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I'll deal with this one.

Thank god, but his is like crazy long lol.

*has still not reviewed anything*

Lazy reviewer.

7/10.

If you want to review some, you can check the OP. there's some that needs reviewing ;)

That's Dova's list/job, not mine.

Next in line, please.
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Really interesting this idea of multiples review

 

Not sure if im doing it correctly, anyway

This is the vampire support i made some weeks ago :3

 

http://forum.yugiohc...-revamped-1111/


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Really interesting this idea of multiples review

 

Not sure if im doing it correctly, anyway

This is the vampire support i made some weeks ago :3

 

http://forum.yugiohc...-revamped-1111/

Sure. I have to finish homework now, but check back after 10 hours or so for a completed CnC on your post.


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Juano, I finished your CnC.

 

Next in line, please.


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I'd like for my Worm cards to be reviewed, if anyone's got the time.

 

LIGHT Attribute, Reptile-Type "Worm" Monsters; one of the many things in this world that needs to return.


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Not to seem impatient, but was I going to get a CnC?


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I'd like for my Worm cards to be reviewed, if anyone's got the time.

 

LIGHT Attribute, Reptile-Type "Worm" Monsters; one of the many things in this world that needs to return.

Check back at this thread later because I will mention if I have finished your CnC.

 

Not to seem impatient, but was I going to get a CnC?

Did Dova not do anything? Again?


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Check back at this thread later because I will mention if I have finished your CnC.

 

Did Dova not do anything? Again?

Hyup. Nothing.


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Check back at this thread later because I will mention if I have finished your CnC.

 

Did Dova not do anything? Again?

=l
 

Check back in this thread later. I will post again after I finish yours and the worms.


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You will notice I am viewing the thread. I have had it open for the past two days.



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You will notice I am viewing the thread. I have had it open for the past two days.

In any case, if I assumed something incorrect, then I'm sorry. I was just a bit confused, is all.


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You will notice I am viewing the thread. I have had it open for the past two days.

Kk, looks like i won't need to CnC again.
 
HalohbotTech is now barred from this thread until he actually creates cards with thought into them. I lost about 50% of my brain cells trying to CnC that. 
 
Until then, consider me KIA.

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Completely overhauled the Archetype (I believe).

 

Also, sorry @Yuuji Kazami for the horrible card effects and overpowered-ness of the archetype- as you said, not much thought was put into the cards when originally creating them, though stating that ALL my cards are like that was a bit obscene.

 

Though after slogging through what I screwed up with, I can understand the frustration. The sarcasm was not warranted, though the criticism was much appreciated. Link is still the same, if anyone should feel a need to note if I need to change more.

 

Again, sorry for the shoddy Archetype work. My other work is much, much better than this. I am wholesomely sorry @Yuuji Kazami for the shitstorm I put you through. Have a good day everyone.


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Cri, I've been criticizing it like an Advanced Multiples.



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Cri, I've been criticizing it like an Advanced Multiples.

Lol, well... I created a new archetype and need feedback on it as well. So I guess I'll submit a request as well for what I currently have? XD

 

I'll be back to help review again soon. Making these really helped me regain my sanity. <3

 

http://forum.yugiohc...it-archetype-6/

 

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I promise I'll get both done soon. Just got 2 assessment tasks due next week, and school's being annoying.



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Can I get some constructive criticism for my Psychic Empire archetype? :3

And if you don't mind Dova, I'd be happy to help as a reviewer.
Finished Archetypes/ Cards
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http://forum.yugiohc...pire-archetype/

 

Can I get some constructive criticism for my Psychic Empire archetype? 

 

And if you don't mind Dova, I'm happy to help out. 

Nope, because you didn't read the submission rules.

 

Edit: If you're too busy, Dova, I'll come back. Still have to finish Porygon girl's Origami archetype.


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Just give me a bit. I'll have it done.



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Had to finish 19 cards, whew. 

 

I was saying that if you need help with the reviews you need to get done, I can take some off your hands.


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