Red Ace

[Philemon]

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Once per turn: You can discard 1 monster from your hand; all face-up Attack Position monsters your opponent controls are changed to Defense Position, their Battle Position cannot be changed until your opponent's End Phase. You cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated.

 

Based off the Japanese-exclusive Akakieisu, I made him a retrained monster with the ability to put all of the opponents monsters in defense mode (which is based off his flavor text). Not terribly useful, but something fun for Spellcaster and Stall Decks.

[Scary Face]

It should be "Once per turn: You can discard 1 monster from your hand; all face-up Attack Position monsters your opponent controls are changed to Defense Position. You cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated."

 

well just change monsters' position but have an attack restriction for all of your monsters? i think u better change it to "This card cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated." or if u really want a self-threatening roar u should add this "are changed to Defense Position, their Battle Position cannot be changed until your opponent's End Phase." just a suggestion :)

[Philemon]

It should be "Once per turn: You can discard 1 monster from your hand; all face-up Attack Position monsters your opponent controls are changed to Defense Position. You cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated."

 

well just change monsters' position but have an attack restriction for all of your monsters? i think u better change it to "This card cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated." or if u really want a self-threatening roar u should add this "are changed to Defense Position, their Battle Position cannot be changed until your opponent's End Phase." just a suggestion :)

 

I like that, both parts. It lets Red Ace act as a Threatening Roar/Windstorm of Etaqua mix, but doesn't let you run over the enemy ASAP. Do you think the cost of 1 monster too much or too little? I was thinking either 1 monster or 1 spell, but discarding spells is usually not worth it.

[Scary Face]

well, if discard a monster, you will have some combo such as discard fabled cerburrel and ss ragin after change ur opponent monster to Def position or discard a Malicious, Plague, or Grave-playing stuff like that, and if u r about to discard Spell Card, i think it's Spellcaster-Type so that's also make sense, however it's all up 2 u XD

 

in addition, you double typed "are are changed to Defense Position"

[Philemon]

well, if discard a monster, you will have some combo such as discard fabled cerburrel and ss ragin after change ur opponent monster to Def position or discard a Malicious, Plague, or Grave-playing stuff like that, and if u r about to discard Spell Card, i think it's Spellcaster-Type so that's also make sense, however it's all up 2 u XD

 

in addition, you double typed "are are changed to Defense Position"

Aight.

 

And 3rd times the charm (I really, really hope so).

[Philemon]

Anyone else have anything to add/criticize?