LMGMLG Posted September 23, 2013 Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 This is my version of the "Dark deck". Original: Fixed: I don't really know how the xyz monsters work, I read about them on wikia so I am sorry if I did something wrong. Please tell me what you think about my cards so I can improve my card making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caiustheshadowmonarch788 Posted September 23, 2013 Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 Good,good, I wanted a DARK deck when I was little (Now I have 3!). To be honest all the monsters (Except for Dark Child) are REALLY overpowered. 6/10 caiustheshadowmonarch Boop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMGMLG Posted September 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 Good,good, I wanted a DARK deck when I was little (Now I have 3!). To be honest all the monsters (Except for Dark Child) are REALLY overpowered. 6/10 caiustheshadowmonarch Boop! Why are Dark master and Dark angel of death op? But thanks for the tip, I like the invincible monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted September 23, 2013 Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 -Dark Reinforcements is blantantly overpowered; DARK monsters in General are rather Graveyard-centric, and with at least 4 in the Graveyard your boosting by 2000. Add to it, it also makes the monster invincible in battle, as well as being unaffected by Trap cards. Really, that's just too much.-Dark Angel is a walking Dark Reinforcements; It's ATK is going to end up ridiculously high for literally no effort at all.-Dark Seal is gimmicky, but also poorly designed. Basically if your Opponent plays a lot of LIGHTs, you can Summon a bunch of DARK from the Deck while also removing their monsters from the field. Plus, considering the fact it doesn't have any sort of once-per-turn clause or anything remotely similar, you can just keep activating it at all.-Dark Master's text is wrong, as Xyz monsters don't work that way. Since in this case, it would be a Rank 8 to match the, apparently "1 Level 8 monster" requirement.-Aside from the fact Dark Assailant is already a card, I don't know what card "Dark Servant" is, so that card of your remains unplayable.-Dark Minion's effect contradicts Dark Assailants. Assuming Minion at some point was Servant, you wouldn't need to include Assailant's text on Minion/Servant, unless the Summon is from like the Deck or Graveyard, and even then, it would need to be noted and/or include "Ignoring the Summoning conditions".No offense, these are just flat-out wonky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMGMLG Posted September 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 I forgot to add "once per turn" part to the dark seal and for Dark assailant I miss wrote it was supposed to be Dark minions for sacrifice. I did it a bit fast that is true. Next time I will try to be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LMGMLG Posted September 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 I made fixed the cards a bit so can someone tell me is it now ok? I want to know what are ok cards so I know how to make good cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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