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[spoiler=Monsters]

 

Crownstar Damaskian

DARK Aqua Level 4

1700/600

Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned: You can discard 1 card; send 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to your GY, and if you do, add 1 "Crownstar" card from your Deck to your hand. Each time a monster effect is activated, except "Crownstar Damaskian", inflict 100 damage to your opponent immediately after it resolves.

 

Crownstar Brocadrai

DARK Aqua Level 3

1400/1500

Effect: (Quick Effect): You can shuffle 1 "Crownstar" monster you control into your Deck, except "Crownstar Brocadrai"; Special Summon this card from the GY. Each time a card is sent to your opponent's GY, inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each card sent.

 

Crownstar Flannel

DARK Aqua Level 4

1500/300

Effect: If this card is sent from your hand or Deck to the GY by a "Crownstar" card effect: You can Special Summon this card. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Flannel" once per turn. If this card is shuffled into the Deck: You can send 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to the GY, except "Crownstar Flannel".

 

Crownstar Denima

DARK Aqua Level 2

700/1700

Effect: If you control only 1 "Crownstar" monster: You can send 1 random card from your opponent's hand to the GY and 1 other card in your hand to the GY to Special Summon this card from your hand. During your Main Phase: You can shuffle 1 "Crownstar" card you control into your Deck; draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Crownstar Denima" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Tartan

DARK Aqua Level 1

500/200

Effect: (Quick Effect): You can discard this card, then target 1 "Crownstar" monster you control; it gains 1000 ATK. If this card is shuffled into your Deck: You can Special Summon 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck, except "Crownstar Tartan", then it gains 1000 ATK. You can only use each effect of "Crownstar Tartan" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Baize

DARK Fiend Level 2

1000/600

Effect: (Quick Effect): You can send this card from your hand to the GY; shuffle up to 2 "Crownstar" monsters you control and/or in your GY into your Deck, except "Crownstar Baize", then send cards from the top of your opponent's Deck to the GY equal to the amount of monsters shuffled by this effect. If this card is shuffled into the Deck: You can add 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to your hand, except "Crownstar Baize". You can only use each effect of "Crownstar Baize" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Fustian

DARK Aqua Level 3

1600/1200

Effect: If your opponent takes damage from a "Crownstar" card (either by battle or card effect): You can Special Summon this card from your hand. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Fustian" once per turn. Each time a "Crownstar" card is shuffled into the Deck, inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each.

 

Crownstar Feltran

DARK Aqua Level 3

1000/1600

Effect: If this card is in your hand or GY (Quick Effect): You can shuffle 1 other "Crownstar" card from your hand into your Deck; Special Summon this card. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Feltran" twice per turn. Each time your opponent uses a card effect, inflict 100 damage to your opponent immediately after it resolves.

 

Crownstar Broacloth

DARK Aqua Level 1 Tuner

100/1800

Effect: If this card is in your GY: You can target 1 face-up "Crownstar" monster you control; return it to the hand, and if you do, Special Summon this card. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Broacloth" once per Duel. Each time you add a "Crownstar" card to your hand, inflict 100 damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

 

Crownstar Darkauditorium

Field Spell Card

Effect: When this card is activated: You can send 1 "Crownstar" monster from your hand to the GY; send 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to the GY. Once per turn: You can shuffle 1 "Crownstar" monster you control into your Deck, then target 1 card your opponent controls; your opponent cannot activate it or its effects, and your opponent must either shuffle it into their Deck or send it to the GY during the End Phase. Each time a "Crownstar" monster is sent to the GY, you can send it to your opponent's GY instead and inflict 100 damage to your opponent.

 

Crownstar Encore

Continuous Spell Card

Effect: You can activate "Crownstar" card effects in your opponent's GY as your card effects if they were originally in your possession. Once per turn, during your Battle Phase: You can shuffle 1 "Crownstar" monster you control into your Deck; immediately after this effect resolves, Normal Summon 1 "Crownstar" monster from your hand in addition to your Normal Summon/Set.

 

Crownstar Rehearsal

Normal Spell Card

Effect: Reveal any number of "Crownstar" cards in your hand; shuffle them into your Deck, and if you do, draw cards equal to the amount you shuffled +1. If you control 3 or more "Crownstar" monsters, while this card is in your GY: You can activate the above effect, and if you do, banish this card.

