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Diprevity Beast - Archetype


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So much like most players of the new Yu-Gi-Oh game you're probably angry about the abuse from META decks and the ever growing annoyance of XYZ monsers. However an interesting concept was shown to me through what I believe is Fire Kings? Where they had the ability to "destroy" cards in their owners hand. That idea got me excited and also got me thinking. What if I based a card around "destroying" from my deck? It also matches my reckless insane personality as I often get dilated pupils that become very small with widening eyes and heavy breathing (Probably should go and see if I can get help some-day LoL but not today). Anyway I tried to base these cards around killing your deck to kill your opponents field. In doing so however I have made support cards to recycle. Also to help balance this deck out most cards force you to draw so you will have to draw to recycle in other words. But apart from that this deck doesn't contain any high levels apart from 2 and the 2 synchros. I also decided to throw a ritual in there just for old times sake who's effect is more about burning while destroying monsters. So without further Ado let's begin.

 

Monsters:

 

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Spells:

 

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Traps:

 

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Extra:

 

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SO what do you guys think? Balanced out nicely or? To me I think that this may become what I made it to counter which is a META deck if it ever were to make it into the real game which one day I hope it will... I made that backgrounds with the beasts plain to represent their fallen into the darkness. They are trapped in a plain place between following the light and descending into darkness. They are all Dark and beast/winged-beast excluding the 1 pyro synchro so as such they are able to be supported by Dark support cards or beast/winged-beast cards. Please tell me what you think and thank you for your time :D.

 

EDIT: Forgot to add the field-spell so I put it in now.

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Alright #1: Technically this can't be considering as Realistic Cards because In'Unasut and Tusanu'Ni have 2 types. Every monster must have only 1 type, unless saying otherwise in the effect.

 

#2: Your OCG in a lot of cards are off, but I can't really help you with that that much. 

 

#3: I feel Tsa'Ku is way too OP having the ability to summon another monster AND popping.

 

#4: Tsu'Ku is WAY WAY WAY Overpowered. The whole effect is just loathed in brokeness

 

#5: Tua'Akara is OP because of being able to summon a 2k beater that SSs itself and having a pop 2 effect.

 

#6: Dark Forest: Is incredibly OP having way to many pluses.

 

#7: Rhuk's Forest: Don't even get me started on how OP it is.

 

#8: Rhuk's Tree: OP because of the crazy draw power you can get from it and being a ticking time bomb.

 

#9: Tusanu'Ni: OP because its plus after plus after plus.

 

 

As you can tell, a lot of your cards are insanely OP with hardly any drawbacks. I could go on saying how crazy OP these cards are, but I'm going to hold it in.

 

Honestly, my rate would be a straight up 0/10. If anything, -5/10. These cards are way way way too OP.

 

But I can understand, seeing how new you are to this.

 

BTW: OP means Over Powered.

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I'll comment since no one wants to comment here or on my Golden Seas Archtype.

 

 

The first turner I think should be say this once and only once per duel to stop abuse. 

 

The second tuner is decent but would not get picked over the first one in this format. 

 

The third card is broken 2300 atk plus automatically thinning your deck, while most likely summoning/trigger your own cards is a bit too powerful maybe if it had 1900 atk it would be pushed but not broken but remember in your build this will be your trustee Knight/Lord card.

 

The Fourth card; See this is what I am talking about you use the above card and destroy them on them and have a free 2300 and a one sided board sweep. Maybe limit this to maybe once or twice per card  because Exodus is a card and it would be built into your build and literally rape your opponents field. 

 

The Fifth Card if should special summon from hand or graveyard since summoning from your deck is an EXTREMELY POWERFUL effect and it should only destroy 1 card I though I think this card is broken in my humble opinion destroying three cards on the field uncounterable is a ban-able offense in yugioh. 

 

The Six card fair but you now have too many tuners if I wanted to run a deck with only these monsters I would hate it because you used too many slots on tuners. 

 

The Seventh card the OCG is very wrong here and it is super broken being able to attack twice is insanely powerful AND BEING ABLE to do other thing with that effect breaks this card in half and then again this one needs to go back to the drawing board. 

 

The Ritual Monster fine though it could have easily been 1000 damage + having piercing would have been a great combo but currently feels like two random effect throw together.

 

Dark Forest is broken since it pretty much reads undestroyable, once per turn destroy a card on the field and possibly special a card from your deck or power drain the shit out of your opponents creatures on T1 with this card I can see you having like 20 monsters in your graveyard without even trying which also breaks this card.

 

The Rhuk forest is a little TOO effiecent it is a single card draw AND destruction engine by itself. Rework the card and find synergy without just destroying cards. 

 

Rhuk Tree is simply an OCG mess plus it is broken stall decks would dance and sing for this card it would most likely not even be used in your built...yes thats how powerful this card is. 

 

Rhuk E is an OCG mess and makes little sense though gaining 3000 atk maybe is a bit much especial with DNA + Limit Removal type cards.

 

Ritual card fine 

 

Falling; An exchange card card with most likely a card destruction attached two it.....this needs to be nerfed or drop the destroy clause all together. 

 

Rhuk Dark BROKEN BROKEN Ally of Justice Cata. breaks this card in half. 

 

Enchanted Forest is weak you should make the life gain from 1000-2000 to actually be remotely playable. 

 

In'Usaut is a Syncho not an XYZ. 

 

TSUANI IS BROKEN this needs to be NERFED HARD. 

 

Karu is powerful but I feel it needs to have a tuner from your built to use it but this one is fine. 

 

 

Summary. 

 

 

You built cards without looking entirely at the entire built....which makes most if not all of these cards together broken. Card destruction is the second most powerful effect behind card negation which is why Black Rose Dragon is used so often. Also these cards are so one dimensonal find either one or two more abilities that can tie them together to make them not feel so much the same.

 

 

PS.

 

Check out my Golden Seas Archtype directly below your thread :D overall nice try but these need work. Have a Great Day.

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Wow... Now that I've had feedback I can see that thisb deck in a whole would absolutely be way to broken I thought the concept of them was cool but I guess the cost I had imagined of being forced to draw and remove them from your deck to your hand was a good idea? Now looking at it after seeing what people think this deck if it ever was made would probably destroy any deck that it cane against... I'll try and power them down as well as add more of a real cost to them but keep this concept... For the Xyz I wanted it to look like is synchro counterpart seeing as they have a combo together he would just be there to get sacrificed and abuse his regent effect... But I guess I'll try and balance them out because their original purpose was to be able to mow through xyz monsters quickly but I completely forgot the fact that they would become a bigger threat than them... Well... Back to the drawing board :L thanks for your opinions

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