen Alsiev Age: 28 Appearance: Karen is slender with auburn hair that falls to about her shoulders with Dire Crow feathers braided in it. She dresses simply in a black T-shirt and black jeans. Personality: Karen is a serious girl who is intensely loyal to her friends and deadly to her enemies. She will do anything for a friend, one of her few weaknesses. She was chosen as Quetzalcoatl's vanguard for her fierce determination to keep her friends safe. God: Quetzalcoatl, the Feathered Serpent Equipment: One handed Maquahuitl Sacrificial Dagger Techniques: Dual Sky Blades: Karen leaps into the air and delivers 3 slashes: 2 strong blows with the Maquahuitl and a thrust towards the chest with the dagger Serpent's Bite: a blinding strike with the Maquahuitl followed by a sharp punch to the rib cage. Shield Crush: Karen delivers a crushing blow designed to break through her opponents defenses. Can someone give me some ideas on units? And I'll happily give up as many points as I can so you know I'll stick around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 Loki, I would think they would know each other, but in truth the time with other Vanguards would be determined by your Patron God's wishes: would you think Hermes would want Beth socializing with the other Vanguards? ThorgrimZz, I apologize but I will not be accepting your application any time soon. Not only have you gone against the restriction that you cannot Vanguard a King of the Gods, which Quetzalcoatl is classed as, you also removed areas in the application form I deemed not permitted for removal. In addition to this, you have no Other Information which prompts me to believe you're not that interested in fleshing out a character, and the level of detail is less than convincing for me to allow you to play at this current stage in time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 I'm sorry... I was not aware that Quetzacoatl was classified as a king of the gods. And what areas did I remove if I may ask Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 22, 2013 Report Share Posted April 22, 2013 Oh Quillan isn't the only one who is like that ;3 However, Genzai knows when he should show interest and when not to ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2013 I'm sorry... I was not aware that Quetzacoatl was classified as a king of the gods. And what areas did I remove if I may ask You were missing Sex and Inventory Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 23, 2013 Report Share Posted April 23, 2013 I keep forgetting that not everyone has an air unit. @Loki/Thar/Admin4(which do you prefer?): Would you like for Quillan to offer a ride? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted April 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2013 No worries Renegade. Leon will be marching on the ground, rather than serving the distraction; it is up to you if you wanna take out the Jotunn. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted April 24, 2013 Report Share Posted April 24, 2013 Well I can have Genzai order either a small slip up for these Jotunn (from Ice) or maybe have Zeri shock em ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted April 24, 2013 Report Share Posted April 24, 2013 Flying in above a league of giants? Sounds like something Quillan would do. How many of them are there exactly? And are they in the front or the back of the army? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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