Apocolypse123 Posted August 14, 2017 Report Share Posted August 14, 2017 Monsters: Apocalypse, Lord of DestructionLevel 12Warrior/Ritual/EffectYou can Ritual Summon this card with Chaotic Blade, Underworld Helm and Cursed Armour. This card cannot be summoned by any other means. When summoned: You can take control of an enemy monster. This card cannot be destroyed by spell and trap effects8000/6500 Chaorupting ParasiteLevel 1Insect/EffectAt the start of the Damage Step, if this card is battling a monster: Target that other monster; equip this card to that target, and the battle step is ended. While equipped to a monster by this effect, you control the equipped monster. At the start of the Damage Step, if the equipped monster is battling a monster: You can equip this card to the other monster, the battle step is ended.0/0 Darvov MageLevel 4Spellcaster/XYZ/Effect3 level 4 monstersOnce every turn: You may summon a Warrior or Warrior-Beast monster from your deck or hand to the field. After 5 turns, the summoned monster is sent to the graveyard and an amount of Bloodied Tokens equal to the amount of levels the summoned monster had are brought in.3000/2750 Demon SoldierLevel 4Warrior/EffectWhen Summoned, special summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from your deck to the field. After you Special Summon the selected monster you may destroy this card to add 5 Bloodied Counters to the field.1750/1400 Legion of Darkness #1Level 1Warrior/EffectWhen this card is Summoned: Special Summon 1 "Legion of Darkness" Monster.1200/1200 Legion of Darkness #2Level 1Warrior/EffectWhen this card is Summoned: Special Summon 1 "Legion of Darkness" Monster.1200/1200 Legion of Darkness #3Level 1Warrior/EffectWhen this card is Summoned: Special Summon 1 "Legion of Darkness" Monster. Send any number of your monsters to your Graveyard.1200/1200 The 13th NecroLevel 4Spellcaster/XYZ/Effect2 Level 4 Warrior monstersOnce per turn: You may discard 1 overlay unit to stop a card from attacking permanently. When you activate this effect, this card cannot be destroyed by battle for 5 turns.2500/1000 Underworld PrinceLevel 8Warrior/XYZ/Effect2 Level 8 monstersYou may also Special Summon this card by discarding 13 Bloodied Counters. When Special Summoned this way it counts as if it had 2 overlay units.When summoned: Switch all enemy cards to Attack position.Detach 1 overlay unit to control an enemy level 5 or lower dark monster. This effect ends when this card is removed from the field.3000/3000 Spells: Armageddon WastelandField SpellAll Warrior and Warrior-Beast monsters gain 200 ATK points during either players battle calculation. Warrior and Warrior-Beasts monsters also gain 500 DEF points during opponent's turn. When Apocalypse, Lord of Destruction, is on the field, every Warrior and Warrior-Beast monsters gains 10% of their ATK on top of the previous buff. Blood WellContinuous SpellDuring your Standby Phase, place 1 Bloodied Counter on this card. If this card would leave the field, you can remove 1 Bloodied Counter from this card instead. When your opponent's monster declares an attack: You can remove 3 Bloodied Counter from this card; negate the attack. When a card is sent to either player's Graveyard add 2 Bloodied Counters to this card. You may discard an equal amount of counters to the level of a card to Special Summon it from your Hand or Graveyard. You may discard 3 Bloodied Counters to add a spell card to your Hand. When a card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of "Legion of Darkness #3" add 5 Bloodied Counters to this card. Chaorupted SpellQuickplay SpellAll enemy spell/trap cards are disabled for the next 2 rounds, regardless of their effects. Chaotic BladeRitual/Equip SpellIf Cursed Armour, Underworld Helm and Underworld Prince are on the field, you may Ritual Summon "Apocalypse, Lord of Destruction." You may equip this card to a monster, that monster gains 1000 ATK points during Battle Phase. Cursed ArmourRitual/Equip SpellIf Chaotic Blade, Underworld Helm and Underworld Prince are on the field, you may Ritual Summon "Apocalypse, Lord of Destruction." You may equip this card to a monster, that monster gains 1000 DEF points during Battle Phase. Underworld HelmIf Chaotic Blade, Cursed Armour and Underworld Prince are on the field, you may Ritual Summon "Apocalypse, Lord of Destruction." You may equip this card to a monster, that monster can attack twice during Battle Phase Traps:Continuous TrapTarget 1 monster your opponent controls. The targeted monster cannot attack, change its battle position except with a card effect, or activate its effects. If this card is destroyed, destroy the affected monster as well.Sealed Tomb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted August 14, 2017 Report Share Posted August 14, 2017 Apocalypse, Lord of Destruction What you are trying to do is not how Ritual Summons are done in this game (anime-wise, fine). That being said, no card in this game has an original ATK or DEF higher than 5000; why does this have 8000/6500? Change this to a much lower value; given what this card does; should not be higher than 2500-3000 (at the same time, the Level can be reduced). Chaorupting Parasite OK, we're stealing stuff from Dark Necrofear now? But that being said; does this card just end that particular battle or the Battle Phase in general. If it is the latter, then you need to tone it down. Last thing we need is a recyclable Negate Attack. Darvov Mage Stats need to be slightly reduced; at most, 2800 ATK and I guess 2300 DEF (if using Number 32 as the upper boundary). Also, I will assume you mean Beast-Warrior monster. I also need to mention how dangerous it is to summon ANY Warrior / Beast-Warrior from the hand/Deck; go look at Zoodiacs and stuff like Blue-Eyes. Also common sense stuff like "you cannot summon more than 5 Tokens" (this is not the anime where Seal of Orichalcos exists). If you're referring to adding Counters, then fine, but where are you putting them?Demon Soldier Again, you must be careful about giving Decks an omni-summon card; especially one that doesn't have a hard OPT on it. As it stands right now, you literally have a walking Link 3/4 enabler with triple copies alone. Restrict the summoning targets and place a hard OPT on it. Legions of Darkness Need to mention where you are summoning these monsters; also stats are too high for a Level 1 with no drawbacks. Either increase their Level or lower their ATK, and put a restriction on their summon effects.The 13th Necro You do not DISCARD Xyz Materials, you DETACH them. While the permanent attack sealing effect is passable, why are you giving it 5 turn battle immunity (and how does this even fit into a Warrior deck)? But then again, some of the targets you'd hit with this will likely be ED fodder later. Underworld Prince This is not the anime where you can treat used counters as legitimate Xyz Materials; the alternative plan would be to just have it attach 2 monsters in your GY (Graveyard) or hand as material if summoned by this effect. But to be fair, you should not be doing this kind of thing in the first place. Then again, this card's effect is a worse version of Number 11 (more/less) that also changes battle position. I also need to mention that Links / Xyz do not care about its effect due to having no Level to begin with. ====I'll review the Spell/Trap Cards at a later time, but when you post cards in this section, intentionally broken design is not acceptable. You must actually make an effort to balance them. Morever, you need to use terminology that actually exists in the card game. https://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/322020-ocgpsct-thread-writing-your-card-properly/(Use this, and learn how card effects are phrased.) In a nutshell, you have a lot of work to be done; including how an actual Ritual Summon works. ====I apologize if I am being harsh in this review, but you really need to balance out your stuff so they aren't busted and learn what kind of stuff exists right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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