Woloa Posted June 19, 2015 Report Share Posted June 19, 2015 So, I failed miserably the first time I did this, but, I've got my experience now, so, I'm starting this archetype again. [spoiler=Early Works]Toy Doll500Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card is Normal Summoned, you can: You can Special Summon up to 2 "Toy Doll" from your Deck. Bladed Doll1600Atk/1000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card attacks a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard).Doll Guardna0Atk/2000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card is attacked by a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard).Doll Monstrosity?Atk/?Def, Level 5, Fusion, Warrior-Type, Dark3 "Doll" monsters with different namesThis cards attack and defense are equal to the number of "Doll" monsters in your graveyard x 500. Whenever this face up card would be destroyed by a card effect, you may banish two "Doll" monsters from the graveyard instead of sending it to the graveyard [spoiler=Later Works]Maker Doll:1000Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Spellcaster Type, DarkWhile you control this face up card: If you would Tribute Summon a "Doll" monster, you can discard Monster Cards equal to the number of Tributes needed to Tribute Summon that "Doll" monster. Whenever a "Doll" monster you control is sent to the graveyard, you may return 1 "Doll" monster of a lower level from your graveyard to your hand.Blue-Eyes Doll Dragon2300Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, DarkYou may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 8 and its original attack points become 2600Red-Eyes Doll Dragon2200Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, DarkYou may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 7 and its original attack points become 2400Buster Doll2400Atk/2000Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, DarkThis face up card gains 250 attack points for each Dragon-Type or Beast-Type monster your opponent controls or is in their graveyardHuge Shield Doll2000Atk/3200Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, DarkOnce per turn, this face up monster can not be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn when another "Doll" monster you control is targeted for an attack, change the attack's target to this card. You can only use one "Huge Shield Doll" effect per turn, and only once that turn.Restoration Doll1200Atk/3000Def, Level 6, Spellcaster Type, DarkWhenever this face up card battles an opponent's monster you may: Special summon 1 level 4 or lower "Doll" monster from your graveyard. Or: Return 1 level 5 or higher "Doll" monster from your graveyard to your hand. [spoiler=The Magnum Opus]Anne, Doll of the Curse2500Atk/2500Def, Ritual, Level 8, Spellcaster-Type, DarkCan not be normal summoned or set, can only be special summoned through the effects of "Crazed Dollmaker's Curse", "Crazed Dollmaker's Toolbox", or "The Final Sermon". This face up card gains 250 Attack and Defense points for each other "Doll" monster on the fieldCrazed Dollmaker's Curse:Used to Ritual Summon "Anne, Doll of the Curse", you must also offer monsters from your hand and field who's total levels add up to 8 or more. When a battle involving "Anne, Doll of the Curse" is being conducted you may banish this card from the graveyard: increase the attack points of the involved "Anne, Doll of the Curse" by the attack points of the other involved monster. [spoiler=Dark Magic (Spells)]Pot of Doll PartsDraw 1 card for each "Doll" monster you control, "Doll" monsters can not attack for the rest of the turn.Crazed Dollmaker's ToolboxContinuous SpellEach time a "Doll" monster is summoned or destoryed, place 1 Parts Counter on this card. You may, by sending this card to the graveyard, special summon 1 "Doll" monster from your graveyard who's level was equal to or less than the number of Parts Counter it hadModular DesignContinuous Spell"Doll" monsters you control may ignore the conditions on Equip spell cards. [spoiler=Traps (ran out of creativity)]Cursed Barrier:Continuous TrapActivate this card by selecting 1 "Doll" monster you control, as long as this card stays face up on the field, that monster can not be destroyed by battle or by card effects, and neither player takes damage from battles involving itCursed BlowbackActivate this card only if you control a face up "Anne, Doll of the Curse", negate your opponent's attack and end their battle phase. Your opponent then takes damage equal to the number of monsters they control x 300 Edit 1: Fixed wording on the early and later works sections. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forest Fire Posted June 19, 2015 Report Share Posted June 19, 2015 [spoiler First Set]Toy Doll500Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card is Normal Summoned, you can: You can Special Summon up to 2 "Toy Doll" from your Deck. In order to have correct ocg, this card needs a name before "Doll" to stop you from SSing other "Doll"s, which is what I assume you wanted. Bladed Doll1600Atk/1000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card attacks a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard). Doll Guardna0Atk/2000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card is attacked by a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard). Doll Monstrosity?Atk/?Def, Level 5, Fusion, Warrior-Type, Dark3 "Doll" monsters with different namesThis cards attack and defense are equal to the number of "Doll" monsters in your graveyard x 500. Whenever this face up card would be destroyed by a card effect, you may banish two "Doll" monsters from the graveyard instead of sending it to the graveyard.Those are two separate statements. [spoiler Second