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Shockburn, Knight's Captain of The Stormforth


Hi off soysauce

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This is just a card idea for an archetype of thunder monster that work off burn damage for example another card idea I had was a card that can special summon from the hand if you dealt 1000 or more damage with one card effect. I can't figure out how to add a picture, so ill just post the effect.

 
1 tuner + 1 more non-tuner monster
When this is special summoned deal damage to your opponent equal to the amount of cards in your hand × 400, then lower the attack of your opponents monsters by the amount of damage your opponent took from this cards effects until the end of the turn.

He's a lvl 8, thunder wind monster, ATK is 2750, DEF 1200

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There should be a button to add images on the same line as Bold, Italics and all those commands.

 

Anyways, I think the idea of the card is interesting but the burn effect going off on a special summon might be a bit much so I'd personally change it to trigger on a synchro summon (especially with the special summon gimmick you said another card in this archetype had). Depending on how the rest of the archetype looks like it might lead to easy OTKs or even FTKs.

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Thanks i for pointing out that the burn effect is easily triggered and for the synchro summoned idea.

 

There should be a button to add images on the same line as Bold, Italics and all those commands.

 

Anyways, I think the idea of the card is interesting but the burn effect going off on a special summon might be a bit much so I'd personally change it to trigger on a synchro summon (especially with the special summon gimmick you said another card in this archetype had). Depending on how the rest of the archetype looks like it might lead to easy OTKs or even FTKs.

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I know you're still new, so leaving you a heads-up for the future.

 

If thread hasn't been posted in for 2+ weeks, please don't post in it. (Well, in your case, you have 2 months but that's assuming you update it and all). Either condition is broken, so I have to lock it. 

 

Feel free to repost it though :)

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