cheewei27 Posted May 7, 2017 Report Share Posted May 7, 2017 Turtle need to upgrade its weapon!. Welcome to give commend / advice or feedback to this card. !! Level 7WATER / AQUAATK 1500 / DEF 3000Cannot be Normal Summon or Set, Must be Special Summon (from your hand) by tribute 1 "Catapult Turtle" you control. Once per turn, you can banish 1 monster from your field or graveyard: inflict damage to your opponent equal to either ATK or DEF (whichever is higher) of the Banished monster's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragobonita Posted May 7, 2017 Report Share Posted May 7, 2017 Turtle need to upgrade its weapon!. Welcome to give commend / advice or feedback to this card. !! Level 7WATER / AQUAATK 1500 / DEF 3000Cannot be Normal Summon or Set, Must be Special Summon (from your hand) by tribute 1 "Catapult Turtle" you control. Once per turn, you can banish 1 monster from your field or graveyard: inflict damage to your opponent equal to either ATK or DEF (whichever is higher) of the Banished monster's.From the writing, I'd change:"or" for "/", so: "Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set".past tense! "Must first be Special Summoned""tributing"Once per turn should end with ":" as it starts the chain.write "Graveyard" with capital letterAs the timing suggests, the payment (banishing of 1 monster) comes first, then comes the effect, so instead of using ":" here I'd use "then".the ending phrase is clear, but something about wording seems slightly off... Or I'm just being rue and paranoid. XDD With such strong effect (inflicting a direct damage), I'd probably lower one of the stats. As the monster seems to be defensive, maybe lower its ATK ever so slightly more...? Just a suggestion. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted May 7, 2017 Report Share Posted May 7, 2017 Thing is, Catapult Turtle isn't exactly worth a card slot in Decks nowadays due to its stats being "subpar" for current standards and the burn is iffy. It is a marked improvement though and would probably justify running OG Catapult for this. I think it should just burn for the ATK, since most monsters (at least nowadays) do have better ATK. (Also would still include Links as a valid burn source). Flavor-wise, this is supposedly 50% stronger than the original, hence the 15/30 stats (compared to 10/20). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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