Ragnarok, the Ice Elemental

[DjSpinMasterz]

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2 level 5 WATER monsters

Once per turn,[detach 1 minteral] Each time a WATER monster, put a counter on this card. You can move how many counters for these effects.1, Destroy 1 card.2, Banish 1 card.3, add 1 WATER monster as a minteral. 4, This card can attack twice. 5, destroy all cards on the field.

 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

2 Level 5 WATER monsters

During your Main Phase: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. When a WATER monster (does what?): Put a counter on this card (max. 5). You can remove any amount of counters for this card, and if you do, apply the appropriate effect.

• 1: Destroy 1 card
• 2: Banish 1 card.
• 3: Add 1 WATER monster (from where?) as a Xyz Material.
• 4: This card can attack twice during each Battle Phase.
• 5: Destroy all cards on the field.

 

As mentioned in the OCG fix, you need to specify (1) What needs to happen to a WATER monster in order to get counters on this card and (2) For its 3-counter removal effect, WHERE are you attaching the monster from.

 

Mentioning the general effects, the Xyz Materials don't serve much of a purpose aside from detaching every turn. First two effects seem relatively decent for the costs needed, but until you make the above two points clear, there isn't much that we can say about this being abusable or not.

 

On a sidenote, since it says your friend made it; did you get permission from him before posting this?