U.B(Ultra beasts) Cards , based from PKMN Sun/Moon

[pkmngomaster]

Hello i am pkmngomaster, and this is my first post, my cards are based in the ultra beasts and Legendary Pokemon of Sun/Moon

 

The cards can be used in a "D.D" deck

 

 

 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Just a note that there is a difference between D.D. and D/D. I will assume you mean the former, because D/D's have nothing to do with these.

 

Cosmog: OK, you can search out the Ultra cards when you evolve it or Synchro Summon with it or something. 

 

UB-01: You need to fix the effect here; Rank 4 but requires Level 5 monsters (also the thing with D/D and D.D). Effect is fine, but yeah. 

 

Lusamine: Really not seeing a Deck that can use this; at best, it prevents Raigeki and stuff from killing it, but there are other forms of removal nowadays. Also, D.D's are somewhat clunky nowadays and outside Macro Cosmos stuff, it's not going to get that powerful.

 

Ultra Space: Targeting protection is good, but until we get more UBs here, not much to say about it. Banishing effect works for powering up Lusamine, but that's it. 

 

Ultra Wormhole: At least you get back banished stuff, but requires a UB out and a 50% chance of being correct. You can probably keep it as not negating effects; this isn't like Return from the Different Dimension or anything of the sort. Last effect is only for making Cosmoem.

 

Cosmoem: Well, it's a really huge wall that can't be destroyed once per turn. Opponent will either need to force this into Attack or resort to targeting non-removal like Castel or other things. You can make this a semi-Nomi monster, because really, this card isn't doing anything else besides being a large wall. 

 

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Right, and this is your first post, so welcome. 

For future posts in this section, make sure you read the rules of Custom Cards. 

 

To start off, please post your card's effects underneath; it'll make it easier for us to clean up wording and stuff, plus we can read them more clearly. 

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http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D/D (This is an entirely different Archetype; do not confuse this with D.D.)

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D.D. (This is what you want)

[pkmngomaster]

Just a note that there is a difference between D.D. and D/D. I will assume you mean the former, because D/D's have nothing to do with these.

 

Cosmog: OK, you can search out the Ultra cards when you evolve it or Synchro Summon with it or something. 

 

UB-01: You need to fix the effect here; Rank 4 but requires Level 5 monsters (also the thing with D/D and D.D). Effect is fine, but yeah. 

 

Lusamine: Really not seeing a Deck that can use this; at best, it prevents Raigeki and stuff from killing it, but there are other forms of removal nowadays. Also, D.D's are somewhat clunky nowadays and outside Macro Cosmos stuff, it's not going to get that powerful.

 

Ultra Space: Targeting protection is good, but until we get more UBs here, not much to say about it. Banishing effect works for powering up Lusamine, but that's it. 

 

Ultra Wormhole: At least you get back banished stuff, but requires a UB out and a 50% chance of being correct. You can probably keep it as not negating effects; this isn't like Return from the Different Dimension or anything of the sort. Last effect is only for making Cosmoem.

 

Cosmoem: Well, it's a really huge wall that can't be destroyed once per turn. Opponent will either need to force this into Attack or resort to targeting non-removal like Castel or other things. You can make this a semi-Nomi monster, because really, this card isn't doing anything else besides being a large wall. 

 

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Right, and this is your first post, so welcome. 

For future posts in this section, make sure you read the rules of Custom Cards. 

 

To start off, please post your card's effects underneath; it'll make it easier for us to clean up wording and stuff, plus we can read them more clearly. 

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http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D/D (This is an entirely different Archetype; do not confuse this with D.D.)

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/D.D. (This is what you want)

Thank you very much for you suggestions, how can i correct the text of my cards please

[pkmngomaster]

Here is solgaleo it is a Synchro Monster that uses cosmog as a material a la Majestic Dragon

 

 

Solgaleo The Herald of the Sun
12 | LIGHT | BEAST | Effect Synchro

"Cosmog the child of the stars"+ 1 LIGHT Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Monsters.

Must be Synchro Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways

Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a card or effect is activated: You can negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it. When this card leaves the field: You can Special Summon up to 2 of you banished monsters

 

4500/4000

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

In the future, put the new cards in the main post so it's easier to see. Answering your other question, just copy/paste the effect text from what you put in the cardmaker; no need to type it out again. (There's a guide to writing card grammar in the Advanced forum)

 

Solgaleo is fine, though part of me thinks you could do more with it, considering the effort needed for it right now (but then we'd get an even more buffed Quasar Dragon that's stronger/easier to summon). So yeah, leave it as-is.