Freedragon Posted August 19, 2017 Report Share Posted August 19, 2017 https://i.imgur.com/UorO7M3.jpg Card Name: Divine TabletCard Type: Field SpellCard Effect:Pay 1 Counter Special Summon 1 Divine Monster Card from your Graveyard.Tribute 3 Monster Cards you control, or Discard 1 Divine Monster Card to Activate the following Effect.Special Summon 1 lv 10 or lower Divine Monster Card from your deck Ignoring it's Summing Conditions,this is treated as a Tribute Summon. if you used Tributes place 3 Counters on this card. Its a field spell to help summon gods. New Cards Obelisk Decentspell/quick playEffectTribute 2 monsters to Activate this Effect.Destroy all Spell/Trap and Face Up Effect Monster(s) your opponent controls. Special Summon a Divine Beast from your Hand or Deck. Obelisk DescipleLV 4 LightFiend/EffectThis card counts as 2 Tributes.While this card is in your GY you can shuffle it into the Deck, to Negate a Spell/Trap Effect and destroy that card. (this is a quick-effect)Tribute 3 Disciple Cards you control to special summon from Hand,Deck or GY a Divine Beast this is treated as a Tribute Summon.ATK1600DEF400 Obelisk WrathTrapEffectTribute 2 monsters to activated this Effect.Destroy all Spell, Trap and Effect Monster(s) your opponent controls.Card Effects cannot be activated in response to this cards activation. Slifer's DecentSpell/Quick playEffectSpecial Summon 1 Divine Beast in face up ATK Position, then Draw 1 Card.If a Divine Beast is in your GY, banish this card draw 1 card and Special Summon a Divine Beast from the GY. Slifer's DiscipleLV 4 FirePyro/EffectTarget 1 monster you control,Shuffle this card from the Field or GY into your Deck.Draw 2 cards, and increase the selected monsters atk by 1000 for each card drawn this turn.ATK1000DEF1000 Slifer's FuryTrapEffectActivate only while you control Slifer The Sky Dragon.Your opponent Special Summons 3 Monsters from there hand or Deck in face up ATK position, with there effects negated.Draw one card for each card destroyed this turn. Mercenary'sTrapEffectPay half your life points; Special Summon 3 Monsters from your Deck. Then your opponent can pay life points equal to the amount you payed to take control of 1 of those monsters. Let me know if name ok and let me know if card is broken Thank You. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eshai Posted August 20, 2017 Report Share Posted August 20, 2017 There are a couple problems with the card:- For starters, we already have a Divine support Field Spell. "Mound of the Bound Creators." Helps a lot for those kinds of Decks.- Counters probably shouldn't be generic. Probably make them Divine Counter.- How the last bits confuse me a bit, but it seems interesting.- Your Official Card Grammar has a long way to go before being adequate, so I would definitely work on that. I made what I thought was a better version of the card that I thought would work a lot better with the included cards Divine TabletField - SpellEach time you Tribute a monster, gain 1 Divine Counter for each. Once per turn, you can remove Divine Counters from this card to activate 1 of the following effects:1: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your hand.2: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY. 3: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring its Summoning conditions.If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster on your field or in your hand instead. - Fixed the OCGrammar- Gave the Special Summon mechanic a bit more utility- Added a protection effect that also contributes to the Counters. <If anything is weird, it's because it's 1:30 am right now and I'm tired> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted August 20, 2017 Report Share Posted August 20, 2017 (To be fair, most new members don't have great card grammar (or knowledge of current existing cards / meta) either. Heck, when I joined a long time ago, I was in a similar situation.) That, and Mound is technically general Level 10+ with that last effect designed for the God cards, but...nitpick. I am going to assume the following apply for the effect, based on what I can decipher:First effect should be "Remove 1 Divine Counter from this card; Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY".Second one should be "Tribute 3 monsters you control OR discard 1 DIVINE monster; Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring Summoning conditions, then if you Tributed monsters, place 3 Divine Counters on this card. This is treated as a Tribute Summon."OCG probably is wrong on last part, but yeah; also some ruling issues that may need to be addressed concerning treating SSing as Tribute Summons, etc.I guess the first effect is fine if you need to revive Obelisk or something for game, but that's about it. Slifer is still hand dependent, and hell forbid Ra cannot be Special Summoned and ruined its entire thing in the anime/manga. Second one helps Ra not suck as bad due to that condition, but that's the only one who really cares about ignoring conditions; Slifer and Obelisk don't have this problem. Also skeptical of this being instant set-up for the Gods, but chances of you even having them in the GY when you summon another God is extremely low during most stages of the game. For the counter thing, I borrowed Eshai's idea and used Divine Counter as it thematically fits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freedragon Posted August 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2017 There are a couple problems with the card:- For starters, we already have a Divine support Field Spell. "Mound of the Bound Creators." Helps a lot for those kinds of Decks.