-Noel- Posted November 20, 2013 Report Share Posted November 20, 2013 The lovely and elegant "Star" archetype >//< this archetype is supports the original Powerful Synchro such as SSD or Quasar, yea it's sound not so balanced but I still don't get any badly or long criticism :), well hope to get some reasonable one. and thx for every comments here, it's worthy to read them and get some power to continue making a new card :D [You can see the first comment for an update log.] First of all, this is the new Synchro Tuner!! [spoiler='Spirit of the Star Dragon'] [spoiler='Lore'] 1 Tuner + 1 non-Tuner LIGHT monster When this card is Synchro Summoned, If you control no other monsters: You can Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck, its ATK and DEF becomes 0 and its effects are negated. During your opponent's Main Phase: You can Synchro Summon using this face-up card you control as a Synchro Material Monster. During the End Phase of the turn that you Synchro Summoned a Dragon-Type "Star" or "Quasar" monster using this card as a Synchro Material Monster: Draw 1 card. *change its effect a little bit, since to draw 2 cards with the archetype support cards now seem a bit op [/spoiler] [/spoiler] i believed that many people have seen this card, yea i have posted this in the Single Cards section and that give me balance of this card and inspiration for the entire archetype :lol: [spoiler='Monsters'] [spoiler='Starlight Messenger'] [spoiler='Lore'] This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of a "Star" monster. The Synchro Summon of the Level 8 or lower Synchro Monster that used this card as a Synchro Material Monster cannot be negated. If you control a face-up Tuner monster: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card is Normal Summoned while you control no other monsters: You can add 1 "Star" card from your Deck to your hand, and if you do, this card is treated as a Tuner monster while face-up on the field. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Hoshi no Megami'] [spoiler='Lore'] Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return it to the hand. When this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Add 1 "Star" card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a Synchro Material Monster: You can reveal 1 "Star" card in your hand; add this card from your Graveyard to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Starlight Lancer'] [spoiler='Lore'] During the turn you Normal Summoned a "Star" monster: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by paying 300 Life Points. During the End Phase of the turn that you Synchro Summoned a LIGHT Warrior-Type monster using this card as a Synchro Material Monster: Add this card from your Graveyard to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Incarnation of Stardust'] [spoiler='Lore'] This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of a WIND Dragon-Type monster. This card cannot be Normal Summoned. If you control a Level 5 monster: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon this card (from your hand). During the End Phase of the turn that you Synchro Summoned a "Star" monster using this card as a Synchro Material Monster: Draw 1 card. * it still can be Normal Set and Flip Summon [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Incarnation of the Star Dragon'] [spoiler='Lore'] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by banishing 1 Level 10 Dragon-Type "Star" Synchro Monster from your Extra Deck or Graveyard while you control no Synchro Monsters and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn, when a card effect that would destroy a card(s) on the field is activated: You can negate its activation, and if you do, destroy it, then increase this card Level by 1. You can tribute this Level 10 or higher card; Special Summon 1 of your banished "Star Dragon" Synchro Monster in face-up Attack Position. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Star Rune Lancer'] [spoiler='Lore'] 1 Tuner + 1 non-Tuner monster When this card is Synchro Summoned while you control 2 or more other face-up Synchro Monsters: You can draw 1 card. Each player can only use this effect of "Star Rune Lancer" once per duel. If the Synchro Monster that used this card as a Synchro Material Monster attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Witch of the Forbidden Star'] [spoiler='Lore'] 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters When this card is Synchro Summoned: Destroy this card, then take 2000 damage. If the Synchro Monster that used this card as a Synchro Material Monster attacks: Draw 1 card, then each player gains 1000 Life Points. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Shining Star Dragon'] [spoiler='Lore'] 1 LIGHT Tuner Synchro Monster + "Stardust Dragon" The Synchro Material Monsters used for this card's Synchro Summon cannot Special Summoned from the Graveyard by an effect of Spell Card. Each of these effects can be activated once per turn: ● Draw 1 card. If that card is a monster, you can reveal it and gain Life Points equal to its Level x 400, then each player draws 1 card. ● Negate the activation of an effect that would destroy a card(s) on the field, and destroy that card. ● When a card effect that targets this card is activated: You can banish this face-up card; negate the activation and destroy it. If you do; Special Summon this banished card during the End Phase, and if you do: Target 1 card on the field; destroy that target, then your opponent gains 1000 Life Points. