yopppsss Posted August 5, 2013 Report Share Posted August 5, 2013 Hello! These are my first 2 entries into the wonderful world of realistic card making! I would love for any feedback you could give on how to make these cards better or any other future cards (Constructive Criticism That Means You Are Welcome) So enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted August 5, 2013 Report Share Posted August 5, 2013 You really need to read the OCG (Official Card Grammar) thread to make the first card clear. Do you just keep on flipping coins until it dies? Or does it only happen once when it is Summoned? Or can you use it whenever? At any rate, it's too risky and not worth the effort of getting it out. Considering how there are only 3 DIVINE monsters that are all very rarely used and there are cards that can stop your opponent from attacking at all with any of their monsters for a turn for free, the second card is both overly situational and utterly outclassed. While you're at it, read the Cardmaking Guide as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yopppsss Posted August 5, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2013 The Flip A Coin Is Used Only On The Turn The Card Is Summoned Onto The Field. Should It Be Worded; When This Card Is Summoned, Flip A Coin: ? The Second Card Is Meant For The War Of The Giants God Cards Which Can Be Used In Play And A Few Divine Cards That I Am Working On Currently. If That Card Were To Be Put Into The Official Game It Would Be Highly Situational But Is Meant For My Future Cards In This Set. Thank You For Those Two Threads And Like I Said Any Remark Counts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarcoAzro Posted August 5, 2013 Report Share Posted August 5, 2013 If you want advice on coin effects, look up the Arcana Force monsters, all of them use coin effects and are good for learning the OCG of that type of card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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