Set]Maker Doll:1000Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Spellcaster Type, DarkWhile you control this face up card: If you would Tribute Summon a "Doll" monster, you can discard Monster Cards equal to the number of Tributes needed to Tribute Summon that "Doll" monster. Whenever a "Doll" monster you control is sent to the graveyard, you may return 1 "Doll" monster of a lower level from your graveyard to your hand. Blue-Eyes Doll Dragon2300Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, DarkYou may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 8 and its original attack points become 2600 Red-Eyes Doll Dragon2200Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, DarkYou may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 7 and its original attack points become 2400 Um. This is an interesting twist on an existing effect. I'm not really sure how if this would work, but I'm not sure why it wouldn't. Buster Doll2400Atk/2000Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, DarkThis face-up card gains 250 attack points for each Dragon-Type or Beast-Type monster your opponent controls or is in their graveyard. Huge Shield Doll2000Atk/3200Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, DarkOnce per turn, this face-up monster can not be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn when another "Doll" monster you control is targeted for an attack, change the attack's target to this card. You can only use one "Huge Shield Doll" effect per turn, and only once that turn. Restoration Doll1200Atk/3000Def, Level 6, Spellcaster Type, DarkWhenever this face-up card battles an opponent's monster you may: Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Doll" monster from your graveyard; Or: Return 1 level 5 or higher "Doll" monster from your graveyard to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woloa Posted June 19, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2015 [spoiler First Set]Toy Doll500Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card is Normal Summoned, you can: You can Special Summon up to 2 "Toy Doll" from your Deck. In order to have correct ocg, this card needs a name before "Doll" to stop you from SSing other "Doll"s, which is what I assume you wanted. Bladed Doll1600Atk/1000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card attacks a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard). Doll Guardna0Atk/2000Def, Level 4, Warrior-Type, DarkIf this card is attacked by a monster, negate that monster's effects (including in the Graveyard). Doll Monstrosity?Atk/?Def, Level 5, Fusion, Warrior-Type, Dark3 "Doll" monsters with different namesThis cards attack and defense are equal to the number of "Doll" monsters in your graveyard x 500. Whenever this face up card would be destroyed by a card effect, you may banish two "Doll" monsters from the graveyard instead of sending it to the graveyard.Those are two separate statements. [spoiler Second Set]Maker Doll:1000Atk/1000Def, Level 3, Spellcaster Type, DarkWhile you control this face up card: If you would Tribute Summon a "Doll" monster, you can discard Monster Cards equal to the number of Tributes needed to Tribute Summon that "Doll" monster. Whenever a "Doll" monster you control is sent to the graveyard, you may return 1 "Doll" monster of a lower level from your graveyard to your hand. Blue-Eyes Doll Dragon2300Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, DarkYou may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 8 and its original attack points become 2600 Red-Eyes Doll Dragon2200Atk/2000Def, Level 5, Dragon Type, DarkYou may summon this card from your hand for 2 tributes, if you do: its level becomes 7 and its original attack points become 2400 Um. This is an interesting twist on an existing effect. I'm not really sure how if this would work, but I'm not sure why it wouldn't. Buster Doll2400Atk/2000Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, DarkThis face-up card gains 250 attack points for each Dragon-Type or Beast-Type monster your opponent controls or is in their graveyard. Huge Shield Doll2000Atk/3200Def, Level 7, Warrior Type, DarkOnce per turn, this face-up monster can not be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn when another "Doll" monster you control is targeted for an attack, change the attack's target to this card. You can only use one "Huge Shield Doll" effect per turn, and only once that turn. Restoration Doll1200Atk/3000Def, Level 6, Spellcaster Type, DarkWhenever this face-up card battles an opponent's monster you may: Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Doll" monster from your graveyard; Or: Return 1 level 5 or higher "Doll" monster from your graveyard to your hand. Thank yah sir, it's good to know that most of what I did wrong was wording, I always fall into that pitfall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forest Fire Posted June 19, 2015 Report Share Posted June 19, 2015 Thank yah sir, it's good to know that most of what I did wrong was wording, I always fall into that pitfall.No problem. I'm really supposed to have given you feedback on the archetype though. Or at least some of the cards. Anyways, something that always helped me with wording was remembering this: "Activation timing: cost and/or targeting; effect." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Woloa Posted June 28, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2015 The home of these cards is now http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/336170-written-fanfiction-cards-no-not-of-existing-ones-thats-later/Any updates to the set will be placed there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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