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Starlight Dragon'] [spoiler='Lore'] 1 LIGHT Fairy-Type Tuner Synchro Monster + "Stardust Dragon" Must be Synchro Summoned during your opponent's Main Phase by a card effect and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, when a card or effect is activated: You can banish 2 "Star" cards from your Graveyard; negate the activation and destroy it, then you can shuffle 1 of your banished "Star" card into the Deck. When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can pay half your Life Points and send all cards on your side of the field to the Graveyard; Special Summon 3 Synchro Monsters from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. They cannot declare an attack or activate their effects, their ATK become 0 and they cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects until the next End Phase. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Shining Quasar Dragon'] [spoiler='Lore'] 1 LIGHT Tuner Synchro Monster + 2 or more LIGHT non-Tuner Synchro Monsters Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. Once per turn: You can target as many cards on the field as possible, but not more than the number of non-Tuner monsters used as its Synchro Material; banish those targets. Once per turn, when a card or effect is activated: You can shuffle 1 of your banished card into the deck; negate its activation, and if you do, destroy it. When this card leaves the field: You can Special Summon 1 "Shining Star Dragon" from your Extra Deck. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Starlight Summoner'] [spoiler='Lore'] 2 Level 1 LIGHT monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card using a Level 1 "Starlight" monster you control as the Xyz Material. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material fron this card; add 1 "Star" card from your Deck to your hand. During your Main Phase: You can tribute this card that has no Xyz Materials; Special Summon as many Level 2 or lower "Star" monsters from your hand as possible, Destroy them during the End Phase. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Starstream Dragon'] [spoiler='Lore] 2 Level 8 Dragon-Type monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Stardust Dragon" you control as the Xyz Material. When a card effect that would destroy a card(s) on the field is activated: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it. During your Main Phase: You can tribute this card that has no Xyz Materials; Special Summon 1 "Stardust Dragon" and 1 LIGHT monster from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position. The effects of "Stardust Dragon" are negated, their ATK and DEF become 0 and they cannot be used as Xyz Materials for an Xyz Summon. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Spells'] [spoiler='Light of the Universe'] [spoiler='Lore'] Add 1 "Star" card from your Deck to your hand. You can banish this card in your Graveyard and send 1 face-up "Star" card you control to the Graveyard; draw 2 cards. This card's name is treated as "Starlight" while in the Graveyard or banished. You can only use 1 "Light of the Universe" effect per turn, and only once that turn. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Miracle Star Wand'] [spoiler='Lore'] Activate only when you control no monsters. Add 1 Level 1 "Star" monster from your Deck to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Wish Upon a Star'] [spoiler='Lore'] Activate only if you control a Level 2 or lower LIGHT Fairy-Type monster. Pay half your Life Points and send all cards in your hand and on your side of the field to the Graveyard; draw 1 card. During your next Standby Phase: Special Summon 2 "Star" Synchro Monsters from your Extra Deck, ignoring the Summoning conditions. Their effects are negated, also you cannot Summon any monster during the turn this effect is activated, except Level 10 or higher Synchro Monters. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Ultimate Star Formation - Quasar] [spoiler='Lore'] Once per turn, when you Synchro Summon a "Star" Synchro Monster: You can add 1 of the Synchro Material Monster that used for its Synchro Summon from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is in the Graveyard, if a "Quasar" Synchro Monster you control would be destroyed, you can pay half your Life Points and banish this card, instead. While you control a "Quasar" Synchro Monster: You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; select and activate 1 of the following effects ● Shuffle all cards in both players' hands and Graveyards into the Deck, then shuffle all banished "Star" cards into their owner's Deck and gain Life Points equal to the number of the shuffled card x 500. ● Banish all cards on your opponent's side of the field and in both players' Graveyards. "Quasar" Synchro Monsters cannot attack the turn you activated this effect. ● Shuffle all of your banished card into the Deck, then inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent x the number of the shuffled "Star" cards. For each 1000 damage inflicted by this effect; draw 1 card. ● Banish, from your hand or your deck, any number of "Star" cards, then Special Summon 1 "Star" monster from your Extra Deck or Graveyard whose Level is equal to the number of the banished cards. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Traps'] [spoiler='Starlight Guardian'] [spoiler='Lore'] Activate only when you control a face-up Level 2 or lower "Star" monster. All cards currently on the field cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects until your next End Phase, then your opponent gains 300 Life Points for each card on the field, and if you do, draw 1 card for every 2000 Life Points your opponent gained by this effect. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler='Miracle Starwave'] [spoiler='Lore'] Once during your turn: You can Tribute 1 LIGHT monster and discard 1 card; draw 2 cards. You can Tribute 1 "Star" monster and send this face-up card to the Graveyard; Synchro Summon 1 "Star" or "Quasar" monster by banishing the Synchro Material Monsters from the Graveyard, its effects are negated and banish it during the End Phase. