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Plot: In a forum ruled by one admin, there are many who seek such a position, be it for power, riches, land, corruption, or justice. All the same, the Game of Forums plays on.

 

Rules:

 

-Forum rules apply.

-Creative Writing section rules apply.

-Do not ask to be in the fic.

-If you are a part of the fic but are not satisfied with your character, PM me. Do not post personal complaints in the thread.

-Do not ask when the next installment will be posted. Resort to PM or other places where it is not considered spam.

 

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Prologue - The Fate of the Watcher *608 words*
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Enjoy! Feedback is appreciated.

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I had my phone scrolled so the identity of Crab Helmet was just out of sight as I read up to it, and realized who she was just before seeing the name. Gotta admit, that moment had me hyping hard.

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Prologue

 

I'm glad. This has me processing the first chapter, which is a good feeling.


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I've gotta admit that the issue with Crab Helmet predates my activity here on the forum, but the reveal still had quite the effect. I really enjoyed the prologue. I think this theme/setting will be interesting to see developed. Can't wait to see more!


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That was a really great start, set the tone so very well. :D


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Couldn't have asked for a start that would better set the tone than Crab Helmet doing that.  Looking most forward to seeing how this story progresses.


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Glad y'all enjoyed it. I'll be sure to get the first chapter up soon.

 

EDIT: Let the fun begin:

 

1 - The Wielder of the Greatsword (1079 words)

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I don't honestly know what to expect from the Dwellers, and those guards seem a little overly relaxed given the situation they were just in, but I like it and want to read more.


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I don't honestly know what to expect from the Dwellers, and those guards seem a little overly relaxed given the situation they were just in, but I like it and want to read more.

 

Good to hear.

 

As far as the guards


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Finally, took you long enough to start this shit.

 

Promising so far. Not much to say as of right now, just keep it interesting. 



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Finally, took you long enough to start this shit.

 

Promising so far. Not much to say as of right now, just keep it interesting. 

 

Trust me, this is just the start. As for the rest, I'll leave that to the promising bit.


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So what you're telling me is
I can dig it. That was pretty cool, and amusing, keep it up. ^^


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So what you're telling me is
I can dig it. That was pretty cool, and amusing, keep it up. ^^

 

What I really meant was

 

Biut I see what you mean.


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What I really meant was

 

Biut I see what you mean.

See I would have caught that if I had watched/read that. But either way, I at least got the general idea I guess. XD

*excited*


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See I would have caught that if I had watched/read that. But either way, I at least got the general idea I guess. XD

*excited*

 

They both have a similar sword, but that's even MORE interesting for me.


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What I really meant was

 

Damn, my mental image is right. So far looks quite interesting, though I did share Creator's sentiment that the guards felt like they're a bit acting erratically, but I guess your explanation works.

 

This is going to be quite a ride, it seems.


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1

 

Can't wait to see the other houses. 



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*Reads prologue and Chapter 1*

Thoughts

 

This is shaping up to be a pretty good fic, and I can't wait for more.


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Chapter 1 is up already???

 

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Loved the prologue, you can never have too much CrabxYCMaker interaction.

I see Black is TCG's Jon Snow, I could see that. I'd say hopefully he doesn't see have to see as much shit, but we all know that'd be kidding ourselves.

Good start, looking forward to what you do here.


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