TJDouglas13 Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 Lore: Each time this card destroys a monster, gain life points equal to the destroyed monsters ATK. When this card is sent to the graveyard, your opponent loses 600 lifepoints. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kingdom Xathers Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 Ignoring Grammar/OCG errors, I'm gonna go straight into the card itself: You need to specify how this card needs to destroy a monster in order for its effect to activate. Even then, granting you Life Points equal to the destroyed monster's complete ATK is a bit much. I would suggest making it give you half of the ATK. ATK-wise, this is far too weak for a Level 8 monster, even with the effect as it is. Making it a Level 5-6 monster, or raising its ATK to maybe 2400 or 2500 would help to alleviate this concern. To anyone else who comes by to review this: feel free to bring up any other points I've overlooked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Newton Vitas Posted January 22, 2014 Report Share Posted January 22, 2014 A picture is worth a thousand words, right? If your card doesn't get specific support, it will never be used. Being DARK Beast-Type doesn't help much in this case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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