New Archetype: Supreme Judgement [20/?]

[Hamilli]

This is my first card set base around disabling the opponent and having high ATK monster on the field.
 
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Lore: While this card is face-up on your side of the field, all monsters you control are treated as "Supreme Judge".

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by shuffling 2 "Supreme Judge" monsters (except "Supreme Judge - Carnifex") from your Graveyard into your Deck. Once per turn: You can send 1 of your "Supreme Judge" monsters from your Hand into your Graveyard, and if you do, draw 2 cards.

Lore: If an opponents monster is removed from play by a card effect: Special Summon "Supreme Judge - Ecidus" from your Hand in face-up Defense Position, then, if your opponents monster card was removed from play by a "Judgement" card effect, double the Level of all "Supreme Judge" monsters (except "Supreme Judge - Ecidus"). This cards Attribute is treated as LIGHT for a Synchro Summon of a "Supreme Judge" monster.

Lore: During either player's turn, when your opponents monster effect is activated: Your opponent can discard 1 card from their hand to negate this card's effect, otherwise negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that monster.

Lore: When this card is discarded to the Graveyard or targeted by a "Supreme Judge" monster's card effect: Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Then, each player discards 1 card from their hand. This cards Attribute is treated as LIGHT in a Synchro Summon for a "Supreme Judge" monster.

Lore: You can shuffle 1 face-up "Supreme Judge" monster you control into your Deck, Special Summon this card from your Hand (This Special Summon is treated as an Tribute Summon). When a Spell/Trap Card is activated: return this card to the Deck; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card.

Lore: Once per turn, if this face-up Defense Position card would be destroyed by battle or by a card effect, it is not destroyed. If this card was face-up at the start of the Damage Step: inflict piercing Battle Damage to yourself. When you take Battle Damage from battles involving this card, draw 1 card.
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Lore: 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner "Supreme Judge" monsters
This card gains 300 ATK for each "Supreme Judge" monster discarded from your Hand or Deck. If this card is attacked by an opponent's monster, this card gains its ATK as DEF during the Damage Step only.
 

Lore: 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner "Supreme Judge" monsters
Your opponent cannot select another face-up "Surpreme Judge" monster on the field as an attack target, or target them with card effects.
 

Lore: 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more LIGHT non-Tuner "Supreme Judge" monsters
This card cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps, or card effects unless the player who activated the card discards 3 cards from his hand, and if he does, you can target 1 "Supreme Judge" monster in your Graveyard, except "Supreme Judge - Carnifex", add that target to your Hand.

Lore: 2 Level 4 LIGHT "Supreme Judge" monsters
You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card to activate 1 of these effects:
- Draw 2 cards.
- Each player discards 1 card, then each player draws 1 card.

Lore: 2 Level 7 LIGHT "Supreme Judge" monsters with different names
The Xyz Summon of this card cannot be negated. As long as this card is face-up on the field, it is treated as "Supreme Judge". Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 "Supreme Judge" monster in your Graveyard and this card gains its effect for the next 2 turns; remove the targeted monster card and cards with the same name as the target from your hand or Deck and from play.
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[spoiler=Spells/Traps]
Lore: If 2 or more monsters of your opponent are currently removed from play, return 2 of them to the Graveyard; shuffle 2 "Supreme Judge" monster from your Graveyard into your Deck and draw 1 card.

Lore: Activate this card by targeting 1 monster on each side of the field; banish your opponents monster, send your monster to the Graveyard and each player draws 1 card. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: Return those monsters to the field in the same battle positions they were in and each player discards 1 card from their Hand.

Lore: If a "Supreme Judge" monster on your side of the field is attacked by your opponents monster you can discard 1 card to banish this monster card. Return this monster to the field in the same battle positions it was in at the start of your opponents next Draw Phase.

Lore: If you control  a face-up "Supreme Judge - Carnifex", "Supreme Judge - Excecutor" or "Deus the First Judge" activate this effect: Target 1 of your opponents face-up monster cards and destroy this target. Special Summon 1 "Executed Soul"(Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 1500) and 1 "Executed Head"(Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 1500/DEF 0) Tokens on your opponents side of the field in face-up Defence Position. These Tokens cannot be used in a Synchro Summon. When an "Executed" Token is destroyed, each player discards 1 card from the top of his Deck.
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Note: Hopefully they add Token-Making in here :3, but I made it somewhere else. I just wanted to add it, so you know how it would look like!


Lore: Equip only to a "Supreme Judge" monster. If the monster card was "Supreme Judge - Lex", "Supreme Judge - Ius" or "Deus the First Judge", it cannot be targeted by Spell Cards. It gains 300 ATK and DEF. If it attacks, your opponent cannot activate any Monster/Spell/Trap Cards until the end of the Damage Step.

Lore: Once per turn: If a "Supreme Judge" monster is destroyed by an opponents monster in battle or by your opponents card effect and sent to the Graveyard, activate 1 of these effects:
- Banish 1 of your opponents monster cards.
- Each player discards 2 cards from their Hand.
- Each player discards 3 cards from the top of their Deck.
 

Lore: This card is treated as a "Judgement:" card. Target 1 face-up "Supreme Judge" monster on the field; equip this card to that target. Switch the original ATK and DEF of that target. The activation of this effect cannot be negated: Once per Duel you can target a face-up monster on your opponents side of the field and remove it from play. This target cannot be targeted by Monster/Spell/Trap card effects unless this Trap card is removed from play.

Lore: Remove from play 2 "Supreme Judge" monster from your Graveyard; banish a Set card on your opponents side of the field, then if 1 of the "Supreme Judge" monsters was a Synchro or Xyz Monster, draw 1 card.

