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Spyre of the Wolves

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I'd love some feedback on this deck please. Any constructive Critisism is great

Monsters

Warrior Wing Eage- Lv 4, WIND, 1500/1500 Winged Beast/Effect
When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, you can add 1 "Winged Warrior" Monster from your deck to your hand. If this card is in your hand and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card, but it cannot attack or be used as Link or XYZ material during the turn you activate this effect. You can only use the effect of "Warrior Wing Eage" once per turn.

Warrior Wing Crayne
Lv 4, WIND, 1000/2000, Winged Beast/Effect
During either player's turn, you can discard this card (Quick Effect); all "Warrior Wing" monsters you control cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects until the end of this turn.

Warrior Wing Ole
Lv. 4, WIND, 1700/1100, Winged Beast/Effect
If this card is Special Summoned from your deck (Quick Effect); destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. This card cannot attack or be used as Link or XYZ material the turn you activate this effect.

Warrior Wing Gion
Lv. 4, WIND, 1400/1600, Winged Beast/Effect
If you control 2 or more "Warrior Wing" monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. This card gains 200 ATK for each "Warrior Wing" monster you control and in your GY.

Warrior Wing Rator
Lv. 6, WIND, 2500/2500 Winged Beast/Effect
If you control 1 "Warrior Wing" monster (and no other monsters)l you can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by Tributing 1 monster your opponent controls. This card gains 500 ATK for each 'Warrior Wing" monster you reveal in your hand. This card's battle position cannot be changed by an opponent's card effect while you control another "Warrior Wing" monster.

Warrior Wing Osrey
Lv. 6 WIND, 500/3000, Winged Beast/Effect
If you control "Warrior Wing Rator" and another face-up "Warrior Wing" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by Tributing 1 monster your opponent controls. This card gains 500 ATK for each 'Warrior Wing" monster in your GY. This card's battle position cannot be changed by an opponent's card effect while you control another "Warrior Wing" monster.

Warrior Wing Guardian
Lv. 10 WIND, 3000/3000, Winged Beast/Effect
If you control "Warrior Wing Rator", "Warrior Wing Osrey", and another face up "Warrior Wing" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand.) If this card is Special Summoned by it's own effect, destroy all cards your opponent controls.

Spells

Warrior Wing Sky
Continuous
When a "Warrior Wing" monster is Special Summoned, add 1 Level 4 or lower WIND-Attribute monster from your deck to your hand. You can only use the effect of "Warrior Wing Sky" once per turn.

Warrior Wing United
Continuous
All "Warrior Wing" monster gain 200 ATK for each "Warrior Wing" monster on the field.

Warrior Wing Barracks
Field
Each Winged Beast monster gains 100 ATK for each monster on the field. Once per turn, when a "Warrior Wing" monster is Special Summoned from the hand, you can Special Summon 1 "Warrior Wing" monster from your deck, but it cannot attack and returns to your hand during the End Phase.

Traps
Warrior Wing Strike
Normal Trap
During the turn you activate this card, all Level 4 or lower "Warrior Wing" monsters you control can and must make two attacks during the Battle Phase.

Warrior Wing Storm
Normal Trap
If you control a Level 4 "Warrior Wing" monster, destroy 2 cards your opponent controls, or remove from play 2 cards in your opponent's GY.

So tell me what you think and what I need to improve on!

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EpicBoss99

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You are correct, birds are awesome! I like what you did with this archetype a lot. It seems like a OTK-heavy deck that focuses on defeating your opponent as fast as you can.

In terms of Card Grammar, always capitalize the D on Deck. Here's what I have to say about the archetype itself:

 

Warrior Wings

 

And that's about it! Please remember that all of these words are my personal opinions, and if you want to you can take them for a grain of salt. I hope I helped and keep on making cards! :3



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Spyre of the Wolves

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No no, it's fine. I have a slight tendency to break my cards with hour knowing it (Barracks + Guardian, for example) so feedback to fix my cards is greatly appreciated. Also, I apologize for not having card art up, I posted on my phone, so I'll get the art up as soon as I find a computer.

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No no, it's fine. I have a slight tendency to break my cards with hour knowing it (Barracks + Guardian, for example) so feedback to fix my cards is greatly appreciated. Also, I apologize for not having card art up, I posted on my phone, so I'll get the art up as soon as I find a computer.

 

Not a problem at all, Spyre! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to see this archetype with art and the Archetypes that you do in the future! :)



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If you'd like, you can make some XYZ monsters for the archetype. All the names are bird names minus one letter (with the exceptions of crayne, which is an added y and Ole, which is owl minus the w + an e at the end.)

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If you'd like, you can make some XYZ monsters for the archetype. All the names are bird names minus one letter (with the exceptions of crayne, which is an added y and Ole, which is owl minus the w + an e at the end.)

 

I really do appreciate the offer, but I'll have to pass. I can help you with general ideas, but I don't want to intrude on what you're doing with your archetype. Keep up the good work, and I like what you did with the monster names! XD



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I fixed Guardian and the rest of the criticismed parts. Thanks a lot!




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