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[Original Work] :Alive: Book 1: The Southern Suffering [Rated M | 18+]

Violence Language Some Sexual Content Fiction


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Chapter 36: Death Rattle


Edited by Dad, 26 October 2018 - 11:22 AM.

Drowning in your silence.

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>Finishes reading Ch. 35

>Sees you take next post with preparations for Ch. 36

...damn you work fast.


Anyway, this has been coming for a WHILE now. Last time I commented was Ch. 25, so this one is gonna be more.


Every chapter after 25 (still can't get over the coolness factor that Amaris has reached with this Broken Fayth of his), has been getting better and better and better still! You mentioned to me that there would be some stuff that would happen with the Discus later...but I wasn't for a second ever thinking they'd be used like that. Plus, the unlocking of the Broken Fayths between Riku and Des has gotten me more excited right now. Oh and I still hate Lindow with a passion, but I won't get into that. Nevertheless, with each chapter, I've been having more questions than answers...and I love it!


I'm looking forward to Ch. 36 and how Des handles things. Plus, hopefully we'll get more answers ;D You keep doin' amazing work with this story, my man!

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