 

Crownstar Partnership

Normal Spell Card

Effect: Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; Special Summon, from your hand, 1 "Crownstar" monster with a Level equal to that target, then your opponent sends 1 monster with the same name as that target from their Deck to the GY. If this card is shuffled into the Deck by a "Crownstar" card: You can draw 1 card. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Partnership" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Soul Unity

Normal Spell Card

Effect: Reveal 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Extra Deck, then send from your Deck to the GY the monsters listed on that revealed monster; Special Summon that monster. (This is treated as an appropriate Summon from the Extra Deck.) You can banish this card from your GY; shuffle 1 "Crownstar" card in either player's GY into the Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card. You can only use each effect of "Crownstar Soul Unity" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Soulauditorium

Field Spell Card

Effect: When this card is activated: You can shuffle 1 "Crownstar" card in your GY into your Deck; add 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to your hand. Once per turn: You can target 1 random card in your opponent's hand; during the End Phase, your opponent either sends it to the GY and draws 1 card, or banishes it and draws 1 card. Each time a "Crownstar" monster you control inflicts battle damage or effect damage, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Traps]

 

Crownstar Appealism

Normal Trap Card

Effect: If a monster is sent to your opponent's GY: Send cards from the top of their Deck equal to the original Level that monster has in the GY. You can banish this card from your GY, then target 1 "Crownstar" monster in either player's GY; shuffle 1 "Crownstar" monster you control into your Deck, then Special Summon that target to your side of the field.

 

Crownstar Interview

Normal Trap Card

Effect: Target 1 "Crownstar" monster you control; it cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects this turn, also, shuffle it into your Deck at the end of the turn. If this card on the field is destroyed by a card effect: You can Special Summon 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Interview" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Debut

Normal Trap Card

Effect: If there are 5 or more "Crownstar" monsters in either player's GY: Shuffle all "Crownstar" monsters in each GY to their original owner's Deck, and if you do, send cards from the top of each player's Deck equal to the number of cards shuffled by this effect. You can banish this card from your GY; send the top 3 cards of each player's Deck to the GY, then you can Special Summon 1 "Crownstar" monster among them. You can only use each effect of "Crownstar Debut" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Idolization

Normal Trap Card

Effect: Send the top 5 cards of each player's Deck to the GY, and if you do, draw 1 card for each "Crownstar" monster you sent to the GY by this effect (max. 2). You can banish this card from your GY, then target 1 "Crownstar" monster you control; Special Summon, from either player's GY, 1 "Crownstar" monster with ATK equal to or less than the target, and if you do, shuffle that target into your Deck. You can only use each effect of "Crownstar Idolization" once per turn.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Extra Deck]

 

Crownstar Corduroy

DARK Aqua Link 3

2000

Link Markers: Down-Left, Down, Down-Right

Effect: 2+ "Crownstar" monsters

Gains 400 ATK for each "Crownstar" monster Linked to this card. Once, while this card is co-linked (Quick Effect): You can shuffle 1 card in your GY into your Deck; send 1 random card from your opponent's field to the GY. Each time a "Crownstar" monster inflicts battle damage, inflict 100 damage to your opponent.

 

Crownstar Vallure

DARK Aqua Link 3

2200

Link Markers: Left, Up, Right

Effect: 2+ "Crownstar" monsters

Once, while this card is co-linked (Quick Effect): You can shuffle 1 card in your hand into your Deck; send the top 3 cards of your opponent's Deck to the GY. If a "Crownstar" card is sent to either player's GY: You can add 1 "Crownstar" card with the same name from your Deck to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Vallure" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Batisteo

DARK Aqua Link 3

1700

Link Markers: Up, Up-Right, Right

Effect: 2+ "Crownstar" monsters

Once, while this card is co-linked (Quick Effect): You can shuffle 1 card you control into your Deck; Special Summon 1 "Crownstar" monster from either player's GY. If you Special Summon a "Crownstar" monster from your GY: You can send 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to the GY. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Batisteo" once per turn. Each time your opponent Summons a monster, inflict 100 damage to your opponent.

 

Crownstar Voilet

DARK Aqua Link 2

1400

Link Markers: Down-Left, Down

Effect: 2 "Crownstar" monsters

When this card is Link Summoned, while you have no cards in your hand and you control no cards in your Spell/Trap Card Zones: You can draw 2 cards, but you cannot add cards from your Deck to your hand for the rest of this turn. You can send 1 "Crownstar" card from your hand to the GY; Special Summon 1 "Crownstar" monster from your hand to the zone this card points to. You can only use this effect of "Crownstar Voilet" once per turn.

