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Speeding robot, Quick Man! (Edited)


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You can Special Summon this card by banishing one Machine Type Monster from the field. Once per turn, you can Tribute one monster on your side of the field, this card can make attacks equal to the Tributed Monster's level/rank.

 

Well? Is this too much?

 

(Edit: Wow, forgetting one word can completely change an effect)

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You can Special Summon this card (from your hand/ Graveyard) by banishing one Machine Type Monster from the field. Once per turn, you can Tribute one monster on your side of the field, this card gains attack equal to the Tributed Monster's level/rank (x X).

 

Well? Is this too much?

Replace the big x with a number (like 500). This could get away with being level 6. um... it's cute? like... it's a card with attack modulation... there's so much that just says nope to this that it would have absolutely no impact.

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Replace the big x with a number (like 500). This could get away with being level 6. um... it's cute? like... it's a card with attack modulation... there's so much that just says nope to this that it would have absolutely no impact.

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You just made me realize I messed up. Hang on.

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You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing one 1 Machine-Type monster from either side of the field. Once per turn,: you can tribute one 1 monster on your side of the field you control; this card can make attacks equal to the tributed Monster's Level/Rank during this turn's Battle Phase.

 

I fixed your PSCT. This is an interesting effect that works for Quick Man.

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I fixed your PSCT. This is an interesting effect that works for Quick Man.

Keep in mind that OCG fixes don't count as a proper review of the card.

You can do them, but has to be accompanied by stuff related to the design/flavor.

 

As it stands though, Summoning conditions are essentially an easier version of Fortress Dragon's, and assuming I read this properly, you Tribute 1 monster + this gets multiple attacks permanently.

Yeah, it does way too much for little effort.

 

It wouldn't be as-bad if its summon conditions were identical to Darkness Metal; restricted to your field (but even then, you'd still have a few options).

As for its attacking effect, the ATK boost was fine.

 

It would've been nothing but a beatstick, however it isn't as bad as gaining Overdragon's multiple attack capacity. 

 

Just have it be able to attack twice, and that's it.

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Keep in mind that OCG fixes don't count as a proper review of the card.

You can do them, but has to be accompanied by stuff related to the design/flavor.

 

As it stands though, Summoning conditions are essentially an easier version of Fortress Dragon's, and assuming I read this properly, you Tribute 1 monster + this gets multiple attacks permanently.

Yeah, it does way too much for little effort.

 

It wouldn't be as-bad if its summon conditions were identical to Darkness Metal; restricted to your field (but even then, you'd still have a few options).

As for its attacking effect, the ATK boost was fine.

 

It would've been nothing but a beatstick, however it isn't as bad as gaining Overdragon's multiple attack capacity.

 

Just have it be able to attack twice, and that's it.

WHY DO I KEEP FORGETTING THINGS!?

 

The multiple attacks were supposed to be an 'until the end of the turn' thing. Does that make it better?

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>Normal Summon Night Express Knight

>SS Derricrane with its own eff

>Banish one of those two, SS this

>Tribute the other

>10 attacks this turn

ayyy lmao

Congrats, you are now one of my friends. We break cards all the time.

 

 

Okay, I get it, it needs a nerf with that effect.

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