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Freya is the main character of a story that i've been writing. I was going to put the story in the "Creative writing section" -and link it- but my chapter's aren't nearly long enough to be allowed.

 

 

*I already posted the character before relizing this... so hopefully this works out.*
Freya comes from a world of-as you can guess- dragons. Lot's of them.

A long time ago dragons where evil. then a group showed up with the power to take a dragon's power, and nearly wiped out the dragons.
That went as you might expect. Some dragon's where hatched by humanoids and became riders. Some used a shapeshifting spell to blend in with the humans, and create half dragons. Some dragons stayed hidden.

 

Name: Freya

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So... leaving a couple chars here. The one I can improve on most will be the one that goes into RP Smash (once it starts accepting apps ofc). If there's no increase in difficulty between the two, then the one with the higher score will receive the honor of going in.

 

Ace: https://forum.yugioh...ting/?p=6811135

Undertakers: https://forum.yugioh...dnot-accepting/

 

The other char I was debating running in Smash: https://forum.yugioh...inal/?p=6234634

Respective RP that char was in: https://forum.yugioh...r-arc-iv-final/

 

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Bear in mind that the one below was one I made like... literally 5 and a half years ago, so even with the improvement of quality it might've had in being introduced to the GCRP, there's still that notable difference said char and Ace. So... yeah. Let's slavedrive Cow a bit and make him review both, shall we? :]


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Freya is the main character of a story that i've been writing. I was going to put the story in the "Creative writing section" -and link it- but my chapter's aren't nearly long enough to be allowed.

 

 

*I already posted the character before relizing this... so hopefully this works out.*
Freya comes from a world of-as you can guess- dragons. Lot's of them.

A long time ago dragons where evil. then a group showed up with the power to take a dragon's power, and nearly wiped out the dragons.
That went as you might expect. Some dragon's where hatched by humanoids and became riders. Some used a shapeshifting spell to blend in with the humans, and create half dragons. Some dragons stayed hidden.

 

Name: Freya

Review

I feel like a jerk :P I will say the story idea could be fun with some polish and expansion.

 

I'll try and edit/post at least one of Stalfos's a bit later.


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So... leaving a couple chars here. The one I can improve on most will be the one that goes into RP Smash (once it starts accepting apps ofc). If there's no increase in difficulty between the two, then the one with the higher score will receive the honor of going in.

 

Ace: https://forum.yugioh...ting/?p=6811135

Undertakers: https://forum.yugioh...dnot-accepting/

 

The other char I was debating running in Smash: https://forum.yugioh...inal/?p=6234634

Respective RP that char was in: https://forum.yugioh...r-arc-iv-final/

 

...

 

Bear in mind that the one below was one I made like... literally 5 and a half years ago, so even with the improvement of quality it might've had in being introduced to the GCRP, there's still that notable difference said char and Ace. So... yeah. Let's slavedrive Cow a bit and make him review both, shall we? :]

Ace Review


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I would like a review silss voos plate!

https://forum.yugioh...ting/?p=6948015


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I would like a review silss voos plate!
https://forum.yugioh...ting/?p=6948015

I'm quite unconvinced that Jack is someone who would ever be in a situation to calmly explain herself in that tryhard "badass" tone. It also seems really weird they couldn't kidnap some other suitable guinea pig; it's not hard to make up some explanation, but without said explanation, it sounds awfully contrived.

While her whole motivation seems to be revenge, there seems to be some morality in her (or that's the idea I get when she comments on the criminal acts she was forced to do), and I'm disappointed that her moral views are not elaborated on at all.

Overall, the character seems pretty one-track with the vengeful rebel image and feels lacking in depth. I'm sure writing her will get her more depth, but what I see in the app itself doesn't impress me.

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I would like a review silss voos plate!

https://forum.yugioh...ting/?p=6948015

Since the other one is short I figured I might as well review too.

 

Review

 

Okay so I am gonna say now that I likely won't do reviews very fast. That's clear from the dates of these things but I wanted to get it said. I've done a lot and it can be a little draining at times.

