Nazryl Posted August 11, 2014 Report Share Posted August 11, 2014 Wolf cards are something I have seen lots of during my annual visit to the forums and most have all been pretty similar. This is my take and hopefully bring a new view on the over used ideas that have popped up. The set is designed to become stronger when the Wolves work together, each card supporting the others and overcoming small attack values to win. Edit: Were Monsters have now been added along with the field spell too support them. (First draft of these, expect changes as fixes/rates/comments come in) Rate Comments and Fixes appreciated. [spoiler=History of Teal]According to history books, Teal was created by the gods to become a haven for all life that they gave breath to and life flourished on the rolling green of the land. Humans erected great cities of stone and steel and flourished within their golden walls. But peace did not last. A powerful wizard known as Zembiran rose up with dark magic and began to cover the world in shadow. He marched from city to city, leaving only destruction, fire and death in his wake. His magic stretched across al realms, enslaving creatures of all sizes to his cause, creating a army big enough to reshape Teal into a land of his hatred and malice. But life did not surrender easily. Aklest, the leader of free men gathered all free men to Hundol, the largest city of Teal and from there led the last defence against the evil wizard and his army of shadow. The battle lasted years and millions of living beings lost their lives until Akelst met Zembiran in single combat and cut him down amongst the bloodied field of battle. But darkness does not falter easily; With his last breath Zembiran unleashed a spell that tore the souls of every surviving body on either side and scattered them across Teal and achieving his ultimate goal of destruction. Thousands of years passed and life began to seep back into Teal once more. Scientists and Mechanics created ways to focus the still roaming souls into vassals known as Duel Monster cards creating groups calling themselves 'Founders' individuals dedicated to seeking out these souls and creating the worlds most powerful cards to become the greatest duellist in the world and earn the King of Games title. These are those cards, these are the cursed souls of Teal.[/spoiler] [spoiler=YuGiOh: Soul Seeker Duellist] Rae Amara is a rash seventeen year old girl who grew up in the shadow of her older brother Ranst and his skills as a duellist. She was born into a affinity to Wolf souls and her instincts seemed to be tuned to seeking the wolf souls scattered across Teal. Rae is constantly trying to prove her own worth and often this pushes her into situations where she cares only for proving herself to the other duellists. Her deck is that of the Wolf cards she has found or inherited. Her main card, the first she ever managed to seek, is the Wolf, Chesi who is also the spirit that accompanies her when in the field. Rae's style is that of herself, moves and combos with the cards are seen as rash to others but in fact are well thought out and she always has a plan. Rae and her Wolves are about to be thrown into a storm of darkness, one that threatens the very fabric of existence. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Boss Monster] Dragons have always played a part in the mythic origins of Duel Monsters and within Teal, it is no different. Ancient spirits merged with Soulless cards, taking the form of Dragons to continue the battle of light versus shadow. In this way Gods became legend... 2000/1000 This Card is also treated as Dragon type. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. You can only Special Summon this card (From your hand) by Tributing 3 'Wolf' monsters from your side of the field. This card can Attack your Opponent directly. Once per turn: You can reveal 2 'Wolf' monsters in your hand; Increase the Attack of this card by the Attack of the revealed Monsters. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Wolf Alik - Were Alik] 100/800 When this card is Summoned: Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your hand by the effect of a "Wolf" monster: Add 1 'wolf' monster from your deck, to your hand. If you control another 'Wolf' monster, this card can attack your opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Alik' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed in the Hand by the Effect of a Monster; Add 1 'Were' Monster from your Deck to your Hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Began - Were Began] 500/400 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; Decrease the Attack of your opponents Monsters by 500. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Began' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed by the Effect of a Monster: Select 1 Monster your Opponent controls; The selected Monster loses 1000 Attack. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Chesi - Were Chesi] 300/400 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; Special Summon it. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Chesi' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed by the Effect of a Monster; Add 1 Spell card from your Deck to your Hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Deekan - Were Deekan] 500/100 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; Select 1 'Land of the Wolves' in your deck and activate it. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Deekan' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed by the Effect of a Monster; Until your next Standby Phase: 'Were' Monsters you control can not be targeted by Effects. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Miso - Were Miso] 600/500 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; You can reveal 1 more card in your hand. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Miso' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card Destroys a Monster by Battle; You can reveal a card in your Hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Mortis - Were Mortis] 700/200 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; Randomly select 1 card in your opponents hand and reveal it; If it is a Monster card, increase the Atk of 1 'Wolf' monster by the Atk of the revealed card. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Mortis' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed in the Hand by the Effect of a Monster; Select 1 'Were' Monster; That Monster can Attack your Opponent directly. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Xent - Were Xent] 500/200 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; Increase the Atk of 1 monster you control by 500. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Xent' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed by the Effect of a Monster; Select 1 'Were' Monster on the field; Increase that Monsters Attack by 500. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Wolf Zetas - Were Zetas] 400/500 When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 card in your hand. If this card is revealed in your Hand by a 'Wolf' monster; 'Wolf' monsters you control can not be destroyed by battle until your next Standby Phase. If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. (Image code not generating. Will put here once it is working) This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Banishing 1 'Wolf Zetas' from your side of the field whilst 'Circle Moon' is on the field. When this card destroys a Monster by battle: You can reveal 1 card in your Hand. If this card is revealed in the Hand by the Effect of a Monster; Switch all your Opponents Monsters into Defence position. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [Spoiler=Extra Deck] 1100/400 1 "Wolf" Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner monster. When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 'Wolf' Monster in your hand: If there is another 'Wolf' Monster in your Graveyard with the same name; Special Summon it . If you control another 'Wolf' monster; This card can Attack your Opponent directly. 3 level 3 'Wolf' monsters. When this card is Summoned; Reveal 1 'Wolf' Monster in your hand. Each time a 'Wolf' Monster is revealed from your hand: You can detach a Xyz material: Until the End Phase: This card Attack your Opponent directly. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] Circle Moon Twice per turn: If this card would be destroyed; It is not. Once per turn: During your Main Phase; Select 1 Banished 'Wolf' Monster: Shuffle the selected Monster into your deck; Draw a card. Special Summon 1 "Wolf" monster from your hand to your side of the field.. If this card was revealed in the hand by the effect of a "Wolf" monster; Discard this card and Special Summon 1 "Wolf" monster from your deck to your side of the field. Each time a "Wolf" monster is revealed from your hand this turn, inflict 300 damage to your opponent. If this card was revealed in the hand by the effect of a "Wolf" monster: discard this card; "Wolf" monsters you control can not be destroyed by battle until your next standby phase. Activate only if you control 2 "Wolf" monsters: Select 1 "Wolf" monster you control and Banish it; Destroy 1 card your opponent controls. Any battle damage you take from battles involving "Wolf" monsters is halved. Once per turn: select 1 'Wolf' monster in your graveyard and activate its Effect as though it had been revealed from the hand. (OCG needs work. Really not sure how to word the effect) Until your next Standby Phase: Whenever a 'Wolf' monster inflicts battle damage too your Opponent; You can reveal 1 card in your hand. Treat this card as though it had been revealed by a 'Wolf' monster. (Again, OCG needs work on this card) Return 1 'Wolf' Monster from your side of the field to your hand: You can Normal Summon 1 'Wolf' Monster in addition to your Normal Summon this turn. If this card is revealed in the hand by a 'Wolf' Monster: Discard this card; Draw 2 cards. You can only activate this card at the start of Main Phase 1; Special Summon as many 'Wolf' cards from your Graveyard as possible. You can not Summon any other Monster the turn you use this effect. During the End Phase; Reduce your Lifepoints by 8000. Whenever a 'Wolf' Monster is Destroyed by battle; Special Summon (From your Deck) a 'Wolf' Monster with a lower Attack than the Destroyed Monster. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megaz0rd Posted August 12, 2014 Report Share Posted August 12, 2014 Too many similaratiesto fire fist. kinda seems unoriginal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted August 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2014 Too many similaratiesto fire fist. kinda seems unoriginal In what way are there similarities to Fire Fist? Correct me if I'm mistaken but FF monsters don't reveal from the hand and they can't attack directly due to a effect, which is everything this archetype uses. So the only thing left is the fact that they're the Fire monsters? I'd appreciate it if you could expand on your comment and explain your trail of thought regarding what is similar between the two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted August 12, 2014 Report Share Posted August 12, 2014 Megaz0rd, please abide