- Counters probably shouldn't be generic. Probably make them Divine Counter.- How the last bits confuse me a bit, but it seems interesting.- Your Official Card Grammar has a long way to go before being adequate, so I would definitely work on that. I made what I thought was a better version of the card that I thought would work a lot better with the included cards Divine TabletField - SpellEach time you Tribute a monster, gain 1 Divine Counter for each. Once per turn, you can remove Divine Counters from this card to activate 1 of the following effects:1: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your hand.2: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY. 3: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring its Summoning conditions.If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster on your field or in your hand instead. - Fixed the OCGrammar- Gave the Special Summon mechanic a bit more utility- Added a protection effect that also contributes to the Counters. <If anything is weird, it's because it's 1:30 am right now and I'm tired>Thanks for pointing out the Grammer.Like Divine Counters sounds great.Divine-Beast would work better as i was using Divine Attribute.My focus was on Summoning the Gods without breaking the card.Needs LV 10 or Lower because of "The Creator God of Light, Horakhty" didnt want sac three win game lol.Know about "Mound of the Bound Creator",made it field spell so you could summon More then one god using Divine counter.Also allow for more strategies as Divine Counters are not supposed to be treated as normal summon.Then I "Thought Armored Hardened Dragon" triggered off this card not sure though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freedragon Posted August 20, 2017 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2017 There are a couple problems with the card:- For starters, we already have a Divine support Field Spell. "Mound of the Bound Creators." Helps a lot for those kinds of Decks.- Counters probably shouldn't be generic. Probably make them Divine Counter.- How the last bits confuse me a bit, but it seems interesting.- Your Official Card Grammar has a long way to go before being adequate, so I would definitely work on that. I made what I thought was a better version of the card that I thought would work a lot better with the included cards Divine TabletField - SpellEach time you Tribute a monster, gain 1 Divine Counter for each. Once per turn, you can remove Divine Counters from this card to activate 1 of the following effects:1: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your hand.2: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY. 3: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring its Summoning conditions.If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster on your field or in your hand instead. - Fixed the OCGrammar- Gave the Special Summon mechanic a bit more utility- Added a protection effect that also contributes to the Counters. <If anything is weird, it's because it's 1:30 am right now and I'm tired> (To be fair, most new members don't have great card grammar (or knowledge of current existing cards / meta) either. Heck, when I joined a long time ago, I was in a similar situation.) That, and Mound is technically general Level 10+ with that last effect designed for the God cards, but...nitpick. I am going to assume the following apply for the effect, based on what I can decipher:First effect should be "Remove 1 Divine Counter from this card; Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY".Second one should be "Tribute 3 monsters you control OR discard 1 DIVINE monster; Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring Summoning conditions, then if you Tributed monsters, place 3 Divine Counters on this card. This is treated as a Tribute Summon."OCG probably is wrong on last part, but yeah; also some ruling issues that may need to be addressed concerning treating SSing as Tribute Summons, etc.I guess the first effect is fine if you need to revive Obelisk or something for game, but that's about it. Slifer is still hand dependent, and hell forbid Ra cannot be Special Summoned and ruined its entire thing in the anime/manga. Second one helps Ra not suck as bad due to that condition, but that's the only one who really cares about ignoring conditions; Slifer and Obelisk don't have this problem. Also skeptical of this being instant set-up for the Gods, but chances of you even having them in the GY when you summon another God is extremely low during most stages of the game. For the counter thing, I borrowed Eshai's idea and used Divine Counter as it thematically fits. (To be fair, most new members don't have great card grammar (or knowledge of current existing cards / meta) either. Heck, when I joined a long time ago, I was in a similar situation.) That, and Mound is technically general Level 10+ with that last effect designed for the God cards, but...nitpick. I am going to assume