DarkSirey Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 [attachment=42429:newmai.jpg] Effect text: (This card's name is always treated as "Harpie Lady Sisters") When this card is Normal or Special Summoned: Add one "Hysteric" Spell/Trap Card from your Deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your Graveyard and target one "Harpie Lady"; for the rest of this turn that monster is unaffected by other Spell/Trap Cards. You can only activate one effect of "Mai Valentine" once per turn. I wanted to make harpies better and competetiv. - this card can be used with elegant egotist or harpie channeler (making egotist a good card and channeler not a -1) - mai valentine adds hysteric party or hysteric sign, the key card of the harpie deck - mai valentine can protect your monsters, because harpies need their normal summon - mai valentine can't be used with hysteric party or hunting ground the only thing i want to change is that you can add her with hysteric sign. this can create a loop but i didnt have any good idea to fix this problem. so what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 7, 2014 Report Share Posted September 7, 2014 Since you're basing this on an anime character (even if Harpie support), moving this to Pop Culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkSirey Posted September 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 so do i have to switch out name and picture? i just wanted to get feedback in the realistic cards forum because i made a card for the real game not just pop culture art card. this card should fit in the harpie theme not the pop culture art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 8, 2014 Report Share Posted September 8, 2014 Yeah, you'll have to change the name and picture if you want it to go in RC. Everything else is fine. Technically speaking, real card discussion does go on in this section as well so either way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeLukeX Posted September 25, 2014 Report Share Posted September 25, 2014 Hmmm... You wouldn't somehow be able to take Mai Valentine and have her in a "Cyber Shield" outfit for the artwork, would you? The eff is just broken... It can be activated off Egotist Summon and Harpies are actually borderline OP. They just need one more good PUSH to make them Tier 0 IMO... I think this would just about be the push they need. T'wud be like Dragunity's, they kept getting indirect support and at one point just had to give and voila, were SUPER OP for a short time. Then Tempest and Ravine got hit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizore-Shirayuki Posted September 26, 2014 Report Share Posted September 26, 2014 (This card's name is always treated as "Harpie Lady Sisters") When this card is Normal or Special Summoned: Add one "Hysteric" Spell/Trap Card from your Deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your Graveyard and target one "Harpie Lady" on the field; for the rest of this turn that monster is unaffected by other Spell/Trap Cards. You can only use 1 ""Mai Valentine"" effect per turn, and only once that turn. This card is busted, but its cool. I fixed up the text for you. I always forget to get rid of other when I copy and paste Lance's text to a monster too, lmao. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 26, 2014 Report Share Posted September 26, 2014 @Mizore: You have to explain why it's busted, even if someone already noted it, not just give OCG fixes [even if this is Pop Culture, by definition]. I'll fix it a bit further, then give brief CnC (This card's name is always treated as "Harpie Lady Sisters") When this card is Normal or Special Summoned: Add 1 "Hysteric" Spell/Trap Card from your Deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your Graveyard and target 1 "Harpie Lady" on the field; that monster is unaffected by Spell/Trap Cards until the End Phase. You can only use 1 "Mai Valentine" effect per turn, and only once that turn. As already mentioned, draws their floodgate (Hysteric) and either allows them to make that Xyz dragon of theirs or whatever. Granted, I don't play Harpies so not sure on how broken they are (if that's the case). That being said, it does offer some protection to another Harpie in question [it is Mai's signature Archetype after all], considering the S/T cards out there. Hysterical Sign, by its effect, should be able to add Mai [given her name is treated as "Harpie Lady Sisters" and should qualify, though by effect]. (Then again, the TC hasn't shown up since posting this) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mizore-Shirayuki Posted September 26, 2014 Report Share Posted September 26, 2014 Well, this card is busted because it lets you search Hysteric Party for free, (a +1) then resolving that party is always at least +2 followed by game on board this or the next turn. The combos with this is sick. You get to play it off of egotist, it even pays for itself when it dies. Its a stand alone monster in the main deck that nets free advantage. Searching Hysteric Party is probably the only reason this is broken imo. But like I said its cool because Harpies areant too overpowered, or consistently overpowered that is. This would certainly put them there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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