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Mobile Suit Gundam: Broken Arrow [OOC/PG-16+/Started/Not Accepting]

- - - - - Mecha Animesque Action Drama Sci-Fi Post-Apocalyptic A Zai RP

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#1
BANZAI!!!!

BANZAI!!!!

    BOOOM!

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IC Thread

OP: Re:Make- One OK ROCK

ED: Hello, World- Bump of Chicken


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~A Zai Mecha Anime Roleplay~

~Hosted By: Zai, Keto~

~Logo by: Yui~

~Mechanical Designs by: Zai, Keto, a bunch of Japanese people~


Teaser


Rules & Information


Setting


Plot


Database


The Arrowhead



App Skeleton


Mechanical Encyclopedia

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Wind Rider

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I think im ready to give this another shot

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Asriel Dreemurr

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For formality's sake.



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Dad

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    Slip.

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I'm Dad, and I hereby authorize this rp to be awesome.  Also, interest, yada yada yada.  



#5
BANZAI!!!!

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We're good to go it seems. Expect a full OOC in the next week or two
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Chaos Sonic

Chaos Sonic

    Too many undeserving heroes...

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Same Mobile Suits and Gundam from the last OOC?



#7
BANZAI!!!!

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OOC is up and running, and we are now accepting apps. Mobile suits and database entries are forthcoming.


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Chaos Sonic

Chaos Sonic

    Too many undeserving heroes...

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Kenji Mizuno

 

GMS-1100 Duel Gundam


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Wind Rider

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Rose

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BANZAI!!!!

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Reyd



Arthur

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#11
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a bad post

    waste quartz 4 waifu

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Got room for one more?


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'Course we do
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Asriel Dreemurr

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Chief Engineer Kusanagi

 

Scrap Queen


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Makο

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Just a note: these guys are a holdover from a different RP that died, with edits being made to fit this RP. I have Zai's permission. Fight me.

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a bad post

    waste quartz 4 waifu

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Reveka Isozaki

 

Roche Isozaki

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Maeriberii Haan

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Selardi


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Yui

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I'd say this app went pretty well for only taking about two hours. Here's a janitor, because somebody has to keep the ship clean.

Man of Steel


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a coffee

a coffee

    i'm like a keurig for waifus

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Maxine Delphi


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Asriel Dreemurr

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Chaos Sonic, even though you're in the Skype chat I can't reach you there right now so I'm putting some issues with your app in this message.

 

Firstly, proofread Kenji's personality. The sentence "Kenji is one ecstatic and adventurous young man who is already to jump headfirst into any situation..." is not grammatically correct. I get what you were trying to say, but please correct it.

 

Secondly, there are issues with the Bio. The biggest one is that the bio doesn't explain where his Indominus came from. Did he find it somehow before joining the Arrowhead? Did he pick it up after he joined the crew? The next one is that, quite honestly, the Bio doesn't offer any explanation of where he got his skills from apart from the paint job thing. Did he pick up on how to fight hand-to-hand from fighting kids in his home town? Did his Uncle teach him how to shoot a pistol? Did someone on the Arrowhead teach him those things? I'd like to know. My last issue with his bio is that, well, we have no idea where he came from. Did he live on Earth? If so, how did his family survive the Colony Drops? Did he live on a colony somewhere? If so, whose sphere of influence was it in? I just wanna know where the kid came from.

 

So, until we get these issues resolved, Kenji is not accepted.



#20
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IC thread is up, and all of the above Apps are accepted. lezgoooooo


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