by the Advanced Clause. If you're going to comment on someone's cards, you must explain your thought process; NOT just say that they resemble Fire Fists. In what way is that so? Given from what I'm saying, the monsters here tend to be on the lower end of the stat spectrum with respect to other monsters of equivalent Level. Granted, a lot of them reveal cards for a power up and get to attack directly if you have another Wolf on the field (and/or offer other useful effects), so I suppose it balances out to an extent. The Main Deck monsters are Level 3, so you could, in theory, use Gravity Bind + some other stall cards to allow them direct attacks without fear (though the introduction of Xyz pretty much weakens this combination). Elder, like the rest of Main Deck, has quite low stats for a Level 5 monster. At 1100/500, it won't last long on its own [and essentially requires the smaller wolves to support it]. Essentially it allows you to SS a copy of a monster from the graveyard if you have it in graveyard first. As a whole, you can afford to buff their stats by 300 or so each and not worry about if they've become broken or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted August 12, 2014 Report Share Posted August 12, 2014 Well ain't you a sight for sore eyes! Haven't seen you around here in a LONG time! ^^ Back on the topic of the set... I'm looking at the backstory first, to get the feel for the set, and to be honest I'm a bit impressed. Don't really hear about the souls of said place residing in the cards (unless we're talking something like normal Duel Spirits or even the Legendary Dragons). All in all, it is good! Now I'm seeing a very consistent Level cap you have, mainly all your monsters being Level 3 (save your Synchro). This not a bad choice, though most archetypes deal with a balanced level of 3s, 4s, and so forth. If you want to utilize the monsters fully (as well as standing a chance against higher attack monsters), you may want to think about adding various levels into the mix. Not only that, but Sakura did mention the use of Xyzs (though it was said it would weaken the combination mentioned in that post). However, with your multiple Level 3s...this would bring out many Rank 3s (namely Zenmanies? <- Spelling). Perhaps, you could find a way to allow Xyzs to play a part within the set to help the monsters, so the combinations will work more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted August 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2014 Thanks for the input people, appreciate it lotsly! @Sakura - Boosting the stats is something I am leaning towards more and more each time I look at the set. Originally, the effects to reveal cards was once per turn on each Wolf, so having two or three on the field and being able to reveal the same one for each to get some major buffs with Alik and Chesi: revealing Alik to grab Chesi and then revealing her to SS and then with her effect revealing another Alik... and it went on. But now that this has been toned down, an increase in stats could work wonders. The whole deck is designed to work very closely together and it would be a very punishing deck to play if you didn't know exactly what you needed to play and when; The exact kind of deck I love! (I topped several tournaments with a Kuriboh deck just like this) @Sonic - Haha, yes! I've been away for two years as my love for the game faded but now I'm designing my own LCG and am using this as a way to get the creative juices flowing. Glad you remember me, must have made a impression :D It took me a while to come up with the right story for them. I'm drafting a Fanfic based on that story, so everything I do on the forums now is all going to be tied together. The level cap I'm drawing is at 3 for the base Monsters. I feel that the game is dominated and controlled by higher level Monsters and I want to show a different perspective with my cards. I'll have a few tweaks and maybe lower the levels of some cards, but raising them makes me sad lol. As for Xyz Monsters; they are coming. I have a few ideas floating around but trying to fit them into correct Ocg is proving more troublesome than I thought, but they are coming and they will make the set mould together more. But this is only the beginning, I have plans for a set expansion to include werewolf versions of the cards as well as fusions with other sets I'm working on (Another re-master of a older set I made and several new ones) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted August 12, 2014 Report Share Posted August 12, 2014 @Sonic - Haha, yes! I've been away for two years as my love for the game faded but now I'm designing my own LCG and am using this as a way to get the creative juices flowing. Glad you remember me, must have made a impression :D It took me a while to come up with the right story for them. I'm drafting a Fanfic based on that story, so everything I do on the forums now is all going to be tied together. The level cap I'm drawing is at 3 for the base Monsters. I feel that the game is dominated and controlled by higher level Monsters and I want to show a different perspective with my cards. I'll have a few tweaks and maybe lower the levels of some cards, but raising them makes me sad lol. As for Xyz Monsters; they are coming. I have a few ideas floating around but trying to fit them into correct Ocg is proving more troublesome than I thought, but they are coming and they will make the set mould together more. But this is only the beginning, I have plans for a set expansion to include werewolf versions of the cards as well as fusions with other sets I'm working on (Another re-master of a older set I made and several new ones) Heh, yep...you and your last wolf set definitely did ^^ And I can definitely understand why you would want a different perspective with levels, especially in this game. And the Xyzs will definitely help in the long run, so can't wait to see what you bring up with those. Now for that set expansion with werewolves and Fusions, I'm definitely awaiting that. Since I'm a HERO user, the Fusion element will be an interesting feature to bring in ^^ Really hoping to see this excel!