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Based on the novel Clay's Ark, by Octavia Butler

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Not sure which version of this I should go with.

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Aaaaaand it's me again, I took quite some time reviewing this archetype. Gonna do a individual on this one. 

 

REVIEW:

 

MONSTERS:

 

Eli, Survivor of the Ark: I see no problem on this card. Though I think the wording should be (I only know the basic OCG's so may still be wrong) "At the End Phase of the turn that this card is Summoned: Treat this card as Reptile-type. Once while this card is face-up on the field: You can take control of 1 Reptile-type monster your opponent controls, it cannot declare an attack.

 

Blake of the Ark- I'm just wondering whether the tributing requirement for this card to be Summoned from the Graveyard can be from your side only or as well the opponent's side? Other than that. I see no problem with this card.

 

Rane of the Ark- Ok, out of all the cards I've seen from this archetype. This card poses to be quite OP, as it can be easily summoned. Though it fairs the same with the Attribute Reptile cards, only this is locked to destroy Reptiles only. I still think it can be summoned too easily for it's great effect. Perhaps make it harder to summon on the field?

 

Keira of the Ark- No problem with this card.

 

Jacob, Legacy of the Ark- No problem.

 

Ingraham of the Ark- I think this card is good but, I think you should make to "If the only monsters your opponent control are Reptile-type monsters" than "If your opponent controls a Reptile-type monster" to balance it reborn effect. Though it doesn't seem too necessary but i think it would be better that way

 

Meda of the Ark- Very simple yet that makes it very beautiful. <3

 

Lupe of the Ark & Lorene of the Ark- Nice job on this card. It's nice but errrm...they both have the same effs? 

 

Kaneshiro of the Ark- Nice job on this one. It's not OP cause you specifically made its eff to activate when it's out of the field and not a Once per turn effect.

 

Gwyn of the Ark- Lovely reborn effect. May lead to a nice nice swarm <3 and it's not that  OP imo either. Nice.

 

Alana of the Ark- I think this card is good too but I'm a bit bothered that it seems to do too much? It's like a Forbidden Chalice on legs. 

 

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Clay's Ark- Is this card effect when sent to the graveyard permanent? Otherwise it should be "While this card remains in the graveyard: All monsters on the field are treated as Reptile-types".

 

Clay Ark Cannon- A random burn card for the Archetype? It's a good card to use esp with Alana on the field too.

 

They Live Among Us- A nice card that can be punishing and helpful at the same time. With some of the cards on this archetype, it can actually prove to be useful. However, does it ignore the summoning conditions of certain cards? Like "Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect" What about those cards?

 

The Disease...It Changes You-  No problem on this card. Nice job on a multiple effect card. xD

 

OVERALL: I may have missed some cards. Please do remind me of this if I did. Also, will look on the OCG's one by one next time. Salutations on another good Archetype. I think Worm,Reptilianne,Venom and other reptile archetypes would want to murder this archetype. xDDD

 

 

 

 

 

 


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You did actually miss the Trap Card, Clayark Invasion Virus and Terror of the Ark, but Lorene and Lupe's effects aren't exactly the same, just similar. Lupe gets a Clayark from the Graveyard and Lorene gets one from the Deck.

Also since you didn't comment about the 1st version of They Live Among US I assume you think the 2nd one is better? The card rules go that if a monster can only be special summoned a certain way then it won't work in those other instances, so the monster won't be special summoned, but will be returned to the Deck.
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Sorry for the late reply, was gone for so long cause of school (STILL AT SCHOOL ACTUALLY) and oh, I did miss out some cards..

 

Terror of the Ark- I actually see some similarities with this card and of Reptilliane Vashkii (IDK the spelling) but compared to Vashkii's this card does burn damage on its 2nd eff rather than destruction of opponent's cards..Hmmm, if this were to be a card. I'd like it to be that you can only control 1 "Terror of the Ark" on your field.

 

Clayark Invasion Virus- I have no probs with this card.

 

oh and also, I didn't comment on the 1st eff of it "They Live Among Us" cause I seem to got a liking on the 2nd. 

 


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Thanks for the feedback. I could consider the change to Terror of the Ark after some testing. In my CCG that I run on another forum, I've found Invasion Virus and the 2nd They Live Among Us as sort of useless. It might just be against the decks that some of the other members use though, because they never sync or tribute their monsters for anything so I can't activate Invasion Virus and in result, no point in activating They Live Among Us unless I had Alana on the field, though I don't like to rely on 1 card for the effect. If I was going against a popular TCG deck, I don't think I would have that problem

I think I might change Invasion so that it can activate as long as an opponent's monster was sent to the grave except by battle, so I won't have to totally rely on my opponent to activate it.
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