Thunderstorm Chidori

[ABC Gun]

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3 Level 5 WIND monsters
You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 4 WIND Xyz Monster you control with 1 or fewer attached materials as material. (Transfer its materials to this card.) Cannot be targeted by an opponent's card effect while it has a WIND Xyz Monster attached as material. If your opponent Special Summons exactly 1 monster from their Extra Deck to the same column as this card (Quick Effect): You can detach 1 or 2 materials from this card, then return that monster to the Deck, and if you do; if you detached 2 materials to activate this effect; return 1 Spell/Trap your opponent controls in that column to the top or bottom of the Deck. You can only use this effect of "Thunderstorm Chidori" once per turn.
 
 
I think I speak for NOBODY when I say, we should've got a Lightning Chidori evolution way back during ZEXAL (or at some point during ARC-V). It is an evolution in every sense, it has a higher Rank and ATK/DEF, requires 3 materials instead of 2 to Xyz Summon unless you use a Rank 4 WIND Xyz Monster and on that note, while it has a WIND Xyz Monster as material, your opponent cannot target it with effects. Like its other version, it can bounce cards to the top or bottom of the Deck, but the differences are that; 1. it bounces WITHOUT targeting cards, 2. you can use the effect when your opponent Special Summons exactly 1 monster from their Extra Deck, and  3. ITS A QUICK EFFECT. The one tiny little thing is that, THIS CARD IS COLUMN PLAY so all the bouncing it does is completely dependent on the placement of your opponent's cards.
 
I only made this card because I was bored and its really rainy today so whatevs :: 

[Darj]

I don't support this card. Lightning Chidori is quite strong on its own already with its x2 removal that becomes a x3 if it survives the next turn. A card like this would only take it on an unfair, too-rewarding level when it doesn't really need it. Actually, I'm more concerned about summoning this from Castel than from Chidori; as if Castel deserved to be any better.

If you want an Xyz evolution for Chidori, Castel or any WIND Rank4, then it should be severely restricted. To make a comparison, Gaia Dragoons requires a Rank 5~6, its only effect is piercing, has 100 less ATK than this despite having a higher Rank, and it is still somewhat abused by Xyz-evolving it over Volcasaurus or Hieratic Atum to play around the no-attacking drawback. That should give you an idea of how overwhelming this card can get.

Water down this card's effects and ATK, like removing the Quick Effect perk and giving it a 1-turn effect stun when Xyz-evolved, make it only Summonable on a Xyz with no materials, and maybe only in Main Phase 2 for good measure; that way the Xyz has to survive after using its detachment effects first to evolve, and you have to wait 1 more turn to attack with this monster and use its effect; and even then, it would still be Summonable by using Castel as material in the same turn you Summon it, since it can detach its 2 materials at once...

[ABC Gun]

I don't support this card. Lightning Chidori is quite strong on its own already with its x2 removal that becomes a x3 if it survives the next turn. A card like this would only take it on an unfair, too-rewarding level when it doesn't really need it. Actually, I'm more concerned about summoning this from Castel than from Chidori; as if Castel deserved to be any better.

If you want an Xyz evolution for Chidori, Castel or any WIND Rank4, then it should be severely restricted. To make a comparison, Gaia Dragoons requires a Rank 5~6, its only effect is piercing, has 100 less ATK than this despite having a higher Rank, and it is still somewhat abused by Xyz-evolving it over Volcasaurus or Hieratic Atum to play around the no-attacking drawback. That should give you an idea of how overwhelming this card can get.

Water down this card's effects and ATK, like removing the Quick Effect perk and giving it a 1-turn effect stun when Xyz-evolved, make it only Summonable on a Xyz with no materials, and maybe only in Main Phase 2 for good measure; that way the Xyz has to survive after using its detachment effects first to evolve, and you have to wait 1 more turn to attack with this monster and use its effect; and even then, it would still be Summonable by using Castel as material in the same turn you Summon it, since it can detach its 2 materials at once...

 

Redid card, lowered ATK and DEF, changed Xyz Evolution condition to Rank 4 WIND with 1 material or none, and its activated effect bounces cards only if they are in the same column it is and if the opponent Special Summons 1 from the Extra Deck, this effect is also hard OPT.