I'm also gonna contact my other reviewers to see if they're still interested and set some kind of "You must review or be taken off list" because honestly I'm weird and having the names there without good reason bugs me.


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Gonna make it official.

I am now, due to Aix and Dad withdrawing, and Cherz and DK vanishing on me, the only reviewer.

So that's a thing. Until someone else decides to try (don't forget to check how to do this) and become one.


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Well, I've somehow made a character in 1 day. Guess that means I really like the RP he's gonna be in. 

 

Dear, sweet cow, Would you review my ostrich boi?

 

OoC:https://forum.yugioh...h-signupsoocns/

Synopsis of OoC: It's earth but the Timeline has been altered a bit in that some historical events took a different turn. Also there's magic. And not just humans. There's a magic school in the sky and the chars are students there. 

 

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Head in the sand... Literally


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Approved by the mighty beef himself, I have reviewed one of his chars.
 

Now that I got things all cleared up with...things, I will try and review soon. Just making sure y'all know I didn't forget. Probably tomorrow I'll get one or two done.
 
In the meantime. Here, my literal first RP character. It's not good, but I am very fond of them nonetheless. I don't expect much from this. I assume the review will be very short, given there's not a ton there. I was very unsure how much I was supposed to write, and how in depth I could go and such.
 
The RP: http://forum.yugiohc...l-atlantica-ooc
The character: http://forum.yugiohc...-ooc/?p=6520782

 

Alrighty then, let's crack open this cyber-trap-maid. That's a list of words I've never thought I'd use together.

Appearance wise, they do fit the trap aesthetic, but I personally would've preferred more than just a head shot. Either a bust at the very least or a written description, specifically the cybernetics and if they're visible. His weight is also not mentioned, which while not exactly the most important thing, I like so that I have a general idea of their body shape.

Next we have the personality. A hyper-focusing perfectionist who needs auditory stimulation. From my understanding, this character just might be on the autism spectrum. I like that, it's a subtle and impacted personality. But besides that, the maid-sub cliche is strong with this one. There's also the cliche of being faunaphobic without any real explanation. I, for one, would like to know why he's so spooked by animals.

Biography is short and more than a little bit vague. was a nanny child until he almost died, then his dad used him as a test tube. I wanna know more about this accident. Gimmie the juicy details about how he danced with death. Also still no explanation as to where the cybernetics are. Rather... irksome.

The abilities at first seam pretty standared for a cyborg, but then the cloaking device. It's a bit abnormal, but fits fairly well with his personality. Not sure how much it'd be used, since from what I can gather the RP was more of a comedy than anything that required cloaking.

All in all, This char is the typical kind of trap maid with a little bit of cybernetics thrown in for good measure. I would've liked to have had more details, especially in regard to the cybernetics, his overall appearance, and his biography.

C+ bordering B- overall.

 

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And now we welcome the first of the new reviewers!

Junior Reviewer, Aez!

Their style is different from mine as you can see which means more variety in reviews!

 

Also I will try and review your character, Aez, Saturday cause I have that day off.


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Well, I've somehow made a character in 1 day. Guess that means I really like the RP he's gonna be in. 

 

Dear, sweet cow, Would you review my ostrich boi?

 

OoC:https://forum.yugioh...h-signupsoocns/

Synopsis of OoC: It's earth but the Timeline has been altered a bit in that some historical events took a different turn. Also there's magic. And not just humans. There's a magic school in the sky and the chars are students there. 

 

Char:

Head in the sand... Literally

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Plz review my things, senpais.

The RP: https://forum.yugioh...progress/page-1

The character: https://forum.yugioh...ress/?p=6947713

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I'm on the busier end of my life rn so idk if I can do it anytime soon (especially considering I need to make an RP post myself [shhhhh]), but if cow doesn't get to it first, I'll do it.

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Plz review my things, senpais.

The RP: https://forum.yugioh...progress/page-1

The character: https://forum.yugioh...ress/?p=6947713

Whoops I got so used to there not being anything here.

 

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