"Time" cards ideas

[Metalberserk]

http://imgur.com/a/BSYYj            I did not create the artwork !!!

 

http://imgur.com/a/Hskul

 

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http://imgur.com/a/2c2NL

 

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[Chaosix]

You need to post the card text under it!

anyways, Speed of light is a better upstart, as you are going to win the turn you use it anyways.

Ancient worm has horrible wording. and WAYYY to much defense. If it was level 11, it would be fine though. but still, going neg 1 is not very good, and lvl 5 just makes it even worse (with theseus and all)

I dont understand what wayfarer does.

Distant future is a bad idea is very broken. Also "u"

Remembrance is a very bad idea and is very broken (look at the banlist!)

The burning DIE of the moment (its called Die for a multiple of Dice) is very brick-y and has horrible wording (like all the cards)

these dont have a consistent theme, but i get the idea..... you really should make these thing a searcher or something, also read other cards for your wording and look at the banlist for card power.

[Dreko]

Speed Of Light: No comment.

 

Acient Worm: Bad Wording; Way too over powered. Each Stand By Phase they lose 500 Life Points? And a Level 6 has 5000 Defense?

 

Wayfarer: Once again, REALLY bad wording. And for a monster with 200 ATK and 500 DEF, its effect is pretty bad. I have no reason to summon this monster from my graveyard.

 

Distant Future: Bad Wording but understandable. Really bad effect though. Like it's utterly useless, because I don't think a duelist would have 7 tokens when they could run better spells and traps or even monsters instead.

 

Remembrance: Bad wording, Effect is too OP. Someone could run 3 of these in their deck, it'll save them in a pinch. 

 

Dice Card: The wording is fine. I don't have much to say here, probably too OP though.

[EpicBarnstyboy1]

I like the idea but, as previously mentioned, the wording is absolutely atrocious, and all the cards except speed of light have either a super op effect, a terrible effect not worth using, or have to much defense. Don't get me wrong, it is a good idea, but check out real cards to improve wording, and try to make your ATK and DEF and effect more appropriate to the card.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

While you did CnC this properly, do note that last post in this thread was made in late February (and if I remember correctly, TC left to pursue other projects or something). But anyway, thread got necro'd and chances are that your critique won't be seen.

 

(They do need work though, and was something that was addressed in other threads he made)

 

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