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If my OCG is wrong in some points please help me to correct it, so I can create better cards in the Future :3
Update 1: Fixed some minor OCG-Misstypings(Not all but some o-o) and added 4 new cards + Picture-Changes :3
Update 2: Added 4 new Cards, fixed minor OCG-Things and one of the Tokens ~
Update 3: Changed the OCG based on [member='AFKassassin'] :3, removed Deus Originis, still considering what to do with him.

[Hamilli]

Mini Bump :3, Some comments would be nice, but I won't force anyone ~

[Darthakin]

I'm gonna respond since I can see there was some work put into these; and cause I like them. 

The general idea is good, albeit maybe a bit too strong on Drawing power (Then again TGDX2 and Cosmic Dragon Trail are worse), I like the card names you used for the spells, too. 

Execution seems interesting, although the OCG is off. "Cannot be used for Synchro summons" is enough, as tokens can never be used for XYZ summons. 

[Hamilli]

Okay Thanks I will change Execution then :3, I rarely see Tokens in Real Life YGO Games, so I wasn't sure about Xyz

[Hamilli]

I am a golden Whale O_O

[Hamilli]

Golden Bump!

[AFKassassin]

I like this archetype! Territia's effect seems very unique.

Here are some simple OCG and grammar fixes, and was Carnifex' 2nd effect supposed to be two separate effects? The way you worded it, with a semicolon, it makes it so that they are both effects with no costs.

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[spoiler=Aequalitas]

'While this card is face-up on your side of the field, all monsters you control are treated as "Supreme Judge".'

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[spoiler=Ecidus]

If an opponents monster is removed from play by a card effect: Special Summon "Supreme Judge - Ecidus" from your Hand in face-up Defense Position, then, if your opponents monster card was removed from play by a "Judgement" card effect, double the Level of all "Supreme Judge" monsters (except "Supreme Judge - Ecidus"). This cards Attribute is treated as LIGHT for a Synchro Summon of a "Supreme Judge" monster.

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[spoiler=Lex]

During either player's turn, when your opponents monster effect is activated: Your opponent can discard 1 card from their hand to negate this card's effect, otherwise negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that monster.

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[spoiler=Patronus]

When this card is discarded to the Graveyard or targeted by a "Supreme Judge" monster's card effect: Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. Then, each player discards 1 card from their hand. This cards Attribute is treated as LIGHT in a Synchro Summon for a "Supreme Judge" monster.

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[spoiler=Ius]

You can shuffle 1 face-up "Supreme Judge" monster you control into your Deck, Special Summon this card from your Hand (This Special Summon is treated as an Tribute Summon). When a Spell/Trap Card is activated: return this card to the Deck; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card.

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[spoiler=Territia]

Once per turn, if this face-up Defense Position card would be destroyed by battle or by a card effect, it is not destroyed. If this card was face-up at the start of the Damage Step: inflict piercing Battle Damage to yourself. When you take Battle Damage from battles involving this card, draw 1 card.

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[spoiler=Synchro Monsters/XYZ Monsters]

[spoiler=Iudex]

This card cannot be targeted by Spells, Traps, or card effects unless the player who activated the card discards 3 cards from his hand, and if he does, you can target 1 "Supreme Judge" monster in your Graveyard, except "Supreme Judge - Carnifex", add that target to your Hand.

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[spoiler=Iniuria]

You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card to activate 1 of these effects:
- Draw 2 cards.
- Each player discards 1 card, then each player draws 1 card.

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[spoiler=Deus]

The Xyz Summon of this card cannot be negated. As long as this card is face-up on the field, it is treated as "Supreme Judge". Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 "Supreme Judge" monster in your Graveyard and this card gains its effect for the next 2 turns; remove the targeted monster card and cards with the same name as the target from your hand or Deck and from play. (I don't know how to fix the bolded part, it's just wrong...)

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[spoiler=Deus Originis]

This one has so many errors, it hurts a little. I think that if it is put into a fusion it may be better. If it is, then the special summoning effect is normal and won't have to have whole new rulings based on it.

This card can only be Special Summoned if "Deus the First Judge" is destroyed by a battle and send from your side of the field to the Graveyard. The Special Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is summoned, each player discards all cards in their hands, then excavates cards from the top of his Deck until each player has 16 cards (If he has more then 16 cards in his Deck): Each player draws 5 cards, then skip your next turn. You must control no cards to activate and to resolve this effect. This card cannet be destroyed by the effects of Monster, Spell or Trap cards.

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I'll leave the Spells/Traps to a different person because this took me an hour. Anyways, I love the archtype and I think it would be a fun to play around with.

[Hamilli]

Thanks for answering ~
I think I will change Carnifex' effect to discard 1 "Supreme Judge" monster + I don't know about the semicolon thing o-o

I was unsure about Deus Originis in the first place, so I removed him :P, I just had a good picture v.v, maybe I will use him later, but different. I thought of him being an Effect Monster, that you can summon from your Deck, but it would be a dead card until you manage to have either 2 Carnifex' or at least 1 Iudex with Carnifex to Xyz Summon  Deus AND it has to be destroyed in Battle, so I was thinking putting it in the Extra Deck, but it was strange for me to make it Fusion and or Synchro, you know what I mean?

Anyway!

Thank you for the OCG-Corrections :3

I changed the Typing and now know, where the mistakes were, some little and some bigger :P

But I sometimes still don't know, when to use "When" and when to use "If" at the beginning of an Effect.

But I will figure it out eventually :O

Thank you for your time! *bow*

[Hamilli]

Mini-Bump ~