GoodKid Posted October 16, 2013 Report Share Posted October 16, 2013 [attachment=39435:carlaud card.jpg] [attachment=39436:Bah'tryo.jpg] [attachment=39437:Dalv.jpg] [attachment=39438:ROAVS.jpg] [attachment=39439:ROAVS2.jpg] Comment please, This is my first card set. RATE IT! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoodKid Posted October 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2013 50 view and no comment, Im i that bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vla1ne Posted October 25, 2013 Report Share Posted October 25, 2013 In a word: Yes. To sum up all that's wrong here: the OCG of these cards makes them more broken rulings-wise than you can possibly imagine. The spelling and wording need proofreading and the lack of a "once per turn" clause grants them abuse potential beyond even most banned cards. the concept itself is nice, and if you fixed the above errors I can see the set being quite nice. but you need far more practice with the basics in single cards before you post sets, and It shows through your cards. Good luck with it though! I'm always happy to see rituals getting some love! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GoodKid Posted November 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2013 see, thank you. Now i can fix them and make them better and not as broken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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