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Alright sounds good. Should be plenty to work in terms of making my dude. Thank you kindly good sir.


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Alright, speaking of Draken, what about those whom live in a swamp. What elements would be prevalent in addition to the obvious of water? And is acid a possible breath weapon for the race?



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Alright, speaking of Draken, what about those whom live in a swamp. What elements would be prevalent in addition to the obvious of water? And is acid a possible breath weapon for the race?

Dark, Water, maybe Nature. And well Dark could potentially be some sort of corrosive sludge I suppose.


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Those were actually answer that confirmed my thoughts. Back to scheming, then.



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Questions for dark magic: Does the user have to be chaotic so to speak?

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Questions for dark magic: Does the user have to be chaotic so to speak?

Not at all. The elements occasionally have certain traits that represent the element better than other. But it's not a "must be". Plus fire is more chaotic than dark anyway.


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(maybe) Not an Edgelord


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Guess I shoulda said a while ago that my app's finished.

That said I'm of course open to any desired tweaks/changes/clarifications/harsh rejections/petting/treats/etc.


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Seems to be pretty good from what I can tell. His seriousness during a hunt was a little surprising due to the rest, but I suppose it could make sense.

Also yeah he's VERY short for a Draken. He's even a little short for a human male XD

The powers and abilities seem fine, but be warned that hand-to-hand is very dangerous and you'll have to be extra careful about that. especially if you're up against something like a dire bear

As for the spirit...

she's hot

Seems about right for what I'd expect. I'd like to know how long the dance of flames last for and how damaging the fire tends to be, you say normal fire so I assume nothing crazy powerful.

Also as to burning things. While possible just keep in mind that Spirits in general can't interact very well with non-chosen and spirits and thus their affect on the world itself isn't QUITE as strong as a regular person would be.

 

I can't see anything WRONG with it atm, but will look it over more when time comes for me to make more decisions. For now... *pets* good boy


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Seems to be pretty good from what I can tell. His seriousness during a hunt was a little surprising due to the rest, but I suppose it could make sense.

Also yeah he's VERY short for a Draken. He's even a little short for a human male XD

The powers and abilities seem fine, but be warned that hand-to-hand is very dangerous and you'll have to be extra careful about that. especially if you're up against something like a dire bear

As for the spirit...

she's hot

Seems about right for what I'd expect. I'd like to know how long the dance of flames last for and how damaging the fire tends to be, you say normal fire so I assume nothing crazy powerful.

Also as to burning things. While possible just keep in mind that Spirits in general can't interact very well with non-chosen and spirits and thus their affect on the world itself isn't QUITE as strong as a regular person would be.

 

I can't see anything WRONG with it atm, but will look it over more when time comes for me to make more decisions. For now... *pets* good boy

 

I have not yet begun to walltext Cow. And no worries on the height. Growth spurts are real. Believe in the dream.

 

Sank you for the warning on hand to hand. The skill with the spirit was sorta meant to give him something of a range. Guess I'd have to see how the first few skirmishes go to see if a weapon's needed. Then a training arc can ensue yes good.

 

And I will look into further explaining the dance given the information you have provided. And yes she's hot. And a fire spirit. Aren't you witty.

 

Anywho pleasure doing business with you cowcow.

 

EDIT: Bumped his height up to 5'9" so he's still short but not soooo terribly shrimpy. And added some stuff on the dance. Will probably keep tweaking little things here and there all around the app tomorrow too.


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Come Sunday (A week after OOC started) I'll start looking into accepting people fully. It'll probably be a process that lasts the whole week.


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App done n stuff, if I did anything wrong just lemme know. I am open to change stuffs.


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Come Sunday (A week after OOC started) I'll start looking into accepting people fully. It'll probably be a process that lasts the whole week.

 

I figured you would do something like that. So I'm doing my biography and all that on word so I can tweak it with ease. Once I like it, I'll post it.


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Come Sunday (A week after OOC started) I'll start looking into accepting people fully. It'll probably be a process that lasts the whole week.

 

I should probably start cracking on that :P


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Announcing our first official Chosen! The Chosen of Nature has been discovered.

And now I'll look over Cherz's dude.

 

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Pretty good from what I can see. Though the question comes of...why a coup? What was the reasoning? It seems somewhat random.

Oh. Also. Spirits have bare minimum interaction with the natural world despite being able to interact with the chosen and other spirits. I'm not fully sure they CAN cut ropes.

The curses, particularly the Strength Leech, might be too strong. Sudden unstoppable severe strength loss is kinda a big deal. Same for the armor destruction of the other one.
Imagine this stuff being used against your own character, for instance. I mean not to say it won't but that combined with the physical ability is a bit much.

The Spirit shouldn't have his combat ability, as in, he wouldn't be able to harm people with these claws. Unless that's specifically his skill to temporarily be in combat. In which case the first ability would have to go and the other would have to be temporary.


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Announcing our first official Chosen! The Chosen of Nature has been discovered.

And now I'll look over Cherz's dude.

 

Pretty good from what I can see. Though the question comes of...why a coup? What was the reasoning? It seems somewhat random.

Oh. Also. Spirits have bare minimum interaction with the natural world despite being able to interact with the chosen and other spirits. I'm not fully sure they CAN cut ropes.

The curses, particularly the Strength Leech, might be too strong. Sudden unstoppable severe strength loss is kinda a big deal. Same for the armor destruction of the other one.
Imagine this stuff being used against your own character, for instance. I mean not to say it won't but that combined with the physical ability is a bit much.

The Spirit shouldn't have his combat ability, as in, he wouldn't be able to harm people with these claws. Unless that's specifically his skill to temporarily be in combat. In which case the first ability would have to go and the other would have to be temporary.

Alrighty, added some specifics and changes to help clarify (Since I'm terrible at conveying abilities xp)

 

Offed pestilence all together, didn't feel like it really fit him to begin with. I halved the duration on each curse, and added the specifics on how long he had to channel them without being interrupted, as well as being immobile when casting.

 

For the coup: Added a bit more detail on why (Lust for power), and the Spirit's ability From The Shadows allows him to enter and interact with the world for 2 minutes, explaining how he cut the rope. 


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Ff...

 

Brain refuses to work on this, so I'm forced to bow out. G'luck, folks.



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Ff...

 

Brain refuses to work on this, so I'm forced to bow out. G'luck, folks.

 

But Tayla!! D:


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http://forum.yugiohc...-2#entry6876337

 

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