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] right now i have only these, but im still updating them so new cards coming soon, c ya B) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2013 bump, also this post will be an update log :) 23/11/13 - "Starlight Lancer" added - "Light of the Universe" added - "Miracle Star Wand" added - Starlight Dragon's Synchro Materials changed from " 1 non-Machine LIGHT Tuner Synchro Monster + "Stardust Dragon" " to " 1 LIGHT Fairy-Type Tuner Synchro Monster + "Stardust Dragon" " 24/11/13 - "Witch of the Forbidden Star" added - "Shining Quasar Dragon" added!! - "Starstream Dragon" added - change effects of "Ultimate Star Formation - Quasar" a little bit since there's a new "Quasar" Synchro Monster - "Incarnation of the Star Dragon" added - "Hoshi no Megami" (Goddess of the Star) added 26/11/13 - "Starlight Guardian" added 27/11/13 - just balanced some of Shining Quasar Dragon's effect from" Once per turn: You can target as many cards on the field as possible, but not more than the number of Synchro Material Monsters used for this card's Synchro Summon; banish those targets." to "Once per turn: You can target as many cards on the field as possible, but not more than the number of non-Tuner monsters used as its Synchro Material; banish those targets." - "Starlight Summoner" added 28/11/13 - "Wish Upon a Star" added, also its effects are different from the RC - Single Cards version since that one is adjusted for a SC section but this one is the original effect i created. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DjSpinMasterz Posted November 21, 2013 Report Share Posted November 21, 2013 cool monsters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 22, 2013 Report Share Posted November 22, 2013 wow i think last time i got very nice arts from u but u still have those 2 dragons, could you share the image links? and about your cards, they're nice art (^ ^) cards that can pull Quasar out with very fast playing than any currently Synchron, Laval or Fabled did, also ur spell's material returned effect and ur trap's miracle synchro effect sound interesting. good works, keep it up (i can do only this since im still not used to reviewing any card >//<) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsuneko Posted November 22, 2013 Report Share Posted November 22, 2013 The effects are quite complicated, so it's hard to tell whether or not they're balanced without playtesting, but the cards are super cute :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2013 thx both of u for comment, @Hikari-chan about dragons art i just found some card image and instanly crop without adjusting it, you can crop my card image and use a google search then u probably found it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 23, 2013 Report Share Posted November 23, 2013 I don't usually comment... but then someone told me that if I don't comment on people's cards then people won't comment on mine. So here goes: I'm not the best critic in the world so most of this feedback will be positive... I really like the idea of Miracle Synchro it reminds me of miracle fusion and the time before XYZ monsters had taken over. I love the art for all of your cards; especially the dragons. How did you find such good images? I might even be asking to 'borrow' for Shining Star Dragon. Anyway these cards are mostly balanced; except Starlight Dragon; you can easily get your synchro tuners back on the field and soon summon another one of those amazing synchro monster from your deck. It's completely your decision but maybe you should change the effect of that card just a little. Overall these are great cards; great art; great effects; great concept and 9.5/10 (told you I'm a rubbish critic) :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2013 I don't usually comment... but then someone told me that if I don't comment on people's cards then people won't comment on mine. So here goes: I'm not the best critic in the world so most of this feedback will be positive... I really like the idea of Miracle Synchro it reminds me of miracle fusion and the time before XYZ monsters had taken over. I love the art for all of your cards; especially the dragons. How did you find such good images? I might even be asking to 'borrow' for Shining Star Dragon. Anyway these cards are mostly balanced; except Starlight Dragon; you can easily get your synchro tuners back on the field and soon summon another one of those amazing synchro monster from your deck. It's completely your decision but maybe you should change the effect of that card just a little. Overall these are great cards; great art; great effects; great concept and 9.5/10 (told you I'm a rubbish critic) :) thx for a comment :lol: feel free to use any of my images. and about Starlight Dragon effect i think i made that monster the way to be another ace (hard summoning conditions, effect protection and sth. like that) and i create its effect like some scene in anime that when someone's boss monster fell, they suddenly summon a new and more powerful one XD i think i have enough drawback and cost for its, but yea, if more people still think it's broken maybe i will do sth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 finally reached 15 cards!! :) , CnC still gladly accepted :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dandandalaxy3 Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 These cards are getting cooler and cooler! I like Witch of the Forbidden Star a lot! Starstream dragon is nice as well; I like the idea of linking synchro monsters with xyz monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BatMed Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 OMG,, Cool cards,, I also love the images :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Man, keep up the great work. You won me over sense the