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[Written/DPR] Viewer From Beyond


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EARTH Fairy Rank 6 Xyz

1500/1500

Effect: 2+ Level 6 monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card using 2 monsters Summoned from the Extra Deck. (If you used any Xyz Monsters, transfer their materials to this card.) Once per turn: You can detach all materials from this card, then activate the following effects in sequence based on the number of materials detached.

·1+: Gains 500 ATK/DEF for each material detached.

·2+: You can draw 1 card.

·3+: You can target 1 monster in either player's GY; Special Summon it to your field.

·4+: You can Set all other cards on the field.

 

A good Rank 12 monster that has Upstart Goblin, Monster Reborn, and a massive field Set on legs. It can boost itself up to 4000 but it has no protection whatsoever. So best hope that nothing hits this.

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So instead of using Level 12 monsters, you can just use 2 monsters of any Level you Pendulum Summoned... to Summon a 4000 ATK beater and draw a card. While Nekomata would love this for his Paperplane archetype, Imma have to call for some adjustments:

 

  1. Half the Rank and make the requirements 2+ Level 6 monsters, not only for convenience but so Decks that have Level 6 monsters could potentially be used without using monsters Summoned from the Extra Deck. 
  2. Make the ATK/DEF 1500 rather than 3500, not only because of the absurdity of the "2 Pendulums = 4000 ATK" but also because of the new Level in mind.
  3. Make the "1+" increase the ATK/DEF of it for each monster detached rather than be just a single boost, so that having more materials is not only the focus but is rewarded for more rather than just using Pendulums. Pendulums get a 2500 ATK beater, while Decks that prefer Xyz and such can get even a 5000 ATK beater.
  4. Probably make it so you can use any number of monsters Special Summoned from the Extra Deck, but only make it so you can Summon "" this way once per turn similar to the Zoodiac Xyz Change clause. I'll get to this later.

 

With this the card should be more balanced. As for recommended changes go, I would better synergize the detaching effects with each other. I'm not sure of the 2+ and beyond effects since all they really do is give you generic high-Level rewards for using what could possibly be just what the Deck does. The question becomes what do you want the card to accomplish. I'd say its trying to be a generic boss monster for Decks that don't have as many ways of getting rid of their Xyz Monsters, since Xyz Monsters are probably the hardest monsters to get out of the Extra Monster Zone. 

 

Sample: 

 

Viewer from Beyond

EARTH - Rank 6 - Fairy/Xyz/Effect - 1500 ATK/1500 DEF

2+ Level 6 monsters

Once per turn, you can also Xyz Summon "Viewer from Beyond" by using any number of monsters Special Summoned from the Extra Deck as Xyz Materials. (If you used any Xyz Monsters, any Xyz Materials attached to them also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Once per turn: You can detach all Xyz Materials from this card, then activate the following effects, in sequence, based on the number of Xyz Materials detached.

● 1+: Gains 500 ATK/DEF for each Xyz Material you detached from this card.

● 2+: If this card is in an Extra Monster Zone: You can move it to your Main Monster Zone.

● 3+: 4+: (I personally think you should go for just a 3, or even skip 3 and 4 for a 5 effect to further diversify how the card plays)

 

Also corrected some Official Card Grammar, like the Xyz Materials from Xyz Monsters is different if you can also include non-Xyz Monsters (see Zoodiac Xyz Monsters)

 

Hope this helped. Any thoughts or more improvements you think could be done to the card?

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