Raphiel The Dark Knight (EDITED)

[BleuConviction]

Here is the edited result of my card. Opinions would be great.

[death00]

don't attach images, you can save them to your computer, then upload via the uploader, also please post lore (effects) to make easier to critique your card. That monster's Xyz Materials become Xyz Materials for this card. a non-Dark Attribute monster. also, don't double post, just edit the old post (push the edit button on the bottom of the topic)  

[BleuConviction]

I don't really understand what you mean by upload via the uploader also I cant find the button to upload images other than the "attach" one. For example when I click image it asks for a URL but instead I could just Attach files.

[death00]

um, sorry, i was thinking of card maker, but if you click the card after your done making it, there's a link you can copy (ex: [img] followed by text and then a nearly identical box ) and paste into the new topic, and then the card doesn't come out next to the attached images thing, but that's not really the point (well, it's kinda part of it, but, still) the main points are these: 

 please post lore (effects) to make easier to critique your card. That monster's Xyz Materials become Xyz Materials for this card. a non-Dark Attribute monster. also, don't double post, just edit the old post (push the edit button on the bottom of the topic)