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[Thar] My Splices


Thar

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I really like what you achieved here, but there are a few issues i notice. Not really errors, just design choices I wasn't fond of.

 

The two added bits on the forehead seem really random. You spliced them in really freaking well, to the point I had to check Glalie to see if they were normally there. In any case, I feel the asymmetry really hurts the flow of the piece.

 

The other issue was the impossibility of the mouth. The way it is shown, the jaw sould extend far back below the head/body, but there is nothing there.

 

Honestly, these are just nitpicks, it was an awesome sprite overall, with a just about flawless execution.

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The other issue was the impossibility of the mouth. The way it is shown, the jaw sould extend far back below the head/body, but there is nothing there.

 

Ah, I see it now. Could've just scratched in a jawline at the bottom right corner to make that look right.

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