OtakuKaito Posted April 26, 2017 Report Share Posted April 26, 2017 Dragjem DiamondLevel 4 - Dragon/Type - WIND - Effect Effect: When you summon a "Dragjem" monster, special summon this card. If you do, your opponent cannot xyz summon until the end of their next turn. If you special summon a monster, except a "Dragjem" monster(s), take 1000 damage for each. Dragjem PearlLevel 4 - Dragon/Type - WIND - Effect - Atk: 1900 - Def: 1800Effect: Target 2 "Dragjem" monsters, increase their levels by 2. If this card is used as xyz material for the xyz summon of a "Dragjem" monster, it gains this effect:Detach 1 xyz material from this card, special summon 1 "Dragjem" monster from your graveyard.Dragjem ObsidianLevel 4 - Dragon/Type - WIND - Effect - Atk: 2000 - Def - 1900Effect: When this card is normal or flip summoned, target 2 "Dragjem" monster in your graveyard, except "Dragjem Obsidian", special summon it, if you do, pay 1300 LP for each. You can only use the effect of "Dragjem Obsidian" once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted April 26, 2017 Report Share Posted April 26, 2017 This thread was moved to Casual because you do not have the required explanation needed for Advanced. Additionally, you are missing the stats on Diamond; please fix that. But I'll review what you have:Diamond: Where are you Summoning this from? (This needs to be explicitly mentioned). I am also not a fan of this being a floodgate for Xyz Summons as a result, even if temporary. Remove this effect because it makes no sense for it to be here, especially on a lower Level.Pearl: OK, it's basically setting up for a Rank 6, but no Xyz exist for them yet. Obsidian: You don't PAY LP after a monster is summoned; change this one to "either lose LP" or "take damage"; the former roughly does the same thing. Also, it's again more Xyz spam, even if you are taking 2600 damage to do so. (Note about this card breaking the usual standards on Level 4s reaching the 2000 ATK threshold without a negative effect; you have to summon monsters and it burns you, but that's more of a beneficial thing.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.