Jump to content

Photo

[Fanfiction] Arena 2: The Cursed Chain [ONE CHAPTER LEFT!]


  • Please log in to reply
26 replies to this topic

#21
Catterjune

Catterjune

    Amphoteric

  • Legendary Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 10,742 posts

Chapter 21: Victory Dance


MQRUFj8.jpg


#22
Catterjune

Catterjune

    Amphoteric

  • Legendary Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 10,742 posts

Chapter 22: Forty Nine


MQRUFj8.jpg


#23
Catterjune

Catterjune

    Amphoteric

  • Legendary Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 10,742 posts
Chapter 23: Something Nefarious

MQRUFj8.jpg


#24
Catterjune

Catterjune

    Amphoteric

  • Legendary Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 10,742 posts

Chapter 24: Children of Silvershine


MQRUFj8.jpg


#25
Catterjune

Catterjune

    Amphoteric

  • Legendary Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 10,742 posts

Chapter 25: The Aether Realm


MQRUFj8.jpg


#26
MewMew1989

MewMew1989

    Advanced Member

  • Advanced Members
  • PipPipPip
  • 172 posts

I haven't read many fanfics writ in first person, and it does have it's advantages, as I figured out when doing the same thing in my latest chapter. The writing feels more natural and casual and you better understand a person's character and motivations since you get straight into their head.

 

Hawthorne Academy is in the New England part of America? The name suggests so. If true, it's a nice tough with all the supernatural Gothic horror stuff going on. - It felt like that to me anyway. Please right more. :)  


Yugioh the Dark Dimension

 

Check out my new fanfic!


#27
Catterjune

Catterjune

    Amphoteric

  • Legendary Members
  • PipPipPipPipPipPipPip
  • 10,742 posts

Glad you like it. Sometimes it's a bit disheartening to write and not get any comments. Even if someone wrote "terrible, next?" I'd at least be able to start some sort of feedback from there.

 

Silvershine is, in my opinion, probably something like New York City, London, Tokyo, or some other major city like that. It's sort of meant to have an 'everywheres-ville' kinda vibe to it, like it could have happened anywhere in the world, or at least in any major city.

 

All that said, here's chapter 26:

 

Chapter 26: A Drop In the Bucket


MQRUFj8.jpg





1 user(s) are reading this topic

0 members, 0 guests, 0 anonymous users


    Google (1)