start. Like the Xyz idea, seems awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Thx for every comments, also, TechGenusMaster, thx for keep following from the start and a rep :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 bump :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2013 well, look like if i only update the cards and first comment then noone will see this ( i can't allow my precious archetype to drop down anymore >//<) so bump XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted November 27, 2013 Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 The cards are good however you have too many spoilers in the thread and it's hard to navigate through so many spoilers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 The cards are good however you have too many spoilers in the thread and it's hard to navigate through so many spoilers. thx for a comment :) and if you say so, maybe i will change Main Deck and Extra Deck to only Monsters, thx again ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2013 well im done so much about this archetype, so maybe i will rest a while, you can still comments and i'll answer that, but there will be no new cards for a while, thx for viewing my archetype :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scary Face Posted November 29, 2013 Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 wow, these cards images are very awesome, and yea, since u need some criticism, i have. after seeing the whole archetype, i found out that ur monsters effects are focus on Special Summon ur level 2 synchro tuner monster with very impressive speed, however, it's so fast, the lancer can be search by either messenger or megami's effect and can be suddenly ss after searched, and with a group of searching card, the thing u only need for a first turn Quasar is 3 messenger (1 tuner), 1 lancer and 1 incarnate of stardust (for any lv5 synchro monster from Spirit's effect) or maybe 1 megami, 2 lancer, 1 messenger and 1 incarnate, for me, any of those 5 monsters are so easy to get to ur hand since u have totally 4 search cards, so with this archetype u usually get a Quasar at first turn, and still have a chance to ss the second one by that Miracle synchro trap that also help u thin ur deck, yea, it maybe ur target to perform a first turn Quasar but u shouldn't forget that we're talking about Quasar, the most powerful synchro monster now, so summoning it so easily seems not so balance, however, it's still be a nice idea and very nice images :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2013 wow, these cards images are very awesome, and yea, since u need some criticism, i have. after seeing the whole archetype, i found out that ur monsters effects are focus on Special Summon ur level 2 synchro tuner monster with very impressive speed, however, it's so fast, the lancer can be search by either messenger or megami's effect and can be suddenly ss after searched, and with a group of searching card, the thing u only need for a first turn Quasar is 3 messenger (1 tuner), 1 lancer and 1 incarnate of stardust (for any lv5 synchro monster from Spirit's effect) or maybe 1 megami, 2 lancer, 1 messenger and 1 incarnate, for me, any of those 5 monsters are so easy to get to ur hand since u have totally 4 search cards, so with this archetype u usually get a Quasar at first turn, and still have a chance to ss the second one by that Miracle synchro trap that also help u thin ur deck, yea, it maybe ur target to perform a first turn Quasar but u shouldn't forget that we're talking about Quasar, the most powerful synchro monster now, so summoning it so easily seems not so balance, however, it's still be a nice idea and very nice images :D thx for this long comment :) yea my cards main objective is to ss quasar as soon as possible but u should know that 5 monsters at a time (even with 3 copies of each search spell) is not so easy (i know this myself after some playtests) also Quasar can be easily get rid of by 2 destroy effects, even SSD come after that, it still banishable and returnable, so my cards are about to make Synchro deck can play with more ways to fight the nowaday Xyz deck, just that ^ ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 bump, hope to get more comments though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Digijosh Posted November 30, 2013 Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 I've only looked at a few of them, it is getting pretty late, but I'm diffidently going to keep updated! They have really good art, and seem well balanced. My only nitpick is some of the wording might need some work. Here are some examples of what I mean. I can help with more later if you'd like and hopefully you don't think I'm being too harsh by trying to change your cards :P Spirit of the Star Dragon - On the first effect it should be a colon : instead of a semicolon ;. A colon shows when you do something, in this case, When it is summoned.I think the last effect should read something more like "During the End Phase of the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard for the Synchro Summon of a Dragon-Type "Star" or "Quasar" monster: Draw 1 card." Messenger - On the last effect should be a colon after Normal Summoned. Same as above, of when you do something. Incarnation Stardust- I would say make the Special Summoning effect read "If you control a Level 5 monster: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon this card (from your hand)." And the colon vs semicolon again. If you got confused a colon shows when you can do something,(followed by a cost if any) while a semicolon shows what you do after cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2013 Thx u very much :) will fix those when im home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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