Newton Vitas Posted December 12, 2013 Report Share Posted December 12, 2013 This is the new version. I hope it's well balanced. [spoiler=Lore]2 Level 4 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Xyz Monsters you control cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects until your opponent's next End Phase. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. If this face-up card would be destroyed, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead.[/spoiler] P.S.: "Trovany" is very similar to the word "thunder" in some languages. Just a little twist based on Rai-Oh's name. [spoiler=Older Version] [spoiler=Lore]3 Level 4 LIGHT Thunder-Type monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Xyz Monsters you control with Xyz Material cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects until your opponent's next End Phase. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. If this face-up card would be destroyed, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead.[/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted December 12, 2013 Report Share Posted December 12, 2013 Other than Thunder Family, there's like, no way to make this. Even then, why would that deck bother? They'd much prefer to spam like 2-3 little Xyz bosses to swarm the field and go for game, instead of this and like 1 other card. If it were generic, it would still be outclassed cuz it's a 3-mat, so a -2 and a BIG investment, with puny attack AND it doesn't do anything on its own, it requires you to have another stable Xyz boss in order for it to work. So what this results in is that this card would rarely be used. What I suggest is that you make it a 2-mat Xyz and lower the ATK to 1900. You can make it generic too if you want. At this point, the card is pretty good and reasonably balanced. It acts as a potent veil for your Xyz, something that rank 4 doesn't do yet and that I'm sure would see play. If you keep it as a 3-mat, then I highly encourage you to make it generic and bump the ATK to 2400. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted December 12, 2013 Report Share Posted December 12, 2013 Rather good for one of the (if not the) first cards you made. See Sora's post above. I wouldn't make it generic though. Just 2 Level 4s, and probably LIGHT. ATK up to 2400 just cuz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newton Vitas Posted December 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2013 Thanks for the suggestions guys! I think the generic version would make this card more versatile, as some LIGHT archetypes would rather go for Constellar Omega (and then for Ptolemy M7) or Paladynamo (who is better off being destroyed, anyway). I will also make the effect work on Xyz monsters with no materials, so this card can protect itself for a second turn. I feel like this restriction is kind of pointless, specially because Xyz's without materials are already useless (mostly). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted December 13, 2013 Report Share Posted December 13, 2013 Make it non-attack monster is likely a disadvantage. Make it about like 2100 ATK should be fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted December 13, 2013 Report Share Posted December 13, 2013 [quote name="Ronove" post="6318781" timestamp="1386905845"]Make it non-attack monster is likely a disadvantage. Make it about like 2100 ATK should be fine[/quote] 2100 is a power threshold though, one that I don't think this card should cross. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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