 

Crownstar Poprin

DARK Aqua Level 8 Fusion

2800/2000

Effect: "Crownstar Damaskian" + 1 "Crownstar" monster

Once per turn: You can shuffle 1 "Crownstar" card from your hand into your Deck; add 1 "Crownstar" monster from your Deck to your hand. Each time a monster effect is activated, inflict 200 damage to your opponent. Each time a "Crownstar" monster inflicts effect damage, except "Crownstar Poprin", inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

Crownstar Mulsin

DARK Aqua Level 8 Synchro

3000/1800

Effect: 1 "Crownstar" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

If this card is Synchro Summoned: You can add 1 "Crownstar" Spell/Trap from your Deck or GY to your hand. Each time you activate a "Crownstar" Spell/Trap, inflict 200 damage to your opponent. Each time "Crownstar Darkauditorium" inflicts damage to your opponent, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

Crownstar Chenill

DARK Aqua Rank 4 Xyz

2500/2300

Effect: 2 Level 4 "Crownstar" monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; discard 1 card, and if you do, draw 2 cards. You cannot activate monster effects the turn you activate this effect, except "Crownstar" monster effects. Each time you banish a "Crownstar" card, inflict 200 damage to your opponent.

 

 

 

 

This is the male version of Trickstars but they burn less damage. They like to spin their own cards and send the opponent's card to the GY. They even have the unique effect from their Spells to send their monsters to the opponent's GY and even activate their effects if they were originally the player's. Please provide some CnC.

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Crownstar Damaskian
DARK Aqua Level 4 1700/600

Oh gawd is this Trickstars? Please no. For starters, it’s a Foolish Burial AS A COST and a searcher. This is usually given some kind of cost, like discarding a card or two or being a gemini monster, but this doesn’t have that. The burn is also weird, and could probably be used in other Decks for FTKs, which doesn’t sound all that enjoyable.

Crownstar Brocadrai
DARK Aqua Level 3 1400/1500
So Quick Effect return to Deck to Special Summon. Basically it recycles/protects Damaskian after being targeted by a card effect and then you were still +1 to begin with. Burn isn’t too good or bad, but it’s kinda redundant considering your Deck doesn’t mill your opponent.

Crownstar Flannel
DARK Aqua Level 4 1500/300

So you can rather go +1 get target protection off of Brocadrai or just go +2 with a single card. Yeah that’s a bit broken. I do like the shuffle into Deck to activate effect though (considering I’m working on a prompt that’s similar at the moment) but other than that the card is WAY too generic to go unchanged.

 

Crownstar Denima
DARK Aqua Level 2 700/1700
Weird Special Summoning conditions is interesting, but you’re sending a card from your opponent’s hand to the GY AS A COST (anything before the semicolon “ ; “ on a effect cannot be activated in response to since anything from a colon to a semi colon is a cost) so that’s kinda BS. I would replace the semicolon “;” with “to” so that your opponent can respond to that part of the effect.

 

Crownstar Tartan
DARK Aqua Level 1 500/200

Hand Trap with the same shuffle into Deck mechanic. The effect is cool but I wish the effects were more of this variety, since that seems to be the only thing remotely resembling a mechanic gimmick, which is usually what gives a archetype the its identity.

Crownstar Darkauditorium
Field Spell Card

Archetype Dark Grephr with some pretty hefty removal. The fact it returns your cards to the Deck is definitely interesting but I still wish more of the Main Deck Monsters had related abilities. For example, one of them could’ve instead been able to return archetype cards from your hand to the Deck, and then you draw a card or search out another of them, and then on top of that they might have an effect which would get you something as a bonus.
 

Otherwise I might say that the removal effect is a little too good. I would lose the part where your opponent can’t react with it and the part that says they can send it to the GY.

 

There’s also the REALLY WEIRD last effect where you send Crownstars to your opponent’s GY, which doesn’t make much sense. I would be thinking about something like Madolche’s where they’re shuffled to the Deck instead.

 

Crownstar Encore
Continuous Spell Card
...oh. Why isn’t the first effect just on the Field Spell then? That just makes the cards useless without each other anyway. I still feel the “send to your opponent’s GY” isn’t exactly a good fit for this archetype (especially with the fact there’s not much advantage you can get from sending cards to your opponent’s GY other than Brocadai.

 

I like the other effect though, although I feel going -2 for no reason is a bit bad. Maybe just put this on a monster maybe, and then have an effect on it when it returns to the Deck so you can return itself to possibly get something else out of it.

 

Crownstar Appealism
Normal Trap Card

<I feel you had 2-3 ideas for the Deck, but they kinda conflict with each other, since 1 gimmick is giving your opponent your GY and shuffling cards back into your Deck. Unless you have a card that returns your opponent’s GY to the Deck it isn’t going to be alll that helpful>

 

It’s alright. Still find the “opponent’s GY” stuff a bit iffy but it’s a pretty solid effect.

 

Crownstar Interview
Normal Trap Card
TRIPLE FOOLISH??? Yeah I don’t think that’s necessary.

 

Extra Deck later

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