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted August 24, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2014 After a short beak due to getting married and spending our Honeymoon watching Game of Thrones, I'm back and have added a new Monster, Wolf Dragon of Legend. As the short piece of text explains, even in Teal Dragons were part of the mythology of Duel Monsters and this monster is a way of bringing that into my sets. Expect Xyz next as well as several other sets (Gargant, Demon, Virtue to name a few) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
roeyba Posted August 24, 2014 Report Share Posted August 24, 2014 Hey, I love the cards, and I'd like to program them for YGOPro\DevPro! You'll still have rights on them, of course. Although take in mind that I'm working on 2 other programs now so it'll take some time. Tell me if yes or if no. Thanks Roeyba Also know that these would be hard to program, just give me time to think... :mellow: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted August 28, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 Sure you can use them. Would love too see these come alive :D Updated cards: The set now contains the ability for the Wolves to tap into there more primal nature in the form of Were versions. Not sure if the Were monsters should support other like themseleves (As they are at the moment) or if they should just give better effects to the smaller wolves once they are revealed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted August 28, 2014 Report Share Posted August 28, 2014 Impressive new monsters here! Now I wanna let you know in the Spell list, you have two "Prowl of the Beast", so may have to fix that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted September 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2014 Thanks Chaos, I wanted them to be useful, work with the cards already there but also feel different and I think I managed to balance it quite well. My first ever Xyz Monster has been added to the Monster list! Wasn't too sure of the effect so I'm very open to feedback! And I've fixed the double card issue! Thanks for pointing it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 2, 2014 Report Share Posted September 2, 2014 Hmm, I think for the Xyz monster it should be phrases with: Once per turn: You can detach a Xyz material: Until the End Phase: This card Attack your Opponent directly. But, somewhere in that newly shortened effect here that you have to reveal 1 "Wolf" card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted September 5, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2014 Awesome, thanks. I'll edit it a little later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted September 12, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2014 wo new Spell cards have been added. Bond of the Wolf Spirit is the decks main draw engine OR a way to swarm the field a little more. Final Assault, is a end game attempt at obtaining the win with big risks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 12, 2014 Report Share Posted September 12, 2014 Well, an end game spell, that's new for me to see. Its an impressive concept to say the least on that ^^ Though, it seems almost like it could be used to Xyz and Synchro...if you were able to. Though it REEEEEAAAALLY is a big risk with that ending...not sure about it, in my opinion. As for the Bond, seems like this would be useful for both, and from my experiences, use it for one effect once and after its gone, search it again from deck or grave by another card and use it for the next effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted September 14, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2014 I wanted a all or nothing card to go into the set and having the 'pack' attack as one out of desperation suited. I may edit it and add a reveal effect onto it, but have to think of one first :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted September 15, 2014 Report Share Posted September 15, 2014 I wanted a all or nothing card to go into the set and having the 'pack' attack as one out of desperation suited. I may edit it and add a reveal effect onto it, but have to think of one first :/ I understand. So in short, its a sort of "We're cornered...don't back down, die trying" type concept. We honestly don't really have too many All or Nothing type cards, so it is an interesting idea to say the least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazryl Posted February 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2015 A new spell added! More are coming! Plans for a high level wolf, a were-Xyz and more spells. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted February 26, 2015 Report Share Posted February 26, 2015 Sorry that I have to do this, but basically the 2 month grace period for TC things expired back in November. However, you're free to remake the thread if needed. Basically, it looks more professional this way, instead of bumping a thread that's been buried for a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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