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I really like this. The textures and shapes but there are a few things which make it "ehhhhh".

 

First and most importantly, your lighting. Atm, the flare definitely doesn't work. I'd suggest letting everything fall to shadow and then gradually increase in lighting as you approach the focal (captain america). It'll give it something similar to a centric composition.

 

Secondly, the colours. Most are good, some just don't mix well. Play around more with gradient maps, colour balance, photo filters, etc. Basically: experiment.

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I really like this. The textures and shapes but there are a few things which make it "ehhhhh".

 

First and most importantly, your lighting. Atm, the flare definitely doesn't work. I'd suggest letting everything fall to shadow and then gradually increase in lighting as you approach the focal (captain america). It'll give it something similar to a centric composition.

 

Secondly, the colours. Most are good, some just don't mix well. Play around more with gradient maps, colour balance, photo filters, etc. Basically: experiment.

 

Oh, perfect ! That's just the kind of comment i wanted ! Many thanks Ali' ! I think I'll make a 2nd version... but before that, I have an avi to make   ;)

 

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