the following apply for the effect, based on what I can decipher:First effect should be "Remove 1 Divine Counter from this card; Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY".Second one should be "Tribute 3 monsters you control OR discard 1 DIVINE monster; Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring Summoning conditions, then if you Tributed monsters, place 3 Divine Counters on this card. This is treated as a Tribute Summon."OCG probably is wrong on last part, but yeah; also some ruling issues that may need to be addressed concerning treating SSing as Tribute Summons, etc.I guess the first effect is fine if you need to revive Obelisk or something for game, but that's about it. Slifer is still hand dependent, and hell forbid Ra cannot be Special Summoned and ruined its entire thing in the anime/manga. Second one helps Ra not suck as bad due to that condition, but that's the only one who really cares about ignoring conditions; Slifer and Obelisk don't have this problem. Also skeptical of this being instant set-up for the Gods, but chances of you even having them in the GY when you summon another God is extremely low during most stages of the game. For the counter thing, I borrowed Eshai's idea and used Divine Counter as it thematically fits. There are a couple problems with the card:- For starters, we already have a Divine support Field Spell. "Mound of the Bound Creators." Helps a lot for those kinds of Decks.- Counters probably shouldn't be generic. Probably make them Divine Counter.- How the last bits confuse me a bit, but it seems interesting.- Your Official Card Grammar has a long way to go before being adequate, so I would definitely work on that. I made what I thought was a better version of the card that I thought would work a lot better with the included cards Divine TabletField - SpellEach time you Tribute a monster, gain 1 Divine Counter for each. Once per turn, you can remove Divine Counters from this card to activate 1 of the following effects:1: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your hand.2: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your GY. 3: Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast monster from your Deck, ignoring its Summoning conditions.If this card would be destroyed, you can Tribute 1 monster on your field or in your hand instead. - Fixed the OCGrammar- Gave the Special Summon mechanic a bit more utility- Added a protection effect that also contributes to the Counters. <If anything is weird, it's because it's 1:30 am right now and I'm tired>Updated Effect Remove 1 Divine Counter from this card, Special Summon 1 Divine-Beast from your GY.Tribute 3 Monsters you control, or Discard 1 Divine-Beast to Activate the following Effect.Special Summon 1 Divine Monster Card from your deck Ignoring it's Summing Conditions,this is treated as a Tribute Summon. if you used Tributes place 3 Divine Counters on this card. Let me know if this better.Thanks for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freedragon Posted August 23, 2017 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2017 New Cards Obelisk Decentspell/quick playEffectTribute 2 monsters to Activate this Effect.Destroy all Spell/Trap and Face Up Effect Monster(s) your opponent controls. Special Summon a Divine Beast from your Hand or Deck. Obelisk DescipleLV 4 LightFiend/EffectThis card counts as 2 Tributes.While this card is in your GY you can shuffle it into the Deck, to Negate a Spell/Trap Effect and destroy that card. (this is a quick-effect)Tribute 3 Disciple Cards you control to special summon from Hand,Deck or GY a Divine Beast this is treated as a Tribute Summon.ATK1600DEF400 Obelisk WrathTrapEffectTribute 2 monsters to activated this Effect.Destroy all Spell, Trap and Effect Monster(s) your opponent controls.Card Effects cannot be activated in response to this cards activation. Slifer's DecentSpell/Quick playEffectSpecial Summon 1 Divine Beast in face up ATK Position, then Draw 1 Card.If a Divine Beast is in your GY, banish this card draw 1 card and Special Summon a Divine Beast from the GY. Slifer's DiscipleLV 4 FirePyro/EffectTarget 1 monster you control,Shuffle this card from the Field or GY into your Deck.Draw 2 cards, and increase the selected monsters atk by 1000 for each card drawn this turn.ATK1000DEF1000 Slifer's FuryTrapEffectActivate only while you control Slifer The Sky Dragon.Your opponent Special Summons 3 Monsters from there hand or Deck in face up ATK position, with there effects negated.Draw one card for each card destroyed this turn. Mercenary'sTrapEffectPay half your life points; Special Summon 3 Monsters from your Deck. Then your opponent can pay life points equal to the amount you payed to take control of 1 of those monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted August 23, 2017 Report Share Posted August 23, 2017 In the future, please post any new cards in the opening post. Moving this to the Multiples area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Freedragon Posted August 23, 2017 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2017 In the future, please post any new cards in the opening post. Moving this to the Multiples area.k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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