StoryTeller Posted March 23, 2017 Report Share Posted March 23, 2017 Swarm of PixiesLink/effectFairy, Light[Link 4]Bottom left, Down, Bottom right4 effect monsters with the same level/rank.3200AtkIf all cards Linked to this card have the same Level/Rank (min 2) this card gains 1000 ATK. At the end of the Damage Step, if a card linked to this card battles: You can discard 1 card; destroy your opponent's card. Once per turn, if an opponent's card is destroyed during the opponents Battle Phase: Add to your hand one Level 1 monster in your Graveyard, then reveal your entire hand; if all the revealed monsters (min 1) Levels are 1: Draw 1 card. Hello, i do this card while i am thinking, it was something like this: "Hmm... Links dont are affected by the level of the materials.... and lv1 decks can get some monsters easy... maybe... an lv1 link deck be broken... i will try do one link monster for lv1..."And that was the birth of Swarm of Pixies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryTeller Posted March 25, 2017 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2017 BumpWhy i never get reviews? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Nyx Avatar Posted March 25, 2017 Report Share Posted March 25, 2017 First effect: It's okay. I think 1000 would be enough though. Second effect: A neat Catastor-eske effect to make use of Link Zones. Though the following effect seems rather unnecessary and excessive. It's already capable of being a beatstick and destruction. I think benefiting from said destruction is unneeded. Maybe you could argue the Summoning requirements justify this, but even then, I think you could bring it down to 3 effect monsters witht the same Level/Rank. Also, our wording's off. I think it'd be: If all cards Linked to this card have the same Level/Rank (min 2) this card gains 1500 ATK. At the start of the Damage Step, if a card linked to this card battles: You can discard 1 card; destroy your opponent's card. Once per turn, if an opponent's card is destroyed during the Battle Phase: Add to your hand one Level 1 monster in your Graveyard, then reveal your entire hand; if all the revealed monsters (min 2) Levels are 1: Draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryTeller Posted March 28, 2017 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2017 Hello, thanks for your review, all things that you mention are okay, also, the change that you say are okay (exept link materials, i will keep it without changes) also, you remind me one eff that i didnt put, thanks! Change eff by the recommendation of Nyx, also base buff atk, and nerf searching eff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinkerer Posted March 28, 2017 Report Share Posted March 28, 2017 So, uh... How do you summon this card? It requires more monsters than its link number. Also, you forgot to put the type/Attribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryTeller Posted March 29, 2017 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2017 Srry, it was my fault, link monsters still confusing me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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